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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahara23

wow post next partplzzz
Thanx, I'll try to update soon.Wink
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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
Hi Everyone. I promised to all of you that  I'll update next chapter soon. So, here is the next chapter. Pls guys if you like my writing
than Please hit the like button & comments also. Your comments encourage me to update soon, because I hate typing but your beautiful comments inspire me to write more. I'll try my best to give you a good update. Please mention in your comments what you like or don't like in the update. So, I'll know where I was mistaken.Smile
If you don't like to read more than I'll stop because I'm not a good writer.Cry Wink
Sorry for Grammar mistakes(Poor writing skill)Embarrassed Embarrassed
So, here is the fifth chapter. So. Please enjoy the ride. ZZZOOONWink

                                                CHAPTER-5
Sana stands up without thinking that on that table lots of dishes are served, When she gets up all the food fall on J's head &  her dress & also the girls who were with her.
J fuming with anger & shouting on Sana:-Angry What the hell? You Idiot, ye kya kiya? humari sari dress, humara face sab kuch kharab kar diya. Guards, guards pakdo iss ladki ko, ye chor hai. Pata nahi kaise itni badi party mein aa gayi. Ye yahan chori karne aayi hai. Jaldi pakdo ise.( DRAMAQUEEN)LOL
VB(to himself) :- OMGG, LOLJ bhai aap toh yahan shikar karne aayi thi aur khud shikar ho gayi. AAA My poor lil sister. J bhai apki ye picture toh hum click karke rahenge. Kya bijli gira rahi ho aaj Uday ki to tum par se nazar hi nahi hat rahi hogi. I TELL YOU.( Click a pic of J in his mobile & smiling)LOL
Sana sees some guard running at her.
Sana(to herself):- Oh teri. Aaj toh lag gayi whatD'oh.Aaj to tujhe khuda bhi nahi bacha payega Sana.Ab toh bachne ka sirf ek hi rasta hai jaldi se yahan se1 2 ka 4 ho ja nahi to ye tujhe chor samajh ke jail mein daal denge. Bhaag Sana jaldi bhaag.
Sana starts running in the whole party & many guards running after her.Uday also shocked after seeing this fiasco in the party. He don't know what was happening in the party.Shocked
Security guards(to Sana):- Aey Ladki ruko bhaag kar kahan ja rahi ho? 
Sana(to guards):- Olympics mein hissa lene ja rahi hoon uski practice kar rahi hoon. Are agar bhagoongi nahi toh tum log mujhe jail mein daal doge.LOL Aur mein kyun ruko? rukne ke liye thodi na bhaag rahi hoon. HAAN NAHI TOH.
Security guards trying to catch Sana but she's very fast.
Sana's parents are shocked after seeing this fiasco.
Nafisa:- Ya Allah, aaj toh is ladki ne sari had paar kar di shaitani ki. Aap kuch kijiye na, inhe rokiye na.Shocked
Rahil :- Nafi, tum janti ho Sana kaisi hai. Phir bhi hum koshish karte hain aap chinta mat kijiye. 
Rahil trying to stop Sana & says :-Sana beta rukiye. Ye sab kya kar rahi hain. Sana, Sana humari baat to suniye.D'oh
Sana( to her father ):- Nahi hum nahi ruk sakte warna ye humein jail bhej denge. Hum jail nahi jana chahte. Ye humari khelne-khudne ki umar hai, jail mein chakki pisne ki nahi.Hum to yahan se bhaag rahe hain Pa. Agar rab ne chaha toh aapse dubara milenge agar salamat bache toh.LOL (Running continuously)
Nafisa/ Rahil :- Ya Allah, ye ladki bhi na ( both worried).
Security guards trying very hard but they can't catch her. J fuming with anger.Angry
J( to security):- Itne saare hokar ek piddi si ladki ko pakad nahi pa rahe ho, tumhe salary kis baat ki milti hai. Jaldi pakdo ise warna tum log jaante nahi hum kya kar baithenge. Jaldi karo.Angry Aaj ye ladki ko hum chodenge nahi.Angry
Sana runs away from the party hall.
J :- Jao jaldi pakdo use wo hotel se bahar nahi jani chahiye, warna tum sab ki naukari toh gayi samjho.Angry
Sana's mother very worried about Sana &  says to her husband Rahil.
Nafisa :- Are aap kuch karte kyun nahi, humari  beti musibat men hai. Wo nadaan hai, aap kuch kijiye na.( worried)
Rahil :- Nafi shaant ho jaiye, aap yahin rukiye hum Sana ko lekar aate hain . hmmm
( trying to console her wife)
Nafisa:- Nahi hum bhi aapke saath chalenge pata nahi kahan hogi ye ladki. Jab dekho musibat mein pad jati hai. Hum bhi aapke saath chalenge unhe talash karne.Disapprove
Rahil:- Par Nafi aap..(interrupted)
Nafisa :- Humne ek baar kaha na hum bhi chalenge. Chaliye (  both leaves the party)
Because of this fiasco, Party was finished, Sana running in the corridors of the hotel & many security guards running after her. At one point from both directions guards coming towards her. Now Sana is trapped from both sides.
Sana(to herself):- Ya allah ab toh hum buri tarah se phas gaye, ab toh in darindo se humein koi nahi bacha sakta. Oh God Pls humein bachane keliye apne kisi farishte ko bhej dijiye ab to bas wahi humein inse bacha sakta hai ( she closed her eyes from fear).
Suddenly a hand pulled Sana in a room & closed the door & put his hand on her mouth. Sana's eyes still closed than slowly-2 she opens her eyes & sees the person.
Sana :-Shocked Tum!!!
That person was Uday.Cool
Uday :-Smile Haan hum. Toh akhir humne aapko pakad hi liya. Waise humne tumhara naam ek dum sahi rakha tha RAJDHANI. Kya speed hai yaar tumhari. Sach mein maan gaye tumhe Ms. Rajdhani. ( smirking at her) Tum to hawa se bhi tej bhagti ho par humein is hawa ko acche se  rokna aata hai. Humse chup rahi thi haan.Wink
Sana is noew super angry & yells :- Tum, Ye sab syapa tumhari wajah se hua or wo ladki chor-2 chillane lagi. Aur tumne humse jhoot kaha tha ki tum yahan assistant manager ho, Jhoote kahin ke. Angry Tumne jaan bujh kar humare Pa se apni family ko lane ke liye kaha taki tum humare Pa se humari complaint kar sako haina, Jawab do.
Uday:- ssshhh. Red light now stop & listen to me.Humne tumhe yahan tumhari complaint karne nahi bulaya tha, Samjhi.(interrupted)
Sana (angrily):- Toh kya tumhare aane ki khushi ke iss jashnParty mein balle- balleDancing karne bulaya tha. Aaj jo bhi party mein hua wo sab tumhari wajah se.HAAN NAHI TOH.
Uday Smile :- Toh humne tumse kaha tha ki jakar uss table ke niche chupo. Haan bolo.
Sana:- Nahi par hum tumhari wajah se hi underground hue the. Agar wo ladki humare haath par apne sandals nahi rakhti toh hum nahi pakde jaate. Aaj ka din bahut bura hai. Jabse wo badi gadi wala humari taxi se takraya tabse humare saath bura ho raha hai. Pahle Taxi or car driver ki fight, phir humara result kho gaya, phir humari dress kharab ho gayi, phir tum mile or phir  ye sab.Lagta hai sab ke sab humari hi jaanke dushman bane baithe hain.D'oh
Uday shocked after hearing  about traffic jam scene.Shocked Shocked
Uday(thoughts):- Iska matlab yahi Mystery girl hai jisne humari car ki headlights todi thi.Smile Wow, waise bhi iske alava ye karnama koi nahi kar sakta. ( smiling Smile  continuously)
Sana tries to free her hands from Uday.
Sana:- Ab kya sari zindagi humara haath pakde rahoge kya? choro humen lagta hai guards chale gaye hain, ab hum yahan se ja rahe hain. Waise bhi ghar jakar humari class lagne wali hai. Ya rabba humein bacha lena.
She frees her hands from Uday & leaves from there.
Sana saw her parents, both looks very angry.
Sana(to her parents):- Wo Mumma-Pa humne sach-much jaan bujh kar kuch nahi kiya. I swear.Embarrassed
Sana's father :- Sana abhi kuch nahi. Jo kehna hai ghar par. Ab chalein.Unhappy
In Sana's home.
Nafisa:- Sana, aap janti bhi hain aaj aapne kya kiya. Agar kisi ko pata chal jata ki aapke Pa usi hotel ke G.M. hain to kitna bada tamasha ho jata.(angrily & worried also)
Sana :- Par Mumma hum sorry keh rahe hain na or humne jaan- bujh kar kuch nahi kiya. Sacchi.(puppy face)
Rahil:- Par beta wo sab hua kaise aur aap us table ke niche kya kar rahi thi?
Sana:- Wo hum table ke niche chu... (thoughts) (Nahi Sana bhul kar bhi sach mat batana warna uske baad kya bawaal hoga.Rab hi jaane.) Wo Pa kya hua na humara phone table ke niche gir gaya tha toh jaise hi hum use lene table ke niche gaye ek ladki ne humare haath par apna sandal rakh diya hum chillaye usne humein table ke niche dekha or chor-2 chillane lagi hum dar gaye or khade ho gaye. Hum bhool gaye the ki us table par khana rakha hua hai or wo sab hua. Humari galti nahi hai.Embarrassed
Nafisa:- Toh Sana humara baccha kya usme table ki galti thi ya jo khana table par tha uski.LOL Pata nahi us ladki ke gharwale  kya karenge. wo jaroor kisi bade ghar se thi.(worried)
Rahil:- Kuch nahi karenge tum chinta mat karo. Hum Yuvraaj UV se baat karenge or jyada hua to maafi maang lenge.
Sana:- Nahi Pa, aap kyun maafi mangenge?
Nafisa:- Toh Sana baccha kya wo aapse maafi mangenge hmm.
Sana:- Theek hai Mumma toh hum unse maafi maang lenge. Khush.(Thoughts) Maafi or use lafange Yuvraaj se isse toh aacha hum jail chale jayein. HAAN NAHI TOH.
Uday in his room remembering all meetings with Sana & Party fiasco & Laughing continuouslyLOL LOL LOL.
Unnati comes in his room.
Unnati :- Bhai, Smile kya hua? aap itna has kyun rahe hain?LOL
Uday:- Chutki ye tum humse pooch rahi ho, you know aaj jaisi party humne apni poori life mein nahi dekhi.LOL Aur J uski halat to dekhne layak thi. Humara mann kar raha tha ki uski ek picture click karke ek badi si photo frame mein lagvakar use gift kar dein. Sach mein aaj to maza aa gaya.LOL LOL
Unnati:- LOL Bhai aap bhi na.This is too much. Waise ek baat batayein humne hi Sana ko uss table ke niche chupne ka idea diya tha.Wink
Uday:- Sana?Confused
Unnati :- Haan Bhai uska naam Sana hai. Par ek baat hai wo sabhi ladkiyon se different hai, Jahan ladkiyaan aapke paas aane ke liye kuch bhi kar deti hain or ek taraf wo jo aapse chupna chahti thi.LOL But she's very cute but thoda bachpana hai usme.Smile
Uday:- Waise ye tumne sahi kaha wo sabse alag hai, sabse alag. Aur tumhe pata hai ye wahi ladki hai jisne humari car ki headlights tod di thi.Tongue
Unnati:- OMG. Matlab yahi wo mystery girl hai. I don't believe this.Shocked
Uday:- Pata hai hum bhi itna hi shocked huye the jitna tum jab usne kaha ki ( remembers room scene).
Uday:- Ek, ek second Chutki ruko.
He opens his cupboard & picks up Sana's result.
Uday:- Chutki lagta hai Ms,. Sana se phir se mulakaat karne ka waqt aa gaya hai . (smirking)
Unnati :- Bhai hum kuch samjhe nahi!!! Confused
Uday:- Smile Kuch nahi Chutki hum tumhe baad mein samjhayenge. Abhi tum jao or rest karo Waise bhi raat bahut ho gayi hai. Good night.
Unnati :- Ok Bhai, Good night.Smile ( Both hugs each other)Hug

NEXT MORNING
Sana's alarm ringing.
Sana(to herself):- Sleepy HOO(Yawning) This stupid alarm, humari neend kharab kar di. Thodi der baad bajta toh kya jata. Stupid kahin ka.Sleepy
Sana now fully awake.
Sana(to herself):- Please God, Aaj humara din kal ki tarah na ho. Pls Aaj sab kuch accha-2 karna, OK.Smile
Now, Sana ready to go her College.
On breakfast table,Her parents waiting for her.
Sana:- Good Morning  Mumma.
            Good Morning Pa.
Rahil/ Nafisa:- Good morning.
Sana:- Aap dono abhi tak humse naraaz hain. Aap kahenge toh  hum sabse maafi maang lenge par Pls aap log humse gussa mat ho. Plsss.
Rahil:- Nahi beta, aisa nahi hai. Hum aapse gussa nahi hain. Hum jaante hain aapne jaan-bujh kar nahi kiya tha. Aur waise bhi hum humari Princess se itni der tak naraaz nahi reh sakte.Smile
Sana hugs her father & says:- Humein pata tha ki aap humse  jyada der tak naraaz nahi reh sakte. I love you Pa. You're the best-best-best father in the  whole world.Hug Hug
Nafisa :- Haan aur Mumma wo toh best nahi hai,  Haina?
Sana :- Nahi. Humari Mumma bhi world ki best Mumma hai. I love you Mumma.( kissed her cheeks & hugs her)Hug Hug
Rahil:- Waise beta aap ye itni jaldi ready ho kar kahan ja rahi hain? Question
Sana:- Wo Pa hum apne college ja rahe hain. Pahle hum apni friend ke yahaan jayenge, phir wahan se apne college. Aaj humare college mein Farewell Party hai. Toh hum pahle Tamanna( Sana's Best Friend) ke ghar jayenge, phir wahan se mall or apne liye ek acchi si dress lenge party ke liye phir Tamanna ke ghar se sidhe college jayenge.Smile
Rahil:- Toh humari Princess ko shopping karni hai. Ye lijiye Credit Card jo pasand aaye wo khareed lena.hmmSmile
Sana :- Thanx Pa. Thank u, Thank u, Thank u so much. I love you.Hug Hug
Rahil:- I love you to my baccha. Ab jaldi jao warna late ho jaogi or haan sambhal kar jana, ok.
Sana:- Ok Pa.
Nafisa:- Or haan. Aap apna phone switch on rakhiyega. Aur jab college pahunch jaye tab humein phone kijiyega or ek aur baar raaste mein kisi se jhagda nahi karna samajh gayi.Smile
Sana:- Haan Mumma. Sab samajh gaye. Bye hum shaam tak vapas aa jayenge. Bye. Love you.(Sana leaves)
IN UDAY NIVAS HOTEL
Uday gets ready for going somewhere.Giriraj comes in his room.
Giriraj:-Good Morning Uday beta. Aap itni subah-2 kahin ja rahe hain kya?
Uday:-  Yes Dad, kuch zaroori kaam se bahar ja rahe hain. Kuch der mein aa jayenge.Smile
Giriraj:- Kahi aap Navalgarh Palace toh nahi ja rahe haina J se milne. Waise bhi kal raat jo hua uske baad...(interrupted)
Uday:-LOL Nahi Dad. Aaj humare paas usse bhi zaroori kaam hai. J ka dukh hum baad mein baantne chale jayenge. Abhi hum chalte hain. Bye Dad.
Giriraj:-Smile Bye beta.Take care.(Uday leaves)
Now Uday driving his Car to go Sana's home to gives back her lost Marksheet.
Uday(to himself):- Toh Ms. Sana Get ready. Abhi aapko ek or shock lagne wala hai.LOL Hum aap hi ke ghar aa rahe hain. Wink
SANA'S HOME
Only Sana's mother Nafisa in the house.Doorbell rings Trintrintrintrin.LOL
Nafisa opens the door & shocked to see the person in front of her.Shocked Shocked
Nafisa(to the Person) :- Aap yahaan!!! Shocked Shocked


                                                                               -To be continued.

PRECAP HIGHLIGHTS :-  Introduction of Sana's friends.
                                         Uday'll know Sana is actually Princess Manyata.
                                         Sana's father in Devgarh Palace.
                                         Uday in Sana's college.



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Edited by sonam2801 - 23 July 2012 at 4:22am

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
Oh great Sonam!... You updated the next part so fast. I loved it. Uday is a total HERO. Sahi waqt par aakar apni heroine ko bacha liya...

Great update... will wait anxiously for the next one!

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awesome please update soon please please please i loved this update please next update should be only only manveer please

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
Sonam dear aisey ideas atey kaha seh hai?hmm abhi tumney bohout jaldi update karliya hai.i must say dramaqueen i m impressed.n J n M's scene rofl rofl..hillarious..aww J bechari n M hahaha...u crack me up yaar ROFL ROFL loved it to the core.cont soon dramaqueen Hug

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omg i was laughing when m was running and guards were after her yay so uday finds out she is his mystery girl omg love the precap especially where uday will find out that sana is manyata but how really cant wait please update soon and thanks for the pm 

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Awesome update. Loving the story too much.

Do update soon. 

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Sry for the late reply dear.loved it n u crack me up.cont soon n thankoo(M's style)for the pm...

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