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Posted: 10 July 2012 at 9:54am | IP Logged


 

Hello friends, feel free to kill for doing this, I was going through the jeeman videos, I caught this one which is one such favorite one of their scenes. We had always given thoughts how could Jeevika react to it.

 

I was totally lost in thoughts about this tried to give an idea which flashed in my mind. Sorry for not being up the mark. Feel free to kill me using any objects.

As the letter was with Viraat, I am placing the whole incident in Chandigarh.

 

Viraat was cleaning his room as he wanted some renovation in the room to set up an audition room within his house for practice. He was asked to move his things temporarily to Viren and Jeevika's room.

Smiling at Viraat Jeevika asked " kya hua itna jaldi tumne renovation start kar liya and eh shifting bi subah hi surah ho gaya "

 

Viraat replied "Kya kare babhi , iss garah me  sab dadaji aur bua ji ki immediate decision se hona hai na , aur eh temporary shifting for half  day wu bi dadaji ki idea hai. Mene bola ki us empty store room rak letha hoon , lekin usko bi objection de diya,aur bola ki subah ke liye aapni bhai ki kamare me rak lo "  

 

As he placed few dairies on the table he dropped few of the letters which was inside it.

 

Jeevika picked it up immediately and handed it over to him. She started "yeh sab tumare production house ki director ki letters hai na "

 

Viraat replied "Sare nahi , eh ek letter kuch alag hai babhi .."He remind silent for few minutes.

 

"Kya hua Viraat "Jeevika asked questioned by his silence.

 

"Kuch nahi baabhi , bas iss leter ke bare me sooch raha tha , ye ek ajib letter hai , jo Maaya ne Muje pane aur harane ke liye Maanvi ki intelligence ko use kiya "

 

Jeevika sat on the sofa beside him:"Matlab ,"

Viraat replied "Matlab , Maaya ne eh letter Maanvi se lik wayi hai , Maanvi tho itne aachi hai wu , kise ke liye kuch be karthi , Words are Maanvi's Hand writing is Maaya 's that all babhi "Viraat got up and handed the letter to Jeevika "Bhabhi muje paatha bi nahi eh letter itna alag kyun yeh koi sadaran letter nahi hai . iss me tho Payaar aur zindagi ki bahut badi kahani chupa hua hai , ek human emotion ka letter hai , aapko eh bilkul panda chahiye , aapko jaanna hai ki aapki choti behen ne kitna bada baathey ko lika hai "

 

Jeevika reluctantly opened the letter, she wanted to know soon what kind of emotion Maanvi has written about. The moment she opened the letter her eyes got stuck to a particular place where the letters were stroked she tried to read it once again "jeevi…"something stuck in her heart very badly," yeh , eh letters crossed out kyun hai , Maanvi ne kis ke lie lika hua hai , aur ye aiss finishing me name crossed out be hai , kuch serious baathey tho hai "

 

She started reading the letter , she had the deep feeling Maanvi had written it for her (I am including the letter here )"Life mein jin logon ko hum bahut pyaar karte hai na, hum hamesha for granted lete hai, humein lagta hai ke kuch bhi ho jaaye, hum toh ek doosre se bichrenge nahin, aaj ek roota hai, toh kal doosra manalega, lekin maine toh kabhi socha bhi nahin ki agar kismat hi humse root jaaye, phir kya hoga, ek doosre ko lambe chaure vaade dene ke chakkar mein, hum bhool jaate hai ki life bahut choti hai, aur iss choti si life mein, sirf kismat walo ko pyaar milta hai, chahe woh kuch hi dino ka kyun na ho, tumhara aur mera rishta bhale hamesha ka na ho, lekin tumhare saath maine jo bhi pal guzare hai, unke sahaare mein zindagi toh kya, maut bhi jheloongi, hamesha khush rehna, aur apne aap ko kabhi bhi akela mat samaj na, kyunki koi hai jo tumse bahut pyaar karta hai, aur hamesha ke baad bhi..."

 

Reading the lines Jeevika recognized the letter was for her. Each and every line made her connect with Manvi. Jeevika said as she came back to present state "Eh letter Maanvi ne kissi aur ke liye nahi , mere liye lika hai , inn sabdhoon se wu aapni pyaar ko powerful dika de diya "Jeevika looked tearfully at Maanvi who was playing with shlok "Maanvi muje paatha bi nahi , tumne kis sththi mei yeh letter lika hai , lekin muje yeh bath tho samaj me aah raha hai ki tum khud se zyada mere bare me sooch raahi thi , yeh letter padke padke muje hamari hazaroon bath yaadh aah raaha , muje paatha bi nahi hai ki mei kya kahoon "

 

Jeevika read once again the letter and started saying "haan maanu hum dono ek dono se itna pyaar karthey the ki hame yeh bi nahi paatha chala ki , hum ek dusre ki bina kuch nahi hai , zirf dooriyan hume sikayi ki hum dono ek doosre ke liye kya hai , jab hummey se koi kuch moosibathon me paadh jatha thab khud se zyada ussey dard hoone lagtha hai , mene bi eh nahi soocha ki kahi kismat hum eek doosre se door bhi kare aur humme paas bi aane de ,

Chahey hame lagtha hai hum dono  kabhi alag nahi hai , Jis chooti se  kahani ne muje tume de mil gaya  , Jis pyaar ko le kar mein zindagi bar ji loon , tumare aur mere rishta bale hamesha ki ho , kabhi koi issey kuch nahi kar saktha , In paaloon ko le kar  tum aapni zindagi kya Mooth bi ji sakthi ho lekin , lekin jaise mene tere liye sari moosibathoon ko tumse pehley  samana kiya Mooth ko bi me hi pehle sammana karongi, Aur eh math soochna ki hume koi ek doosre juda nahi kar paayenge , hamare saasoon me sirf tum base hua hai . "

 

She finished as she blew away a kiss to Maanvi.

 

The end

 

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Posted: 10 July 2012 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Di it was awesome Thumbs Up
u turned it into an OS...it was so touchy Cry
thnx 4 making it on JeeMan Smile
Heart ya Hug


Edited by jesmin.farjana - 10 July 2012 at 10:04am

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Posted: 10 July 2012 at 10:08am | IP Logged
WOW Beautiful OS dear.Clap

You are giving us treat after treat Clap

Reading it I missed my sister , going to call her now.Big smile


Edited by krithikas - 10 July 2012 at 10:08am

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Posted: 10 July 2012 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Awesome di, I dunno anything about Maya time as started watching now par the letter was awesome. Thanks for including the letter. 
  Emotions ... Bang on
  Wordings... Perfect
   Feelings... Ufff

& that maut kaa bhi saamna kar lungi line... It stole the show
 Woh "jeevi" nahi bhi likhti toh b samaj aa Jata . These lines, manvi can write for only one person in this universe... Her di, 

Thankks di, m not forgetting this one for a long time !!!

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Posted: 10 July 2012 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Jessie I love youuu for this...

u know this letter scene is one of my favs...
An episode b4 holi...When manvi was saying all these line and those flashbacks, LOVEDDD ittt...
tune shayad notice kiya hoga I used some lines in my SS ( 1st or 2nd part) from that letter...

But how u put all that letter thing here, is just Beautiful... I sooo Loved it...  I wanted Jeevika to read that letter in the show buttt... kuch khwahishen  apne andar hi dam tod deti hain... anyways

thankuuu so much...
mwaaah
Hug


Edited by Neha.K. - 10 July 2012 at 10:21am

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Posted: 10 July 2012 at 10:29am | IP Logged
lovely os...don't have words to tell u how much i loved it...

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Posted: 10 July 2012 at 10:51am | IP Logged
It's damn unfair yaaar Angry
After along time I was over the moon..giggling away and you made me emotional Cry
Your OS was so touching...especially for anyone who has a sister...
Awesome Clap the sister's bond is so beautifully written
Thankuuu so much for the pm
Hugzzz

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Posted: 10 July 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
I m speechless girl...
Thanx 4 d superb gr8 os

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