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After DHANI was sent out by D.V. to get all the information on AMOLI D.V. made a drink for himself so that he can cool his burning ego which was badly hurt today by that" small little girl.After all it was she who was in need of a job not him and in exchange of it if he expected a night from her what was wrong in it?? It was not like he was asking too much from her so what was the need to bring the press in it and make it all so complicated???"he thought as he emptied the glass in 1 gulp .It burned his throat and his cut on the lip as he closed his eyes because of the burning sensation caused by it he again saw the face of AMOLI afraid and horror stricken when he caught hold of her hair and pushed her on the bed previously in the hotel room."Oh GOD,what is this happening to me?Why am I remembering  her face again and again I who dont give a damn for any face other than mine just cant get rid of her big beautiful eyes that were shining as a lone star in the darkest of nights." hell again he was doing it even after trying soo hard of getting her out of his mind he was still hooked up on her...exasperated he took the bottle of whiskey and started gulping it down.It burned his throat badly but for now he just wanted to get Amoli's face out of his mind. After consuming half the bottle  he went towards the mirror to take a look at himself to make sure that he was successful in his mission.After taking a good look at his reflection and being satisfied  that it was only his reflection and not Amoli's he burst out laughing "hahaha... Amoli tumhe kya lagaa main tumhein yuhin chhod doonga??tumne us aadmi ko naa keh ke bahot badi galti ki hai jo tumhein sab kuch de sakta tha,lekin ab mein tumse tumhaari har woh pyaari cheez cheen loonga jise tum apnaa keh sako,aur phir jab tumhaare pass koi nahin hoga naa tumhe sahara dene ke liye tab tumhe majboor hoke mere pass aana hi padega,aur tab mein tumse apne apmaan ka badla poori tarha se sood samet wasool karoonga aur tum kutch nahin kar paogi." saying this he again sat down on his easy chair and was about to get the bottle of whiskey.As he was reaching for it he felt a hand touching his and he looked up and again he saw her right there standing near his chair and looking down at him.Shocked he just mumbulled  that "this cant be true,she cant be here,not in his room." and as he tried to get up from his chair he saw her turning her back towards him and going away from him.He tried to reach her hand but couldn't. afterall u cant catch a shadow can u?Being unable to get her wrist in his hand made him more frustrated and he grabbed the bottle and smashed it on the floor and shouted "AMOLI U CANT DO THIS TOME,TO DIGVIJAY SINGH THAKUR.ILL MAKE YOUR LIFE HELL.A LIFE  WHICH U WONT BE  ABLE TO LIVE AND YET YOU'LL HAVE TO YOU'LL HAVE TO AMOLI."Saying this he tried to get up and follow her shadow but being fully intoxicated he fell down on the floor.In an attempt to get up his hand got cut by the glass of the bottle which he smashed on the floor and his hand started bleeding.Hearing all the commotion his mother entered his room only to find him lying on the floor in a half sleepy state with his bleeding hand.She reached near him and heard him mumbling to himself "AMOLI TUMHE MERE AAGE JHUKNA HI PADEGA ,TUM MUJHE MANA NAHIN KAR SAKTIN'. Looking at his bleeding hand her mother reached for the closet and took out some cotton and antiseptic lotion and applied to his hand.After this she called her servant 'SHAMBHU jaldi se inhein upar bistar par litaiye aur doctor ko phone kar ke jaldi aane ke liye kahiye."getting the orders from her he did as he was told.After 10 min. doctor came and examined D.V.'s hand and applied stitches on his hand and did the dressing.Leaving D.V. alone to sleep in his room his mother came out in a thoughtful mood.    
                                                 "Kahaan the tum DIPESH itni der tak?"Dipesh was asked as  he entered his home well after midnight."He turned around and faced the woman who has asked him this and answered "Maa Amoli ko meri zaroorat thi toh wahin tha." "Dipesh yeh itni der raat tak tum ghar se baahar raho yeh humein pasand nahin hai." "Aap yeh kyun nahin kehtein ki aapko mera Amoli se milna pasand nahin hai?"he asked his mother."Tumne sahi kaha, mujhe nahin pasand ki tum usse milo." "Kyun maa?Jab aapko pehle aitraaz nahin tha toh ab kyun?Ab jabki use,uske parivaar ko meri itni zaroorat hai. "Kyunki tab baat alag thi aur ab alag hai Dipesh.
Baat ko smjho." "Kya samjhoon maa, mein kya samjhoon? Ab jab use mere sahare ki zaroorat hai toh aap kehtin hain ki main usse munh mod lun.Yeh pyaar nahin hai maan.Aur maine usse pyaar kiya hai aur vaada kiya hai ki uska tab tak  intezaar karoonga jab tak woh chahe." "Lekin hum intezaar nahin kar sakte Dipesh,samjhe tum.Aur isiliye tum apne sar se jitni jaldi ho sake yeh pyaar ka bhoot utaar do isi mein humari aur uski bhalai hai."Saying this she stormed towards her bedroom ending the conversation then and there.
                                    After hearing the alarm Amoli got up at exactly 6 a.m.She got up to freshen up.Today she felt as if a new chapter was about to begin in her life. Until now she the daughter of a very proud parents but now she was becoming a woman who not only had to look out for herself but for her family too.As she got out from the bathroom she went into Taani's room to wake her up and to get her ready for school.As she went inside Taani's room she saw her sleeping blissfully while hugging the photo of their father.Seeing this Amoli felt a lump forming in her throat but she controlled herself and started waking up Taani,"Taani utho subhe ke pone saat baj rahe hain,utho bachhe school ke liye taiyaar hona hai na."saying this she planted a kiss on Taani's cheek and she wriggled under her sheet.Seeing that this wont wake her up Amoli started tickling her and she got up filling the room with her sweet sound of laughter.After sending her off to the bathroom Amoli went towards the kitchen to make breakfast and to pack their lunches."Didi mere baal toh aap hi ko banane padenge".after getting out of the bathroom and wearing her school dress  Taani came in front of Amoli and said.Finishing her kitchen work Amoli replied"aaja main karti hoon."Soon after finishing there breakfast and checking the bag of Taani she took her to the bus stand from where they both had to catch their buses.After making sure that Taani got on the school bus safely and wishing her good luck
 Amoli waited for her bus to catch for the office for its timing were after 15 min. of Taani's school bus left.After getting on the bus she calculated the time on her  watch that her journey would take and she knew that she would reach her office with 10 min. to spare.As she got down from the auto rickshaw which se had to take from the bus stand till D.V.'s office she saw the tall menacing building  standing in front of her reflecting its owner's true identity.After collecting herself she entered the building and as she entered the lift the lift man asked her to which floor and when she said to D.V.'s office she got such a weird look from him that it brought back the memories of her and D.V.'s earlier encounter in the hotel room and she shuddered as she remembered his words.Just when she thought that she is going to faint the lift opened and she was in the lion's den.Looking around she tried to find Kamodi who could help her to get acquainted  with the place and the people.She spotted her standing near a cubicle of the second row.Reaching there she gave a tap on her shoulder . Kamodi turned  to see who it was."Arre Amoli tum,yahaan?Job mil gayee kya?"she asked."Haan.Isiliye toh yahaan ayee hoon yaar."Amoli replied."Aur aap mujhe ab bataa rahein hain?u know im so miffed at u,u didn't even replied to my calls to u last night,I must have called u  10 times and u didn't even bother to reply back ek msg se bhi nahin."saying the last line in a typical filmy style Kamodi made Amoli aware of her grudges known. Amoli laughed hearing her and told her how she was exhausted the previous night and fell asleep in the car of Dipesh and how he carried her inside the house and tucked her in the bed and even then she didn't woke up."Arre yaar tu D.V.se milne gayee thee toh kahin usne tujhe behosh karne ke liye koi jaadoo toh nahin kar diya tha jiska late assar hua."Kamodi said in such a way that it made both of them laugh."Achha kair yeh sab chod aur mujhe mera cabin toh dikha,kahin baaton baaton mein pehle din hi late naa ho jaun."Amoli asked Kamodi."Chal, tujhe us shaitan ke kamre mein jaana padega."Kamodi said."Kyun."asked Amoli."Kyunki tera cabin uske cabin se hokar jaata hai."Kamodi replied."Kyun us cabin ki opening corridor main nahin hai?asked Amoli again."Arre meri bholi bhali saheli tujhe lagta hai ki woh apni secretary ka cabin aise rakhvaiga ki jab marzi koi bhi uski ijaazat ke bagair usse mil sake.waise ek opening hai jo us taraf khulti hai jise jab koi baahar ka koi bandaa aata hai D.V. se milne toh use karta hai par aam staaf ko D.V. ke saamne se hi hoke jaana padega."saying this she started walking towards D.V.'s cabin. "Woh andar hoga yaar hum doosra door use kar lete hain."Amoli asked her."Nahin yaar he is not yet here.Dont worry main tujhe jaldi se cabin dikha deti hoon taaki tu cabin main apni cheezeain set kar le."Kamodi told her.Upon entering the cabin of D.V. Amoli noticed that  a big mahogany desk  was set and on the head of it a big revolving chair was placed which faced the door of her cabin and opposite that table two chairs were placed,on the table a computer and a phone were placed neatly and some files were placed neatly in the shelf directly opposite his chair and on the right side wall a large sofa was arranged 1 thing she noticed here was that there was not even a speck of dirt visible anywhere eveything was spick and span.After entering her cabin the first thing she noticed was that her desk was placed directly in the view of his.Her chair was facing towards his cabin and there were two desks and a cupboard and there was a private washroom at the back wall, there were two windows 1 facing towards the cubicles and other near the terrace and a door which was used by people who comes to visit him and near that wall a large sofa was arranged.The terrace overlooked the parking area and a canteen.    A large glass covered the half the wall which divided there cabins under which a fridge was placed.On the tables a computer was placed with a cordless keyboard,on the side table a printer was placed and besides it a copier was arranged, the right cupboard  there were some files.  "Achha yaar yeh hai aapka cabin aur lunch time 2 se 4 hai main aajaongi   tujhe lene aur apna khyal rakna and best of luck."saying this Kamodi gave her a hug and took her leave.After making herself familiar with her cabin Amoli set the mandir on top of the empty cupboard on the right side and arranged the files neatly.Just as she finished her pooja she heard a voice"Toh tum aa hi gain."Without even turning she knew who it was and she replied turning towards him "haan,aakhir yeh meri job hai aana toh tha hi."she saw him standing at the door which divided their cabin wearing a black suit with black shirt opened till his chest with his 1 arm holding the door and wearing a tilak on his forehead.while looking at  him she wondered was he wearing a tilak the previos night also or was it just this once that he is adorned with it. 

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amazing episode this one topo yaar and your dialoges you are really good keep it up Wink o loved the part where dv  watch the mirro and say the dialoges our dv is back so amoli bach ke rehna lolzzz
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Awesome epi tweety Star No words Clap  Loved those DV dialogues saying in front of the mirror Embarrassed WAH!!! Wink The best part I liked is about his cabin, he has made it beautiful yaar..."her desk facing DV's cabin" Wink  wah DV!!!! Must praise him for his intelligence I think no one can beat him in this isn't it???? Clap Would like to see more interesting  scenes happening in between them in his cabin waiting for those...(don't know to mention which all) but love to tweety...Smile . On the whole fantabulous ff dear next part PLEASEE...don't delay it yaar Smile

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thanks sooo much UX and SAVI for all your complimentsBig smile and yes the cabin and the positioning of their tables will indeed play a crucial role Winkand guys will post the next chap. next week as my eyes r not that good so need a constant break hope u guys understand and now from next chapter  the fun will beginLOL and 1 quest. what was the name of DIPESH's mother and dad?

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thanks sooo much UX and SAVI for all your complimentsBig smile and yes the cabin and the positioning of their tables will indeed play a crucial role Winkand guys will post the next chap. next week as my eyes r not that good so need a constant break hope u guys understand and now from next chapter  the fun will beginLOL and 1 quest. what was the name of DIPESH's mother and dad?

Ohh!! Shocked Please take care of ur eyes sweetheart will wait no probs take ur time to write the next chapter Wink Well Dipesh's mom and dad's name of course Madhura and  Pawan Kedia Wink These names are perfect for them tweety what u say? Big smile

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thanks sooo much UX and SAVI for all your complimentsBig smile and yes the cabin and the positioning of their tables will indeed play a crucial role Winkand guys will post the next chap. next week as my eyes r not that good so need a constant break hope u guys understand and now from next chapter  the fun will beginLOL and 1 quest. what was the name of DIPESH's mother and dad?

Well Dipesh's mom and dad's name of course Madhura and  Pawan Kedia Wink These names are perfect for them tweety what u say? Big smile
thanks for your concern Smileand DIPESH's parents name yeah they really suit them LOLand beleive me MADHURAJI will play a major role in AMOLI'S and D.V.'s lifeWink

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 Woww that will be interesting tweety Wink Big smile

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Omg!! Tweetycat ur update wonderful just superb Clap Big smile Loved every part and amoli and taani scene were cute. Here too the same liked dv dialogues standing in front of the mirror, and of course his office cabin just front of amoli's desk thakur Saab muaaahhh! Big smile. Like more scenes in the cabin btw these two, he making bahanas to call her to his cabin and do some shararat and try coming close to her and she getting embrassed that would be awesome Big smile Wink ..already started dreaming Day Dreaming and of course madhura and Kedia playing a major role in dv and amoli that would be double awesome. Just waiting for the next update and do take care of your eyes tweetycat and give the update slowly when you feel better ok?? Smile

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