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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
Hi Sonam,

Luv ur ff

esp the Uv-m nokjhokLOL
Unke bich aise hi kuch acha lagta haiWink

bt haan Manveer hi chahiye nt Kayaveer

Par kaaya is nyc

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
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awww my poor sona tera chap kisi ne delete kar diaROFLmy poor sonaLOLor sana bye bye ho rhi hai tu tuje dukh ho rha haiCryawww me tooCrybut koi nai manyta a rhi hai tu ye KAYA KON HAI?????i hope uv ki cousin sister hoROFLROFLkasa rha mera idea??LOLchal jaldi se update karna ab
 Shocked Shocked Haaye Rabba Sisi tujhe Hasi aa rahi hai .LOLHumein half chapter phir se likhna padh raha hai yaar  mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai pahle bhi ek baar aisa hua tha.Cry Cry
Nahi re uske paas already uski choti Unnati hai ab koi bahan nahi banegi ab toh...Wink
Hum toh Kayaveer ke baare mein bhi soch rahe hainLOL Are wahi karne ki try kar rahi hoon kuch pics search karni hai.Wink
I'll try my  best yaar. Par Kismat konnection hi kharaab hai.LOL

kayaveerarre muje tu manveer hi chahiyemy poor sona tuje chap doobara likhna paradekh mein roo rhi hooCryCrytabi tu kehti hoo jaldi update kia kar meri sisi iss se phle koi delete kar deROFLROFLmeEvil SmileROFLhamri sisi or kismat connetion kharabCry

for u my sisi

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love u 23456...LOLu r my best sisiHug 

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
Plz update soon and is kaya a villain or the cupid in manveer luvstory

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Posted: 30 August 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by afreshbegin

Hi Sonam,

Luv ur ff

esp the Uv-m nokjhokLOL
Unke bich aise hi kuch acha lagta haiWink

bt haan Manveer hi chahiye nt Kayaveer

Par kaaya is nyc
Hi dear.Smile
Thanks for liking my FF.Tongue
Me also love Sana-UV nok-jhok.Wink
Humein bhi, I like step wise step story progress.Smile
Don't worry jo readers ko chahiye wahi milega.Smile
Kaya is not an evil character. I'll describe her character later & I promise you'll really liked her. She's the next character who is close to me.Hug Hug
Thanks for your lovely comment.Hug
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Posted: 30 August 2012 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by roshni101

Plz update soon and is kaya a villain or the cupid in manveer luvstory
I'll update the ninth chapter in 45 minutes & Kaya is not an evil girl. I promise you'll like her  character. No she's not cupid in Manveer story but has an important role in the story.Smile
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Posted: 30 August 2012 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nisha1984

please update soon 
very eager to read next part
Jiji sorry for the late reply &  update is on the way. I'll update the next chapter in some time.Smile

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Originally posted by vampire12345678

please update soon 
Saira update is on the way. Please wait for sometime.Hug

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just add this line in the begging of your update and then post it !!!!


Hi My Gang & readers of KLSH. Monkey EmoticonsI want to apologise to everyone because I promised to you to update the ninth chapter on Sunday but I'm really very late. I'm really sorry guys.Embarrassed But first time I was so confused how to forward the story  & deleted my update two times because I was also not satisfied with the update & in third  time I write this chapter.LOL I just hope KLSH Readers like it & if you don't like progress of the story than Please give your comments & tell me which scene you don't like in this chapter.Wink
This part is really very long as a penalty. This is combinaton of nok-jhok, love, revelation, pain, emotions  & anger of the characters. In this update Sana's character finished & Manyata's life is going to be start..Wink
SO, THIS UPDATE IS DEDICATED TO SANA MOSTLY & RELATIONSHIP WITH HER PARENTS. I HOPE YOU ALL LIKE THE UPDATE & SANA'S EMOTIONS & DILEMMA. Smile
I can't write like other great  writers of DEK Forum, My hinglish dialogues only saviour of my  FF.LOL  I hope you enjoy the update,So here is the ninth chapter of KLSH.ACTUALLY I'M INSPIRED BY  INDIAN HINDI WRITERS & POETS & READ MINIMUM HUNDREDS OF NOVELS & POEMS OF THEM.Wink SO I LIKE TO WRITE IN HINGLISH, IF YOU'VE ANY PROBLEM TO UNDERSTAND ANY WORD OR  SENTENCE YOU CAN ASK ME, OK.Hug
A SPECIAL THANKS TO HAZ FOR THE HELP IN THE SONG.Hug
                                         NINTH PARTSmile
Siggies are not my creation.Credit goes to siggie makers.Clap

IN NAVAL GARH PALACE (OFFICE ROOM OF DS):-Smile
Dr. Saab:- Yuvraaj aapka ishara kahin...(cuts by Uday in middle).
UV:- DNA Tests ki taraf hai.(Smirking). Uske baad toh kisi bhi shak ki koi gunjaish hi nahi hogi ki Sana hi asal mein Rajkumari Manyata hai.Wink
Dr. Saab:- Baat toh aapki sahi hai Uday beta.
DS:- Haan Uday uske baad toh sirf media hi nahi, Mahasabha bhi hum par ungli nahi utha sakegi aur humari poti Manyata humare paas humesha ke liye aa jayengi.
UV thoughts n an smirk on his face:- Aur humare paas Navalgarh aur Navalgarh ki Yuvrani dono aa jayenge aur wo bhi humesha-humesha ke liye.(smilingly)
UV(to DS):- Dadisaab humein lagta hai ki humein ab iss kaam ke liye aur  der nahi karni chahiye waise hi Manyata ke milne ki baat har news channel aur newspapers ki headlines ban chuki  hain.  Isse  pahle ki media mein koi galat news aaye humein hi kuch karna hoga.(Pretending to be serious).
DS:- Aap theek kah rahe hain  Uday. Dr. saab , aap jald se jald DNA tests ki taiyaari kijiye humein Manyata ki DNA reports kal tak chahiye.
Dr. Saab:- Ji Rajmata jaisa aap chahti hain bilkul waisa hi hoga. Jald hi DNA tests ki reports aapke haathon mein hogi aur Navalgarh ki Yuvrani iss Mahal mein. Ab hum chalte hain.
DS:- Dr. saab iss baat ka pata agar Manyata ko na chale toh hi accha hai jab ye baat saabit ho jayegi ki Sana hi Asal mein Navalgarh ki badi Rajkumari manyata hai tab hum unhein iske bare mein sab bata denge. Isliye ye kaam aapko Manyata ke hosh mein aane se pahle hi karna hai.
Dr. saab:- Ji  Rajmata.( He left the Office room).
UV(to DS):- Dadisaab abhi tak toh DNA test bhi nahi hua phir aapne Sana ko Manyata kyun kaha? Humara matlab hai ki ho sakta hai ki ye Manyata na ho?
DS:- Nahi Uday beta, iss baar hum galat nahi ho sakte. Humara dil humse kah raha hai ki yahi humari Manyata hai aur iss baar hum apni poti aur Navalgarh ki waris humari Manyata ko nahi khona chahte kisi bhi kimat pe nahi aur iske liye  humein ye karna hi hoga.Jinhein hum itne saalon se sari duniya mein idhar-udhar dhund rahe the wo humare itne kareeb thi.
UV:- Dadisaab kabhi-kabhi humari koi cheez humare kareeb hote hue bhi humein dikhayi nahi deti. I just hope ki Sana hi humari Manyata ho.
DS:- I hope so too beta. I hope so too.
NAVALGARH PALACE(SCENE SHIFTS TO MANYATA'S ROOM):- MORNING TIME

Sana was sleeping in a room.UV entered in that room & saw
 Sana  was sleeping &  drip on Sana's left hand. She was looking like a cute innocent kid who was unaware from all the  politics  & political games which was playing around her.After seeing Sana in that condition UV felt something strange in his heart. He was feeling sad n little guilty for Sana's bad condition.But he was Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh who locked his heart  for all the emotions of love & pain for anyone because he thoughts  these type of emotions make a person weak.He came close to bed on which Sana was sleeping. He sat on the right side of the bed & took Manyata's right hand in his hands.
He was silent & staring at Sana's face. She was looking like a SLEEPING BEAUTY who was waiting for her Prince charming who'll come & kissed her & than She'll awake from the touch of her Prince charming. UV kissed on Sana's forhead &  eyes.
UV(to Sana, she was still sleeping):- Pata nahi kyun par hum tumhein aisi halat mein nahi dekh sakte Ms. Rajdhani. (A real smile came on Uday's face). Jaldi theek ho jao Princess. Than he kissed her hand.
At that time Sana woke up  from her deep sleep & She was feeling like someone sat close to her. She opened her eyes but for one minute She couldn't see clearly that person & when  She saw clearly, she was shocked.
Sana(confused)Confused:- Tum!  Nahi, nahi ye nahi ho sakta lagta hai koi bura sapna dekh rahe hain. Hum phir se aankhein kholenge aur wo gayab ho jayega.Haan 1, 2, 3 . Ab kholte hain.Gayab ho ja, gayab ho ja.Haan nahi hua iska matlab hai ki ye koi sapna nahi hai.Shocked
Sana(to UV shocking)Shocked:- Tum sach mein yahaan! Aur tum , hum yahaan kaise humein kuch theek se yaad kyun nahi aa raha hai.Aur ye hum kahaan aa gaye hain? Hum, hum toh humare college ki farewell party mein gaye...(UV cuts her in middle).
UV was happy that Sana was fine now.Smile Uv smilingly said to Sana:- Ek baat batao kya hum koi HARI JHANDI (green flag) hain. I mean humein dekhte hi tumhari train aur fast daudne lag jati hai jaise hum koi green signal ho.Hum toh yahaan isliye hain taki hum dekh sakein ki tum jab chup rahti ho tab kaisi dikhti ho.
Sana was frustrated n very angry after seeing UV  so close to her.Angry
Sana(angrily):- Toh kya tumhara chehra sote time badal jata hai kya? Apni bakwaas band karo aur pahle humein ye batao ki hum kahaan hain? Aur tum yahaan humein kyun laaye ho? Haaye Rabba kahin tumne humein kidnap toh nahi... Bachao, bachao koi humari madad karo. Ye Yuvraaj Udayveer humein jabardasti...(UV covered Sana's mouth with his hand &  from the other hand he hold her hands.)
UV(to Sana):- Shhh. Bilkul chup, ab ek  aur shabd bhi nahi. Princess agar tumne humari baat chup karke nahi suni toh humare paas aapko chup karane ke aur bhi bahut se tarike hain aur shayad wo aapko pasand bhi na aaye. (He was staring at her with so much intensity & a killer smirk on his face, than his fingers touched her soft n rossy lips.) Toh bataiye kya aap humari baat chup chap sunne ke liye ready hain.
Sana nodded her head in yes. UV patted her cheeks & said with a cheesy smile on his face:- That's like a good Princess.Tongue
Sana was fuming in anger& said to Uday:- Ab humein sab kuch sach-sach batao ki hum kahaan hain? Aur tumne ye kabse Princess-Princess ka natak laga rakha hai. Humara naam Sana hai aur hum koi Princess nahi hain. Humare Pa ke siva humein koi Princess nahi kah sakta samjhe.Ab acche Yuvraaj ki tarah humein yahaan se jane do warna...
(interrupted by Uday).
UV saidLOL:- Warna tum apne dad se humari complaint kar dogi, haina. Humein humari job se out karva dogi.
Sana(thoughts):- Ye Yuvraaj Udayveer aisi cheez nikalega humne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha. Jab  dekho usi baat ka tana marta rahta hai. Ek toh khud ne humein apni sahi pehchaan nahi batayai  ussi baat ko lekar humara mazaak banata rahta hai. Ye akhir humse chahta kya hai?
UV continuously staring at Sana's confused face & said smilingly:- Kya baat  hai Princess kahan kho gayi? Din mein bhi humein apne khoobsurat khwab mein dekh rahi ho kya? How sweet.Par baby uske liye toh poori raat hai,aap jab chahe humein apne khayalon mein bula sakti hain.Hum toh aapke liye humesha ready hain.
Sana(thoughts):- Marjaniye. Tum khoobsurat  khwab mein nahi, kisi daravane sapne mein aane ki cheez ho., haan nahi toh.
Sana(to Uday):- Humein humare ghar jana  hai, chalo hato humare saamne se.
UV(seious tone):- Princess humne kaha na ki aap yahaan se kahin nahi ja sakti hain. Ye aap hi ka ghar hai.
After hearing this Sana started laughing continuously.
UV(confused but smile on his face):- Princess kahin aapko ye bat sunkar sadma toh nahi lag gaya hai na?
Sana was still laughing & said:- Sadma humein nahi  tumhein laga hai Yuvraaj Uday, kyunki ye ghar I mean ye Mahal jaisa ghar humara hai hi nahi. Lagta hai tumhare dimaag par bahut gahri chot aayi hai isliye shayad tum aisi bahki-bahki baatein kar rahe ho.
UV:- Princess  ye  koi mazaak nahi  hai , sach hai. Ye Rajmahal aapka hai aur aap iss ghar ki waris(heir).
Sana(in frustration):- Oh Please, apne iss drame ka end karo, hum jaante hain ki ye sab tum humse badla lene ke liye kar rahe ho.Lekin ek baat samajh lo ki tum humein rokne wale koi nahi hote, isliye hum yahaan se abhi ke abhi ja rahe hain.Bade  aaye humein rokne wale.Ab hato pare.
UV was now angry & grabbed Sana's hands in his hand & said to Sana :- Hum tumhein rok bhi sakte hain aur koi kuch kar bhi nahi sakta samjhi tum.

Sana was angry & Pain on her face was very clear & her eyes filled with tears:- Chodo humara haath.
UV(also in anger):- Agar nahi choda toh kya?
Sana:- Toh ye.(Sana bites his hand & said to him):- Ab humse panga mat lena samjhe. Aur agar  phir kabhi humein touch kiya toh dekh lena humse bura koi nahi hoga, haan nahi toh. Hum unn aisi-waisi larkiyon mein se nahi hain jo tumhare liye kuch bhi kar jati ho. Hum Sana hain samjhe.
She left the room in anger & UV shocked from Sana's behaviour n sudden action & said to himself:- Jungli billi. Par hum bhi kisi se kam nahi hain, iss billi ko kaise kaabu karna hai ye humein  acche se pata hai.  Toh  Sana madam apni asli pehchaan aur naam ke saath jeena sikhna shuru kar do, ab ye dono cheezein marte  dum tak aapka peecha nahi chodne wali aur hum bhi.
Sana came in the Dining Area where every member of Navalgarh & Jaigarh familyal ready presented. J & Vijay both anaware about Manyata(Sana) yet. Komal saw Sana  & tears of happiness rolled down from her eyes & she came near to Sana & hugged her .
Komal(Sobbing)Cry:- Humari bacchi. Humari Manyata.Aapko hosh aa gaya. Hum aapko bata  bhi nahi sakte hain ki aaj aapko humare samne dekhkar humein kaisa lag raha hai. (Komal hugged Sana more tightly & kissed her forehead).
Sana remembered her first meeting with Komal in UV's welcome party. Sana said to Komal calmly:- Queen Aunty(Sana know Komal is queen of Navalgarh) humein lagta hai ki aap sab humein koi aur samajh rahe hain. Humara naam Sana hai aur humare Pa Udaynivas hotel ke Senior Manager hain. Hum koi Manyata nahi hain. Aapko koi misunderstanding hui hai.Humein humare ghar jana hai humare Parents pareshan ho rahe honge humare liye aur humne unhein phone bhi nahi kiya. Humari Mumma toh pata nahi humare bina kaisi hongi.(After  hearing this Komal starts crying.) 
Sana(thoughts):- Lagta hai ye sab humein koi aur samajh rahe  hain. Par humein hi kyun aur ye sab humein Princess Manyata kyun kah rahe hain? Jarur koi badi galatfahmi hui hai in sabko.
Sana(to Komal):- Aunty Please rona band kijiye, hum aise kisi ko rote hue nahi dekh sakte hain,Lekin hum sach kah rahe hain hum aapki Manyata nahi hain.Hum kabhi jhoot nahi bolte.
DS came close to Sana & said:- Sana.
Sana feels relaxed after hearing her name & said:- Thank God kisi ne toh humein humare sahi naam se bulaya. Ji kahiye.
DS:- Aapko apne Mata-Pita (Parents) ke paas jana hai na.
Sana:- Haan wo humein lekar bahut pareshaan honge, wo dono humare bina ek pal bhi nahi rah sakte. Agar humein thodi bhi der ho jati hai toh wo dono toh itne pareshaan ho jate hain aur hum toh kal se hi unse baat nahi kar paaye. Ye Yuvraaj Uday humein humare college se  kidnap karke yahaan le aaye. Ab aap hi bataiye ki aisa koi karta hai kya?(Sana complained about UV to DS).
DS(smilingly said):- Nahi ye toh galat hai. Hum Uday ki taraf se aapse maafi maangte hain.
Sana:- Are aap kyun maafi maang rahi hain. Jisse humse sorry bolna chahiye wo toh chup hokar khada hai.
Uday was standing in one side of the dining hall & smiling at her.
Sana(thoughts):- Nikamma(I want to use this word from many days)ROFL abhi bhi humein dekh kar smile kar raha hai. Sorry bolna toh dur upar se aisi cheezy smile de raha hai, bigda hua Yuvraaj.
Sana(to DS):- bas aap humein humare ghar jane dijiye. Humein apne Mumma ke paas jana hai abhi.
DS:- Theek hai jaisa  aap chahti hain waisa hi hoga. Hum  aapko aapke Ma se milvate hain.Bas thodi der wait kijiye aur haan aap jakar change kar lijiye tab tak hum unhein phone karke bula lete hain.
Sana:- Ji Shukriya par hum apne ghar jakar change kar lenge. It's ok.
DS(smilingly):- Beta, kya aap humari itni si baat nahi manengi.
Sana:- OK. Agar aap itna kah rahi hain toh hum change kar lenge par humare paas toh koi dress...
Komal(smilingly):- Beta humne aapke liye aapki dress room mein rakhva diye hain. Aap jakar  change kar lijiye.
Sana hugged Komal & said:- Thanks Aunty. Waise aap bahut acchi hain bilkul humari Mumma ki tarah. Hum abhi jakar ready hote hain. Aap humare Pa ko phone karke kah dijiye ki wo humein yahaan se le jaaye.(After hearing this Komal felt little sad).(Sana left the dining hall n went to her room for freshen up.)
Komal(to DS):- Masaheb, hum unhein kab batayenge  ki wo humari Manyata hai.Aapne unhein kyun nahi bataya ki DNA test ki reports se saabit ho chuka hai ki wo humari Manyata hai na ki Sana. Humari hi bacchi humein Maa nahi,Aunty bolti hain.(sadly).
DS(Komal):- Komal, thoda sabar(Patience) rakhiye. Hum unhein abhi ye baat bata dete toh wo hum par  kabhi bharosa nahi karti . Unhein ye sacchayi hum nahi Sana ke Mata-Pita se pata chale toh hi behtar hai. Abhi wo humari Manyata nahi Sana Rahil Khan hai aur wo humari baat kabhi nahi manengi. Bas  thodi der aur rukiye, aapko aapki Manyata aur Navalgarh ko uski YUVRANI jarur milegi.
After sometime Sana's Parents Rahil & Nafisa arrived. They knew about the DNA Reports & Sana's Mother Nafisa was heartbrokened after this revelation. She know now Sana got her real family n her identity back, one thing'll never changed that She loves her daughter  very much, she's her life & without Sana her life is like a desert.She can't live without her daughter.
Everyone was waiting for their arrival & Sana also.
DS(to Maid):- Jaiye aur jakar Sana ko bula kar laiye.
Maid(to DS):- Ji Rajmata.(Left the place).
DS(to Sana's parents):- Aayiye hum aapka hi intezaar(wait) kar rahe the. Aap bathiye wo (Manyata) abhi aati hi hongi.
Sana came downstairs & when she saw her parents, ran towards them & hugged her father  & said :- Pa. Ab humein ghar jana hain, apne ghar. Hum aap dono ko bahut miss kar rahe the. (Then hugged her mother).
Sana(to Nafisa):- Mumma aaj sabse pahle humne jaagne ke baad aapka chehra(face) nahi dekha. Hum aapko nahi dekhte hain na toh humein aisa lagta hai jaise kuch bhi accha nahi hai.
After hearing this Sana's mother started crying & Sana broke the hug & confused:- Kya hua Mumma? Aap ro kyun rahi hain? Hum jaante hain ki hum aapko phone nahi kar paaye the. I'm really sorry, Pakka phir kabhi aisa nahi karenge, ab rona band karo na Please. Chaliye ghar chalte hain.
Rahil(Sana's father):- Sana, nahi beta wo hum aapko ghar nahi...(Sana cuts him in middle)
Sana(to Rahil):- Kya baat hai Pa? Kuch hua hai kya? Aap  dono itne pareshaan kyun hain? Hum theek hain, wo bas yahaan sabko kuch galatfahmi ho gayi thi humare baare mein. Isliye kal jo bhi hua wo sab ek misunderstanding thi, Jo ab clear ho gayi hai.(Sana was looking at Uday  with angry eyes & he was still smirking at her).
Sana(to both  Royal families):- Dekhiye hum nahi jaante ki ye Manyata kaun hai ? Aur aapne humein Manyata kyun samajh liya? Par  hum dil se dua karenge ki aapki Manayata aap sabko mil jaye. Lekin ab hum yahaan se jana chahte hain. 
Sana(to her father):- Chalein Pa.
But Sana's father not moved from his place.Sana confused from his behaviour.Confused
Sana(to Rahil):- Pa, chaliye na. Humein apne ghar jana hai, chaliye.Aap aise kyun khade hain?(She was still confused)
Rahil(sadly):- Sana wo aapka ghar nahi hai beta.
Sana started laughing after heaing this & said:- Pa, aap yahaan bhi humari taang khinch rahe hain. Par ye kaisa mazaak hai. Are jis ghar mein hum rahte hain wo ghar humara nahi hai.
Rahil:- Sana, baccha baat ko samajhne ki koshish kijiye, hum aapko nahi le ja sakte.
Sana(shocked):- Matlab kya hai Pa? Aap humein kyun nahi le jana chahte hain? Hum aapki beti hain, aapki Princess.
Rahil:- Nahi, Tum humari beti nahi ho, humari koi beti nahi hai. Humne tumhein sirf pala hai, janam nahi diya tha. Wo toh tum humein aisi akeli hi rote hue mili thi toh hum tumhein apne ghar le aaye. Humara aap par koi haq nahi hai  Rajkumari Manyata..
Tears started rolling down from Sana's eyes &  only one word was able to said," Pa."
After hearing this word Rahil was trying to pretend to be angry.
Rahil(to Sana):- Humne kaha na aapse ki hum aapke koi nahi lagte, koi nahi aur aapke Pa hum nahi hain. Aapke pita Navalgarh ke Maharaj hain aur aap  unki beti.
Sana:- Aap humein apne saath nahi le jana chahte hain isliye humse jhoot kah rahe hain na.
Sana came close to her mother but Sana's mother condition was already not good & she standup like a statue & tears was rolling down continuously on her cheeks.
Sana(cryingly)Cry:- Mumma aap kuch kahiye na Pa ko. Aap toh humesha hi humari side leti hai na. Phir aaj aap kuch kah kyun nahi rahi hain. Aap toh humare bina kuch ghante(hours) bhi nahi rah sakti toh phir Pa ne kaise kah diya ki hum aapki beti nahi hain.(Tears rolled down continuously on her cheeks & her beautful eyes turned into red.)
Nafisa(to Sana):- Wo jo bhi bol rahe hain wo sab sach hai Rajkumari Manyata. Aap humari apni beti nahi hain, wo aapka asli ghar nahi hai, ye Rajmahal aur ye Parivaar(family) aapka hai.
San was now very angry & shouted :- Manyata, Manyata, Manyata. Nafrat hai humein iss naam se agar ab kisi ne humein iss naam se pukara toh hum apne aapko kuch...( Nafisa gave tight slap on Sana's face).
Nafisa(in anger):- Khabardaar agar aisi koi baat phir se bolne ki koshish bhi ki toh, abhi aapko  ek thappad hi lagaya hai phir toh aapki...(Sana cuts her in middle).
Sana(to Nafisa):- Jaan le lengi haina. Par wo toh aap kab ki le chuki Mumma.(shattered voice)
Nafisa(shocked):- Sana!Shocked
Sana(to everyone):- Ab hum yahaan nahi rah sakte hain, par hum apne ghar bi nahi ja sakte hain. Hum aap sabse dur chale jayenge humesha ke liye. Ab humara koi nahi hai, aur hum abhi bhi Sana hi hain sirf Sana, Sana Khan nahi haan nahi toh.
Sana started to walk  to leave everyone who belongs to her. Komal was trying to stop her.
Komal(to Sana):- Beta  Manyata. Aap aise humein chod ke nahi ja sakti hain. 16 saal aapka intezaar kiya hai humne. Aur aap sab kuch chodkar apni  Ma ko chodkar jana chahti hain.
Sana(to Komal):- Queen Aunty, Humne apni Ma ko nahi humari Ma ne hi humein chod diya.(Sana said looking at Nafisa & walked towards the Main door of Palace.
Uday(to Guards):- Guards, Main gate band kar dijiye. Rajkumariji bahar nahi jani chahiye.
Nafisa(to Uday):- Yuvraajsa usse jane dijiye.
Uday(confused):- Lekin.(DS stopped him)
Sana left the Palace without looking back.
Nafisa(to Everyone):-  Aap sab yahi soch rahe hain na ki humne Sana ko jaane kyun diya. Agar hum apni Sana ko jaane nahi dete toh aap sabko aapki Manyata nahi mil pati.
Uday(to Nafisa with confused look):- Hum kuch samjhe nahi.
Nafisa:- Wo aapko wahin milegi jahaan aapne unhein  khoya tha aur humne apni Sana ko paya tha aur aaj hum apni Sana ko wahin pe kho denge aur aapko aapki Manyata humesha ke liye mil jayegi.
Uday:- Iska matlab wo humein Haj...(Rahil cuts him in middle)
Rahil:- Yuvraaj sa aap theek samajh rahe hain. Jahaan uski sari pareshaani dur hogi. Aapko aapki Manyata wahin pe milegi.
MUMBAI (HAJI ALI DARGAAH)
Sana was heartbrokened & she felt like  nothing left in her life for she lives. Today she lost her parents, her identity, her life. Now she was alone in this world.
After praying to Pir Haji baba, she came outside. Sana saw a cute lil girl with her  parents. That girl in her Father's arms & her father tossing that girl in the air & she was enjoying & giggling. Sana remembered flashback scenes with her parents & crying again.Cry
Sana(remembering her parents ):- Aap dono humein bhul jaayein lekin hum aap dono ko kabhi nahi bhul sakte,kabhi bhi nahi. Aap humesha humare Pa- Mumma rahenge chahe hum koi bhi kyun na ban jaaye.( Sana sat on a bench & remembering the scene of Rajmahal when her Parents told her that She's not their real daughter).
She hides her face in her  knees & starts crying, & a person came & sat beside her. When she saw that man she was shocked & also fuming in anger.
Sana(in shattered voice):- Tum! Tum yahaan pe kyun aaye ho? Sab kuch tumhari hi  wajah se hua. Aaj humne apna sab kuch tumhari wajah se kho diya. Apni pehchaan, apna naam, apna ghar aur apne Mumma-Pa ko bhi. Humne toh tumhara kuch nahi bigada tha na jo tumne humse iss tarah se badla lya. Hum tumhein kabhi maaf nahi karenge, kabhi bhi nahi.
That  person was Uday & this time he was also upset because of  Sana's pain & tears in her eyes.
UV(to Sana):- Tum hum par apna gussa nikaal sakti ho. Hum aaj tumhein kuch nahi bolenge, aur na hi tumhara mazaak banayenge. Manayata...(stopped) I  mean Sana hum jaante hain ki tumhein kaisa feel ho raha hoga. Jisse tum apna Parivaar manti thi wo tumhara asli parivaar nahi hai. Tumhara Parivaar Navalgarh family hai. Tum nahi jaanti ho ki sab ne tumhein kitna yaad kiya aur tumhein kahan-kahan pe nahi talaash kiya.
Sana:- Tumhein jhoot bolte hue dar nahi lag raha hai. Aisi paak(holy) jagah pe bhi tum jhoot bol rahe ho.
UV(in serious tone):- Hum jhoot nahi bol rahe hain. Sacchayi ye hai ki tum sach nahi sunna chahti ho Manyata. Haan humne tumhein Manyata bulaya kyunki tum wo ho. Apni pehchaan se kitna bhagogi. Jitna bhagogi wo bhi tumhare peeche utna hi dhaudegi.Toh Princess sacchayi ko accept karna sikho, samjhi.
Sana:- Tumhare ya un sab ke kahne se hum maan jayenge ki hum Manyata hain. Hum itne bhi buddhu nahi hain. Kaise saabit karoge ki hum Manyata hai?Haan ho sakta hai ki hum apne Pa-Mumma ki apni beti nahi hain par iska matlab ye toh nahi na ki hum tum sabki Manyata ho.Aur aisa toh nahi ki tumne hi humarre Pa ko ye sab kahne ke liye force kiya ho?
UV was now really angry because of Sana's blames. UV stood up & grabbed Sana's hands tightly & looking at Sana with  so much anger & pain.
UV(angrily):- Tum hum par itna bada ilzaam laga rahi ho. Hum jaante hain ki humne tumhare saath bahut mazaak kiya hai par iska  matlab ye nahi ki hum tumhein tumhare parents se dur kar dein. Humne tumhein tumhare asli parivaar se milaya hai, aur rahi saboot ki baat toh ye rahi DNA tests ki reports. Hum par nahi par kam se kam ispe toh trust karogi na.
UV handed over the reports of DNA test to Sana & said." Dekho ye hai tumhari pehchaan ka saboot."
Sana read the DNA Reports in which it's clear  that she's not Rahil & Nafisa's daughter & her real parents  are Brijraj-Komal. 
Sana was totally shattered &  tears  was rolling down on her cheeks continuously. UV was also upset after seeing his Ms. Rajdhani, his Princess in that condition. She said no words  to Uday & started walking silently. 
UV:- Princess, Princess humari baat toh suno. Princess, Manyata ruko.
But Sana was not in that condition to listen anyone. She was walking continuously.Uday  ran & came in front of her to stopped her.
Uday grabbed Sana from her shoulders & said:- Princess, Princesss. Humse kuch kahiye. Aapko gussa aa raha hai na hum par. Nikaal dijiye apna gussa par kuch toh kahiye. Please Princess, hum aapko iss tarah chup nahi dekh sakte hain.(UV hugged Sana tightly).
UV(to Sana):- Please Princess kuch toh boliye. Humpar chikhiye, chillaiye hum par. Bas chup mat rahiye.(First time UV felt pain of any other person & that was Manyata, his Princess.
Sana(to Uday):- Manyata apne ghar jana chahti hai.
After hearing this UV broked the hug & staring at Sana's sad face. He was shocked after hearing Manyata name from Sana's mouth...Shocked
                                                                                                                                                                        TO BE CONTINUED.Wink
SORRY FOR SPELLING & GRAMMAR MISTAKES.Embarrassed
                       THANKS FOR READING THE CRAPLOL
Hussh. Finally we reached to the end. So if you like the update Please leave your comments. I tried my best to give you a good update, if you like it than Please hit the like button & tell me which part you liked in the update or which scene not. In my all updates you saw  Sana as a bubbly & fun loving girl but in this update you saw Sana's other side, her love for her parents & Pain of losing them.Embarrassed
PRECAP:-
Manyata in Navalgarh Palace.
Manyata's Condition infront of her family.
Jay-Vijay's  come back.
Kaya's entry. (I'll describe Kaya's character later but don't worry She's not an evil girl & villain of the story. I'm sure you all like her character,Promise.

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