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Posted: 08 July 2012 at 2:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fia21

Originally posted by sonam2801

Originally posted by fia21

Loved it. Different and interesting concept.
Please please continue soon.
Shukriya. shukriya hum kal apni kahani aage badayenge aur humara vyaktigat sandesa bhi appko bhejenge. wo bhi 2-2 updates. Thanks U're my FF's first reader so Double updates for fia.HugHugHumari taraf se ye Rain hugs.


Hahaha. Yaaayy I feel so special. Lol   Embarrassed
Okay I'd be waiting Smile
You are SPECIAL & Everyone is so special for me in this forum. DEK forum is my second home becoz all my frustration, anger, happiness I can share in this forum in my post. You all are my inspiration. I'm not a good writer but a good reader & listener. So all credit goes to all of you guys. Love u all.YOU ALL ARE StarStar ROCKSTARS FOR ME.LOVE U ALL.

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Posted: 08 July 2012 at 4:19am | IP Logged
nice update dear thx for pmHug

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Posted: 08 July 2012 at 6:28am | IP Logged
dear this is really very nice conceptBig smileBig smile
ab aayega maza,jab hogi humare hero ki entry
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bechari sana i know she will mes with him also,haan nahi toh
but i will be waiting for u to update it dear
this is for uStarStarStarStarStar

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Posted: 08 July 2012 at 6:51am | IP Logged
hey s0nam lovd the start the c0ncept ix new and great today is sunday i h0pe ul update s0on

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Posted: 08 July 2012 at 7:34am | IP Logged
awesome story love ur post thx for pmBig smile

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Salaam-Namastey to all Princesses of DEK Forum. I know I promised to give all of you double treat of update, but I'm really busy today I was busy with some unwanted guests. So, I'm really sorry for late update. Pls forgive me. I'm really thankful to all of you guys.
I want a suggestion from all of u, I want to change the title name of my FF from KYA LOVE STORY HAI to UFF! KYA JADOO MOHABBAT HAI. If u like this title, then Pls mention it in your comments, what you think about it.Smile Pls hit the like button & do comments. Criticisms are also welcome.Cool

                                          Part-2
Tabhi car mein se ek good-looking guy bahar nikalta hai, Jaise hi wo Sana ki taraf jane lagta hai, somebody calls him, he picks his cellphone.Sana ki back uske saamne hai.
Person( to other person on his phone):-Yes Dad, hum bas thodi der mein hotel pahunchne wale hain. kuch problem ho gayi hai.
Another person:- Kya hua beta? Are you ok na?
Person:- Yes Dad, I'm fine. Bas hum half an hour mein aa jayenge, ok. I'll meet you in the hotel.Bye Dad.(Call cuts)
Tab tak Sana wahan se taxi mein baith kar nikal jati hai.
Person( to his driver JagatEvil Smile):- Kya hua Jagat? Ye ladki kaun thi? Or humari car ki headlights kisne todh di.
Jagat DriverLOL:- Sir, jis taxi se humari car peeche se takrayi thi.wo usi taxi mein baithi thi. Humne taxi driver ko uske nuksaan ke paise dene se mana kar diya tha toh usne humari car ki headlights todh di.
Person:- Ek ladki ne, hmmm. MYSTERY GIRL HAAN. Tumhe pata nahi hai ki tumne kiski car ki headlights thodi hai? Par tum jo bhi ho, ho badi kamaal ki cheez.
Jaise hi wo car mein baithne ke liye turn back hota hai uski nazar ek ENVELOP par jati hai.Wo use utha leta hai.
 Person( to himself):-Ye kya hai?
Jaise hi wo use open karta hai usme ek MARKSHEET hai.
Person( to himself):- Lagta hai ye usi MYSTERY-GIRL ki marksheet hai.Lagta hai wo ise galti se yahin girakar chali gayi.
Wo uss marksheet mein Sana ka naam padhta hai.
Person(to himself):- hmmm, toh humari MYSTERY GIRL ka naam SANA hai haan. Lovely name.Toh MISS MYSTERY ab to aap se milna hi padega hum bhi to dekhe aap kya Bala hain.(give his killing smirk)
Jagat Driver:- Uday Sir, chaliye.
Uday:-  Haan Chalo.( Wo envelop apni pocket mein rakh leta hai)
Udhar Sana Hotel Uday Nivas Pahunchti hai.

Sana taxi mein se bahar nikalti hai
Sana(to taxi driver):- Kitne paise hue bhaiyaji.
Taxi driver:- 200 rupaye madam.
Sana:- Ye lijiye bhaiyaji, Thanking you.
Wo jaise hi aage badhne lagti hai ek bike wala uss par road ka ganda pani ucchal deta hai,or speed se nikal jata hai. uska face or dress kharab ho jate hain.
Sana(to herself in her angry mode)Angry:- Ye saare gaadi wale aaj hi humari jaan ke dushman bankar baithe hai. Pahle traffic jam, phir wo Car driver or taxi driver, phir ye bike wala.Humara mann kar raha hai in sab bikes or cars ko Ek Bade se roadroller ke neeche chapta kar dein. Saara syapa hi khatam. Na rahega baans or na bajegi bansuri. HAAN NAHI TOH. Par ab hum andar kaise jayenge? Agar Paa ne humein iss tarah dekh liya toh humari toh khair nahi.Par ab hum kya karenge?
Tabhi Sana ki nazar Hotel ki lobby mein jati hai. Wahan use bahut saare press reporters, media, journalists, security guards dikhayi dete hain.Tab use yaad aata hain ki aaj toh Hotel ke Owner NY se vapas aa rahe hain.
Sana( to herself):- Holy crap, How can I forget? Aaj to iss hotel ke owner aane wale hain or Paa toh unke welcome ki preprations mein busy honge. Agar unhone humein yahaan dekh liya to humari to khair nahi. I'm so stupid. Par hum ab kya karein? Naa andar jaa sakte hain or na hi ghar humari ye dress to puri kharab ho gayi hai.Yahaan to itne saare log hain.
Tabhi use ek idea aata hai.
Sana( to herself):-Idea. Ek kaam karte hain peeche ke door se  andar jaate hain,or vaise bhi sab log lobby area mein owner ka welcome karne ke liye khade hain. peeche ke door par toh koi nahi hoga. Phir hum jaldi se andar jaake apna face or dress clean karke chale jayenge or Paa ko kuch pata bhi nahi lagega.Very good Sana, good plan.Thumbs Up
Sana peeche ke door se chupte-chupate andar chali jati hai.
Tabhi ek Car aakar Hotel ke main door ke saamne stop hoti hai. Sabhi reporters, journalists & securitiy guards car ki taraf bhagte hain.Usme se Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh bahar nikalte hain.BlushingBlushingBlushing Sabhi reporters or media unke photos le rahi hai unse questions kar rahi hai,guards media ko control kar rahe hain.
Rahil( G.M. Of Hotel):- Welcome Sir. Welcome to India. Aaj aap pure ek saal baad India aaye hain.
Uday:- Thanks, Mr. Rahil. Waise Dad kahan hain?
Rahil:- Sir, wo aapke Royal Suite mein aapka wait kar rahe hain. 
Uday:-Ok, thanks.
Sana apna face aur dress clean karke washroom se bahar aati hai or jaldi-jaldi hotel se bahar niklane lagti hai.Udhar Uday apne suite mein jaane ke liya badh raha hai. He's talking to someone on his cellphone.
Or Sana bhi usi floor par hai. Dono ka dhyaan saamne nahi hai. Sana apna beg check kar rahi hai. Use uski marksheet nahi mil rahi hai or pareshan ho jati hai. Tabhi uski kisi se takkar ho jati hai or dono gir jate hain. 
Now, Sana is Supermad.
Wo jaldi se khadi hoti hai or Kahti hai:- Now, this is the limit. Aaj ye ho kya raha hai humare saath?Haaye Rabba, aaj kis janam ka badla le raho ho humare saath.Sab ke sab humein hi kyun target kar rahe  hain? Pahle wo car driver, phir humari dress kharab kar di, or ab ek supersonic jet plane humse takra gaya. Aaj kya aap humein Jannat dikhana chahte ho,haan.
Ab wo bhi khada hota hai jisse uski takkar hoti hai.
Sana( to Person):-Are o Mr. Pahle kya plane udaya karte the jo ussi speed mein chale aa rahe ho. (Sana continuously bole jaa rahi hai or wo use dekhe jaa raha hai.)
Uday is the same person. jisse Sana ki takkar hoti hai.
Sana:- Tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe ho jawaab do.
Uday:- Agar aap saamne wale ko bolne ka mauka dengi, tabhi toh wo kuch bolega na.( With his cute smileSmile)
Sana:- Accha ji, ek to chori or upar se seenazori, haan.
Uday:-Ek baat batao tum kya rajdhani mein paida huyi thi kya?
Sana:-  HaanConfused(confused) Matlab kya hai tumhara?
Uday:- Or nahi to kya, ek baar jab bolna shuru hoti ho toh Rajdhani ki speed mein bolti hi jati ho rukne ka naam hi nahi leti.Tumhara koi rukne ka station aata bhi ya nahi.
Sana:-Oh Mr. whatever. humse jyada hoshyari mat karna samjhe. Nahi toh...
Uday:- Nahi to kya karogi?
Sana:- Oye tum jaise badon-badon ko humne theek kiya hai samjhe. Humse to tum ulajhna hi mat samjhe ki nahi.
Uday:- Par hum to aap se ulajhna chahte hain. Ms. HAWAHAWAI.
Sana:- HOOO. Humare saath flirting karne ki koshish kar rahe ho.
Uday:- Hum koshish nahi kar rahe hain Baby. Hum tumhare saath flirting kar rahe hain.(smirking)
Sana:-Abhi hum tumhein is hotel se bahar nikalvate hain.(angry)
Uday:- Baat to aise kar rahi ho jaise ye hotel tumhara hai.
Sana:- Oye hero, Sab janti hoon tum jaison ko pata nahi kisne tumhe andar aane diya?
Uday(to himself):- Lagta hai ye humein nahi jaanti.
Uday:- Hum yahaan ke Assistant Manager hain. Toh humari jagah hotel ke andar hai,bahar nahi. Samjhi Miss Rajdhani.
Sana:- Or tum ye nahi jaante ki hum kaun hain? Hum tumhare boss means yahan ke General Manager Mr. Rahil Khan ki one & only daughter hai samjhe. Aur ab humein  gussa dilaya na toh hum  tumhari complaint karke tumhe job se nikalva denge
samjhe.
Uday:- Nahi, nahi Pls aisa mat kijiyega. Humein maaf kar dijiye. Pls Sir se humari complaint mat kijiyega. Hum toh sirf mazaak kar rahe the.
Sana:- hmmm. That's like a good guy. Agar pahle hi sorry bol dete toh ye naubat hi nahi aati. Aage se bhool se bhool mat karna hamare raaste mein aane ki samjhe. Jao hum tumhari complaint apne Paa se nahi karenge.
Uday:- Thanks. Waise humara naam Ud... Yuvi hai or aapka.
Sana:- JHANSI KI RANI. Naam jaan kar kya karoge? hum dono ki shaadi ka invitation card ready karaoge. Nahi naa. Ab maafi to de di na. Jyada dosti badhane ki koshish mat karo samjhe.
Ye sab kahkar wo wahan se chali jati hai. Uday use jaate hue dekhta rahta hai or kehta hai:-Pahli baar kisi ladki par humare charm ka asar nahi hua. Kuch to baat hai isme.Miss Rajdhani ab aap ka rukne ka platform aa gaya hai. Ab hum aap ko samjhayenge ki Udayveer Singh kya cheez hai.
Uday bhi smile karta hua apne suite ki taraf chala jata hai.

                                                                                    ...to be continued


Thanks for reading.Humein aap sab ke comments ka intezaar rahega & Pls humare FF ke naye Title ke baare mein bhi comment kariyega.If u want PM, Please send me buddy request.Smile Love you all.











Edited by sonam2801 - 10 July 2012 at 1:44am

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Omggg this was soo good.
I just LOVED Uday and Manyata's nok-jhok. Hahaha Uday is hilarious. The way he was acting that he's the assistant manager. Lol. So eager to the next part and how they both will react when Manyata finds out that her father is not Uday's boss bu instead Uday is her father's boss and when Uday finds out that Manyata/Sana is the same girl that broke the headlight of his car. Lol
Please update soon!
Well I like both the titles. Lol.

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Posted: 08 July 2012 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
awesome yaar lovelyClap
what a meeting loved itStar
uhoo rajdhani/mystery girl and mr whatever cont soon LOL
well i dont care abt the title
what i really emphsize on is da story
ehatever da title u hav ur story is gr8 Tongue


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