Intezar AR SS (Prt.13-Pg12) 1/4/2015

Posted: 11 years ago
 Mujhe pta hai aap log mujhe pagal kahoge serioulsy mera koi irada nahin tha aapko torture karne kaa with one of my new ff but what to do aaj merii jaan Shilpa kaa birthday hai tou bas mujhe ose suprise denaa hai aur yeh ooska surprise mai ooski favorite story fir se shuru kar rahii hun joo maine complete nahin karii this kyonki yeh ooski favorite hai isiliyye love to start it again will surely complete this time for her sorry friends aapko pareshan karne koo sorry pakka time se update karungi iss bara ur adhoorra bhi anhin chodungi i promise


Happy Birthday Shilpa
This One Is Especially for You
One Again Happy Birthday


Prologue

''maine apsee kahaa na maa, main shaadi nai karna chahti''a girl said to her mom

''par riddhima mere bache tuu 24 ki ho gayyi hai aur ab tujhe settel ho jaana chahiye''samriti said

''nai mom mujhe nai karni shaadi bas''riddhima replied angrily

''par riddhima kya kaaran hai mujhe bta?beta agr koi hai tou bta hum terii shaadi oosii se karayenge.dekhh aab anjali ki bhi 2 mahine me shaadi ho jaayegi''samriti says

''nahin maa please aagar apkoo yehii bat karni hai to mai phone rakhti hun,give regards to papa and dii and atul jij,bye mom''

and she hungs up.

 

Aab mai kaise bataon merii zindagii meiin meree armaan kee ilava kabhie koi nai aa sakta chahe mujhe ooska saari zindagi hii intejar kyoon naa karna padee.main apnii aakhri saans tak bas ooski hun ooski rahoongi.

              

                                   

Edited by desir - 9 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
                                         Intezar AR Short Story 
                      

                                                Part 1
Riddhima is in hospital when her phone again start ringing and she saw her papa calling
ri:''hii papa how r u?''
sh:''mai achaa hun betaa aap kaise ho?''
ri:''mai bhi theek hun papa''
sh:''beta riddhima apkii maa kuchh keh rai thi ki aap shaadi nai karna chahte''
ri:''papa please mujhe is vaare me koi bat nai karni hai''
sh:''ok beta hum is vaare me koi bat nahin karenge I promise beta,par beta aap Mumbai kab aa rahee ho apkii dii ki shaadi hai beta''
ri:''papa mai shaadi tak aa jaaongi''
sh:''riddhima bache aap Mumbai transfer lee rahee ho''
ri:''par papa merii''
but shashank did not let her finish and he says
sh:''nahin bete aap apnii baaki kii internship yahin complete karenge,maine apkii bat maani naa ki apkoo shaadi nai karni tou mat kijiye.and i promise is vaare me apsee koi bhi bat nai karega.par bache anjii ki shaadi ho jayyegi mai aur samriti tou akele reh jaayenge naa tou please bache aap aao naa we really miss u''
ri:''ok papa mai ek-do din me dr.parsad se bat karke ati hun''
sh:''no need betaa maine bat kar li hai bas aap apnii packing kar lo''
(He is Sanjeevani's dean so gets easily advantages)
ri:''ok papa bye'' 
and she hungs the phone.
ri''ab tou meraa bachne kaa koi raasta nahin hai,ghr jakar fir vahii shadi ka naara shuru ho jaayega.par yeh bat bhi ootni hi sachh hai ki mai sirff apnee armaan kii hun aur humesha ooski rahoongi.

                                                       Part 2

Riddhima reached mumbai and she met her parents and sister who come there to receive her
ri:''hey di kaise ho?
an:''dii ki bachi ab yad ayi hai merii ''
ri:''sorry di i am sorry''
anjii looked at her sister's cute innocent face and melted at once
an:''ohh ridzi i missed u so much''
ri:''me too di''
and they hugged each-other tightly 
an:''aab tou tuu hamare saath hii internship karegi naa,sanjeevani meiin chal aab tuu so jaa thak gayyi hogii. mai tujhe kal baaki sabse milvati hun''
ri:''theek hai di''
Next day sanjeevani
ri:''yahan aa tou gayyi hun par rahungi kaise vaahan tou har konee meiin meree armaan kii yaadein thi par yahan?''
an:''chl ridzi andar chl atul meraa waiy kar rahaa hogaa''
ri:''oh abhie se jij ki itnii chinta''
an:''tu bhi na ridzi chl''
( ridzi did not met atul as she is in delhi)
Locker rooom
an:''hey guyss kya chl rahaa hai?''
mu:''kch nai anjii is khote ne subhh hi meraa mood kharab kar diyya''
ra:''to tunee meree locker ko haath kyoon lagaya''
ri:''rahul''
ra:''ridzi''
and they bth hug eachother
mu:''oye khote tuu meree saamne hii kissi aur se aur kaunn hai ye bta mujhe''
(she caught his collar and)
ri:''aisaa kuchh nai jaisa aap samajh rai hai''
ra:''han muskaan ye riddhima hai''
mu:''han to mai kya karon''
an:''muski yar chill yeh riddhima hai merii choti behen aur ye aisii nai hai.tu chinta mat kar par ridzi tu rahul ko kaise jaanti hai han''
ri:''dii hum donoo ek hi college meiin the and muskaan aap please kch bhi galat mat sochiye''
mu:''oye yar mai tou naa is gadhe ki taang kheench rai thi and i completely trust him''
at:''oye koi mujhe tou merii saali se milvao''
ri:''oopss sorry jij hii riddhima''
at:''hii par mai tumhe ridzz kahunga''
ri:''done jij''
an:''aab agr jeeja-saali ki baatein khatam ho gayyi hon tou chalein nahin tou dr.kirti humee mar dengi''
all:''yes''
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p:''2 dinn bad tumhara janamdin hai par mai tumhe nai mill paonga par merii yehii dua hai ki meree hisse kii khushiyan bhi tumhe mil jayen''


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                                             Part 3

Lunch time sanjeevani
Riddhima becomes friends with everyone
ri:''yar tum sab log bahut achee ho, mujhe lagaa hi nahin yeh meraa pehlaa din hai''
at:''obv after all hum hai hi aisee''
mu:''par tum abhie is group ki jaaan se nai milii''
ri:''kaunn hai vo''
mu:''hero abhie to intern confrence attend karne gayya hai singapore,hamari tarah hi intern hai aur ooska nam hai a''
but lunch timee is over and all of them left.
Next morning gupta mansion and
ri:''that's it maa mai abhie vaapis chali jaongi aagar apnee is vaare me fir bat ki tou''
sm:''riddhima aaj tujhe mujhe terii shaadi naa karne kaa reason btana hogaa''
ri:''bas maa aagar apnee is vaare me aur bat kii naa tou aap meraa maraa muh dekhngi''
and she leftt from there leaving shocked samriti behind.
In hospital interns
an:''please ridzi tujhe merii kasam bta mujhe bat kya hai,tujhe merii kasam''
ri:''dii mai kissi kaa intejar kar rahii hun aagar merii zindagi meiin ooska saath likha hai tou mai ooski hokar rahongi,nahin tou ooski yaaadein meree jeene ke liyye kaafi hai,par mai donoo hii haalaton meiin ooskii rahongi''
ra:''ridzi''
ri:''han rahul han''
mu:''please humein khull ke bta kya bat hai ridzi''
ri:''di 6 sal pehle jab hum medical college meiin gayye the aur mai Delhi dadii ke pas thi aur aap sab yahan mumbai meiin tou college meiin mujhe pehli var milla tha vo aur pehli hii mulakat me hamara jhagra ho gaaya tha,par fir hum dostt ban gayye kyonki apkoo to pta hai kii mai logon se kitna kam bat karti hun.par oosne meraa confidence bhadhaya.pta hai di dheere-dheere hum bahut ghehre dostt ban gayye aur aagar oos se ek din bhi mulakat nahin hotii tou mujhe lagtaa kii merii zindagi meiin kuchh bacha hii naa ho,mujhe pta tha kii hum dosti se kahin age hi bdh gayye hai par humein iskaa ehsaas hi nai tha aur vaise bhi ose tou college ka handsome dude kehte the jis par sab ladkiyan fidaa fir vo mujhse kaise?par yeh dill bhi naa dii ajeeb hotaa hai hamesha aisii kissi cheej ki jid karta hai jo shayad humee naa hii mille?fir di bas ek letter jisne meree intejar ka safar shuru kiyya jo aab tak chall rahaa hai''
an:''ridzi please poori bat bta''
ri:''dii voo college ka aakhri din humari farewell party thi,aab tak maine ose kahaa hi nai tha ki mai ose pyaar karti hun aur vo hi meraa jeevan-saathi hai, par mai ose os din har halat meiin btana chahti thi jis se chahe vo mujhe apnaye ya naa apnaye kam se kam mujhe is bat ki tasali to hogii ki maine apnee dill ka hal ose btaya.bahut hi himmat ke bad mai ooske pas pahunchi.ose dekha to manoo merii juban par taala hi lag gayya ho.ooski badii-badii blue eyes meiin aanson the.oosne mujhe kuchh thamaya aur chalaa gayya aur vo ekk letter tha''
And riddhima handled anjali a piece of paeper after taking it from her book it was old piece of paper and has tears stains
Anjli start reading
My Dear Riddhima
Mai tumse bahut der se ek bat kehna chahta hun par kabhie keh hii nahin payaa,par agr aaj nahin kahaa tou shyad kabhie mauka hi naa mille mai tumse bahut pyaar karta hun,I Love U a lot.tumhare binaa jee to nai paonga par koshish karinga kyonki mujhe pta hai ki Shashank Sir mujhe kabhie nai apnayge,after all mai hun hi aisaa tattos,bike-racing,street-fighting,image kharab hai na sir ke saamne.aur tum sir ke against kabhie nahin jaogi aur yakeen manoo riddhima mai chahta bhi nahin tum aisaa karoo, kyonki apnee swarth ke liyye mai tum tumhari family se dur nai karna chahta.par zindagi me ekk hi dua hai ki marne se pehle tumhe mill paonn par tab tak tumhari shaadi ho jayegi.aur mai yehii dua karta hun ki vo tumhe mujhse bhi jyada pyaar karee''
Hamesha Tumhara Armaan
And then riddhima continues and
Ri:''ise pad kar mai jaldi se o.t ki taraf gayyi mujhe pta tha ki vo vahin hogaa aur ose dekhh kar mai oskee galee lag gayyi aur ek pal ko oosne bhi mujhe nahin rooka,humne par fir vo vahan se chala gayya apnii aankhon me aanson liyye'' 
 
par mai bol padii ki"armaan chahe tum chale jao par mai hamesha tumhari hi hun aur tumhari hi rahoongi aagar kabhie tumhari naa hui toi kabhie kissi ki bhi naa ho paongi,yeh vaada hai tumhari riddhima ka tumse apnee aap se aur is duniya se''

                                                     Part 4

''Bas dii yehii hai merii kahani meraa sach.'' Riddhima completed with lots of tears in her voice and anjali handles her back letter and she placed safely in her book once again
an:''par ridzi kya vo abhie bhi teraa hogaa?''
ri:''han di mujhe poora vishwas hai ek din vo jarror lautega,aur merii yeh aas tab tak hai jab tak hai mai zinda hun''
mu:''par ridzi kya vo abhie bhi tujhse pyaar karta hogaa?''
ri:''pta nahin muskaan par mai ose apnee dilon jaaan se chahti hun meree liyye yehii bahut hai''
at:''par ridzi kya ek aisee insaan ka Intejar karna sahii hai jiske saath teraa koi rishta hi nai hai''
ri:''han jij kyonki mai ose apnaa jeevan-saathi man chuki hun,kya yeh bahut nahin hai ooska Intejar karne ko?''
an:''par ridzi tujhe''
ri:''nai dii meree liyye bas meraa armaan hai aur vohii rahega''
ra:''hum samjhta hai ridzi yar''
and riddhima leaves from there
an:''rahul tumne humein bat kyonn nahin karne di?''
ra:''yar''
mu:''yar hum log kch bhull nai rahee tattos,bike-racing,street-fighting''
at:''Delhi''
an:''sirff tumhara armaan''
mu:''kahin ye apnaa hero armaan to nahin bol rahul''
ra:''han tumne sab kch sahii jagah fix kiyya hai,Delhi Medical College armaan ,popular armaan,racer, street-fighter , cool-dude armaan,riddhima ka armaan,Armaan Mallik hii hai''
an:''par rahul armaan bhi ridzi se abhie bhi pyaar karta hai?''
ra:''han anjii but sirff shashank sir ke kaaran,vo riddhima ko oonse dur nai karna chahta''
(initially no one knows tht anjali is shashank's daughter but ,not  even armaan)
ra:''ek minute iskaa matlab tum bhi shashank sir ki betii ho anjii?batao na yar''
an:''han rahul but u knw naa dad mai nahin chahta ki koi tumhe dean ki betii honee ke kaaran alg se treat karen.but vo sab bad me pehle armaan ke vaare me batao?''
ra:''han yar armaan bhi ridzi se bahut pyaar karta hai.tumhe pta hai na 2 din bad kya hai?''
an:''han ridzi ka birthday haina''
ra:''han tumhe pta hai ki armaan is din hospital kyoon nahin ata''
at:''kya pta yar jab bhi 30th may ko koi plan banao vo kabhie nahin ata aur 2 mahine pehle hi oos din ki chutti ke liyye leave detaa hai''
ra:''han vo iss din pehle bacho ke saath kch timee bitata hai kyonki ridzz''
an:''ko bache bahut pasand hai''
ra:''aur baaki time bas vo aur ridzi ki yaadein''
an:''aab mai apnii behen aur apnee best friend ko milva ke rahungi,tum sab meree saath ho?''
mu&at:''han anjii''
ra:''par armaan nai manega shashank sir ke against jaakar kabhie bhi nai''
an:''do not worry about dad oonhein mai sambhal loongi.pehle jaake ridzi ko btaye ki ooska armaan yehii hai aur kal aaa rahaa hai aur abhi-nikki ko bhi bta do''
all:''yes now mission armaan-riddhima milao donee''


                                                      Part 5

an:"humein tujhse kch bat karni hai ridzi''
before anyone can say anything riddhima saw nikita and she ran to her and hug her
ri:''kaisi hai nikki''
ni:''mai theek hun ridzi tu kaisi hai?''
ri:''theek hun yar achaa nikki vo armaan kaisa hai?''
ni:''kyoon tu oas se touch meiin nahin hai?''
ri:''nai maine socha vo teraa best friend hai tou tujhse pooch lun kaafi der ho gayyi hai naa sabse mille hue,is liyye i thought tu tou touch meiin hogii hii''
She tried covering up but to her surprise instead of nikki her dii answered her questions
an:''ridzi sirff nikki hi nahin hum bhi armaan ke dost hai yar vo mera best friend''
mu:''mera hero''
at:''mera bhai''
ab:''aur meree liyye vo ammy''
ri:''matlab armaan yahin hai,nahin aap aisee hi bol rahee hai ''
She did not believe them more she did not believe over her fate
ni:''yar ridzi yeh dekhh armaan ka locker''
and riddhima saw one locker and name plate says armaan ,she is surprised and she caressed his name with her hand and tears were bremming in her eyes too
ni:''areyy yar yeh tou khula hai''
an:''han armaan tou apnaa locker kabhie khula nai chodta,may be bhull gayya ho''
at:''strange'' 
and they found
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ni:''aab tou vishwas ho gayya naa''
She asked riddhima
ri:''dii please btayiye meraa armaan kahan hai?''
She asked impatiently looking at her dii with hope of finding her Armaan
an:''vo Singapore gayya hai kal aayega''
ra:''par ose koi ridzi ke vaare me nai btayega it's surprise for him ok''
all:''ok''
At night
an:''ridzi armaan aur dad ke beech meiin kya hua?i mean he is such a sweet heart''
She asked from riddhima as she wants to know why shashank hates armaan so that she can help them in future
ri:''dii apkoo pata hai ki dad month meiin ekk class humari bhi letee the Delhi meiin dii''
Anjii nods in assent and riddhima continued while seeing her nod
ri:''tou dad kii jis din class thi oos din armaan koo der hoo gayyi thi,as he was saving a couple ,they met with an accident and seeing his taatos and all tht papa thinks he is an irresponsible and spoil person though he is the topper but u know papa naa?''
She narrated anjie the incident which takes place in university years ago and anjali nods understanding her while replying that
an:''han ek var ek opinion de den to its not possible to change his opinion i know its dad ''
She said agreeing with her knowing her dad well
ri:''hmm'
Two days later
It was Riddhima's birthday and gang planned to re-unite AR on this day only
mu:''oye rahul hum armaan ko vahan bulaynge kaise ''
an:''han vo kabhie 30th may ko kahin nahin jaata''
They asked from rahul as they knows armaan did not go anywhere on 30th of May as it's his riddhima's birthday he was always with kids and her memories
ra:''armaan ko bas ekk cheej bula sakti hai his patients naa''
Rahul suggested and
at:''han rahul sahii keh rahaa hai matlab hum armaan se jhhoth bolenge''
Atul asked while understanding his plan and rahul nods in agreement
ab:''great idea yar rahul aur vaise bhi Armaan-Riddhima kee liyye aab yehii karna padega humein dono ko milana hai achee kam kee liyye jhooth bhi chalta hai''
Abhie said with a smile on his face and everyone agreed with the plan.


                                                        Part 6
ra:''armaan agr emergency na hotii to mai tujhe nai bulata yar, please sorry''
Rahul called armaan
ar:''nahin yar mai ata hun''
Armaan replied and
ra:''ok''
Rahul hung up the phone while saying to others
ra:''kam ho gayya guyss vo aa rahaa hai bas aabhi'' 
And everyone hi-fived with asmile and then waited for armaan and after sometime armaan is standing before Blue Paradise Restaurant where rahul called him and seeing rahul he asked
ar:''rahul kahan hai vo accident case''
When he did not saw anyone there
an:''btate hai armaan''
ar:''samajh gayya tum sab ne mujhe yahan aisee hi bulaya hai aur rahul tu bhi tujhe tou sab pta hai nai fir bhi tuu aur nikki tuu bhi in sab ke saath mil gayyi,inhein tou kch pta nahin par tum donoo tou sab jaante ho naa''
Armaan asked with hurt voice feeling his friends cheated him and giving them a painful look and he start leaving when he heared the voice that he stopped in his tracks
ri:''Asmaani Rang Hun,Asmaani Rang Hun,
                      Pyaar ki boond hun,
                       Roshni ka aang hun,
                       Mai terii dhupp hun,
                 Saaya teraa meraa aashiyan,
                        Tuu meraa armaan hai
                       Tuu meraa armaan hai''
and armaan turns hearing the voice and saw the love of her life was standing in front of him
ri:''armaan pechana mujhe,tumhari thodi si jhali,thodi si paagal, tumhari riddhima''
And she fells on her knees while crying her heart out seeing him in front of her eyes after so many years
ar:''riddhima tum yahan''
And  armaan just says this and then they both hug each-other tightly no words were required that time and
ri:''armaan tum kaise ho armaan''
ar:''ekk var fir se kahoo''
ri:''tuu meraa armaan hai''
ar:''happy birthday riddhima''
He wished her
ri:''tumhe yad hai''
She asked in between her tears
ar:''saansein lenaa bhi koi bhulta hai kya''
He replied hugging her close to his heart
ri:''meraa present armaan''
ar:''kya chahiye merii jaaan ko''
ri:''bas ye ki ab ose oskaa armaan kabhie naa chodd ke jaaye''
ar:''i love u riddhima love u''
ri:''i love u too armaan aur is see achaa present aur koi nahin ho sakta tha''
Same day armaan celebrates riddhima's birthday and now armaan
riddhima is sitting and armaan's head in her lap and she is caressing his hairs
ri:''armaan mujhe chodd kar jaate hue tumhe taklif nai hui?''
She asked looking in his eyes while caressing his hairs
ar:''bahut hui par apnee liyye tumhe tumhare parivar se to dur nai kar sakta tha naa.iss liyye jaate-jaate tumhe apnee pyaar se ajaad kar gayya par tumhe ajaad kar diyya par mai to aur gehre bandhan me bandh gayya.aisaa koi pal nai jab tumhari yad nai aai.fir apnee ap ko study aur kam me bsy kiyya taaki tumhe yad na karon par jo pyaar lahuu(blood) ban ke nas-nas(veins)me ho ose kaise bhulta.
He said pecking her cheek while bending her a little
ri:''tou bhulne ki koshish nai ki?handsome Dr.Mallik ko koi aur nai milli?han?''
She asked teasing him a bit
ar(smiled):''binaa dill ke bhi kahin koi rishte bante hai jaaan dill to tumhare pas tha.''to fir kaise jodta nayee rishte aur vaise bhi saanson me sirff ek hi nam hai riddhima.''
He replied while holding her hands and kissed them and riddhima blushed
ar:''par riddhima tumne itnaa mushkil Intejar kaise kiyya,jis meiin koi vaada nahin tha,tumhe kissi ne shaadi ke liyye jor nahin diyya?''
He asked from her now looking in her green almond orbs
ri:''armaan tumne jo confidence diyya vo yahan kam aya.man see tou tumhare saath sat phere le chuki thi tou fir kaise koi aur?
aur tumhare words me binaa dill ke kahan rishta jodti,kyonki riddhima to tan,man dhan se armaan ki thi,hai aur rahegi''
She replied looking back in his blue greayish orbs
After hearing that armaan smiles gently places kiss on her forhead and she blushes
ar:''oye hoyye''
 

ri:''armaan ye meraa sabse achaa birthday hai mai ise kabhie nai bhulungi''
ar:''han jaaan ye merii zindagi ka bhi khass din hai''
ri:''armaan ab kabhie mujhe akela mat chodna varna mai tumhare binaa mar jaongi''
armaan places his hand on her mouth
ar:''aisaa mat boloo jaaan mai bhi tumhare binaa nai jee paonga.par dr.shashank ?''
ri:''armaan hum oonhe mill ke manayge''
armaan nodded
next day sanjeevani
nurse station
both ar la8
ke:''dr.armaan and dr.riddhima u r la8''
ar:''sorry mam vo merii vajah se dr.riddhima la8 ho gayyi,vo actully mai''
ri:''nai mam dr.armaan merii car park karne me hlp kar rahee the is liyye la8 ho gayye''
(both are trying to prevent each-other from dr.keerti's punishment)
ar:''riddhima please merii galti hai yar''
ri:''nai armaan merii''
ar:''riddhima jhooth mat boloo maine kaha na ki merii galti hai to merii hai''
ri:''armaan jhooth tum bol rahe ho''
ar:''tum''
ri:''tum''
ar:''maine kaha na tum to tum''
ri:''nai armaan tum''
ke:''doctors,ap donoo ko hi punishment chahiye na too pathlab now bck to wrk''
and she leftt
an:''kya ridzi kal tk too iskii yad me ro rai thi aur aj jhagra kar rai hai,tu pagal hai''
ri:''di''
ra:''anjii chodo inkaa to college se yehii kam hai ladna hai ek-doosre se,aur ''
ni:''pyaar bhi ek-doosre se''
ar:''han to tu too aisee bol rahaa hai jaise muskan se kabhie jhagra hi naa karta ho,ek minute riddhimatumne anjii ko di kyonn kahaa?''
an:''han armaan vo ridzi merii behen hai''
ar:''matlab shashank sir''
an:''my dad''
ar:''oh my god yar pehle meraa pyaar aur ab merii sanjeevani ki pehli dostt''
ab:''armaan tu chinta mat kar abkii var tujhe kissi se dur nai jaana padega hum sir ko mna lenge''
at:''han abhie duties par chalte hai nai to gabbar humee mar dalegi yar''
and dey leftt for duties
evening locker rooom
mu:''aj kitna kam tha mai to thk gayyi''
at:''han sahii me yar its long hectic day''
ar:''guyss aj party karte hai meree ghr par''
mu:''oye hero majak bnd kar teree ghr party?''
ab:''han jab hum tujhe itnaa kehte the to kabhie apnee ghr nai ane detaa tha''
ri:''kyoon armaan aisaa kya hai tumhare ghr par?''
ar:''kch nai yar''
an:''han hum sabke ghr party ki except our and armaan's.apnee ghr to dad u knw ''
ar:''aur apnaa reason mai shamm ko btata hun so guyss see u at 8 p.m my house''
all:''donee''



                                             

Edited by niki.5 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
wow lovely ss
hope they meet soon
update soon

Posted: 11 years ago
nice ...please continue soon
Posted: 11 years ago
Niks..u never said abt this fic to me :(
Anyways..another fic from one of my favourite writer in this forum
Will comment after reading all the parts
Posted: 11 years ago
di apne dusre blog mei issey jiyada parts post kiya thha... but i couldn't read it completely... aur baad mei jab dhunda toh mila v nehi... ap plz plzz plzzz isko jaldi se yaha continue karo na... m dying to read it since ages...plz plzz plzzz cont this... fan ki demand hai... rakhni paregi... plzzz...
Posted: 11 years ago
how come i never read this! its superb! plz continue it Nikki
Posted: 11 years ago
hwcome i never read ths ff...plz cont sooonish nd end ittt

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