RaYa OS- I Lost My Life! - Page 2 | Bade Acche Laggte Hai

jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

It's gud dear, but end is too sad, both craving for their love for each other so y not return their love to them, 5yrs are too long.

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Karamjit kaur Sekhon

@karamsekhon

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Posted: 11 years ago

👏 👏 👏 👏

its awesome please continue

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Siacutie

@Siacutie

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

beautiful ,mayu plz continue soon

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Suman

@_CandyCream_

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww.. Beautiful OS Mayu! 😊
Pls try to continue it (happy ending plz!)..

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Mani

@Mani-RK

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Posted: 11 years ago

its nice mayu n try to cont next part

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love4raya

@love4raya

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Posted: 11 years ago

omg!! mayu short and sweet..bt emtnl..loved it.. :)

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice 👏
plz continue soon

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IndYa4u

@IndYa4u

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

Mayuu - Nicely done. Priya's emotions and anger was beautifully described.

I hope you turn this into a FF. Now i am curious as to what Priya does next.

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