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Sanam

@meant4uonlie

Senior Member

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG!!! you finally updted and i didnt get a PM :( its ok lol ...

as usual i loved your update and PRITAM PYAARE ... hehe that was so cute ... Jeevika still blushes even after 4 years of her marriage and also being a mother ... thats really cute .. please continue soon ... love ur story ...please PM me next time :)

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669174

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

lol two dialouges were xtremely good means hilarious were jeeevika say's hiya kiya ko smabhalna chahiye aur mai tijhe sambhal rahiho

and virman's phone convo

tum meri biwi hona maanvi

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

awww that so cute pls updt next prt soon...n pls this time write a longgg part

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved the update

virika talk over phone was just awesome, loved it

update soon

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niayadav

@niayadav

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

asmmm update

pm me nxt time

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..Amrita..

@..Amrita..

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome yaar . Just read all the parts in a go . Waiting for next part . Update soon

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nikki1211

@nikki1211

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

i am loving this...plz continue...i want to see whether virat gets the hint or not...this was brilliant...funny and naughty...i liked the suggestiveness of the fic...you must continue...this was an awesome read...do continue and pm me...

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