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Posted: 12 July 2012 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anurna

Oh my god!! Kya awesome update likha hai. Superb work. Wow mujhe lag hi nahi raha tha ki padh rahi hu lag raha tha ki dekh rahi hu sabkuch. Aur u explained pakora and lassi such a way that mujhe bhukh lag gayi. Eagerly waiting for next.

thanks anurna, i never quite interacted much on india-forums till i found out dimple was being replaced and decided to make a difference, but guess all our efforts didn't pay off :(

anyway, now thinking of how to write the 'first night' in a romantic way. gotta choose the perfect song for it too! maybe later i'll add some pictures too if my story develops further

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Posted: 12 July 2012 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Anurna, sorry to sound ignorant, but what does OS mean?

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Posted: 12 July 2012 at 10:04am | IP Logged
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hirie Goldie
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Posted: 12 July 2012 at 10:16am | IP Logged
sabse pahale to mera naam archana hai(can call archu) and OS means one shot. Story jo kuch hi ya phir ek hi update me end ho sakati hai. Koi bhi single concept ko likh sakate hai. Short story like.

oh ok, thanks Archu for the info :)
Hiri


Edited by hiri_piri - 12 July 2012 at 10:16am

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Posted: 12 July 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Smilei jus got to say one thng..!!!!!! Its absolutely awesome...!!!!!! Smilekaash AM ke Cvs ke dimaag mein ye sab ataa...instead f tat replacemnt thng..!!!!! arggghhh Angry

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Posted: 12 July 2012 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by richa.amonkar

Smilei jus got to say one thng..!!!!!! Its absolutely awesome...!!!!!! Smilekaash AM ke Cvs ke dimaag mein ye sab ataa...instead f tat replacemnt thng..!!!!! arggghhh Angry

thanks richa, will post another update shortly, hopefully before i hit the bed tonight :)

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Posted: 12 July 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
k ko0l...!!!!! m waiting,..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Tongue Smile LOL
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Posted: 12 July 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
 
hiri... awesome update yaa...just too good...ClapSmile
 
it was like, as if I was watching an episode of AM... watching Navi and Dimple after a long time...
 
the prayers in the gurudwara was so touching ...just wish the Cvs had heard our requests and not separated them...Ouch
 
the entire story pulsates with their sincere innocent love for each other... as if their heart just beats for each other... amazing narration ...
 
Nimrit is nervous about the night and Agam wants Nimrit to be with him tonight..Embarrassed looking forward to the next update...Day Dreaming
 

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