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Posted: 10 July 2012 at 12:56am | IP Logged
OMG...akash is a driver...ye kamina issi ke layak hai...naa kaam ka na kaj ka dushman humare manveer ki love story...ka...

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Posted: 10 July 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged
hey sonam
yaar itna tadpaana accha nahi hot
i m so curious to read further
yaar u r just amazing  
plz update toh karo
this concept is really very hatke
keep it up

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This was too good..!! Kya love story hai is a better title I guess... LOVED this chapter continue soon.,..!!!

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Posted: 11 July 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
BEEPBEEP...I'm back. You all are ready with your jootas & chappals na. No, Pls don't throw at me,  Ya I know I promised with you to update this FF regularly but I'm really sorry for late update. Thanks for appreciating my work.Thanks for your comments & likes. Your comments are really important for me.I hope you all are not feel bored after reading this story.
I'm not a good writer,If you feel bored, than I'm not SorryLOL Everybody Pls read this update agar padh kar hit ke saath-saath comment nahi kiya toh hum goli chala denge.Dhishkiaaaoonnn.LOL

                                               CHAPTER-3
Uday enters in his royal suite. His Dad waiting for him.
Uday:-Dad, how are you?
Giriraj:-I'm fine. Raaste  mein koi problem toh nahi hui na?
Uday:-Nahi dad, bilkul nahi. Waise humari sweet lil sister nahi dikhayi de rahi. Hum itne dino baad India aaye hain or wo hain ki abhi tak humse nahi mili.
Giriraj:-Wo Uday beta, Unnati...(stopped)
Uday:-Kya hua hai Dad? Chutki theek toh hai na?(Worried)
Tabhi koi peeche se Uday ki eyes close kar deta hai.
Giriraj smiling.
Uday:- Chutki, stop these childish games. Ab hum bacche nahi hain.Hum jaante hain aap hi hai. Pls ab toh haath hatao.
Both hugs each other.
Unnati:-Kaise hai bhai aap. I really-really missed you so much.
Uday:- Par humne nahi kya.(Breaks hug)
Unnati:- WhatShocked Now, I don't want to talk with you. I'm going.
Uday stops her .
Uday:-Are hum bas mazaak kar rahe the, aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya ki hum aap ko miss na kare.
Unnati:- Aapko kya lagta hai, mazaak sirf aap kar sakte hain. Hum bhi to mazaak hi kar rahe the.
Both hugs.
Giriraj:-Accha ab aap dono baatein kijiye. Humein kuch imp. kaam hai.
Giriraj leaves the room.
Unnati:-Aapka safar kaisa raha?
Uday remembers both Incidents & laughsLOL
Unnati:-Kya hua bahi aap itna hans kyun rahe hain?
Uday:-Kuch nahi Chutki humara safar to accha tha par aaj humari job jaate-jaate bach gayi samjho.LOL
Unnati (with confused look):-Job? Hum kuch samajhe nahin?
Uday tells her about Sana & his meeting in the hotel.
Unnati also starts laughing after hearing this incident.LOL
Unnati:- OMG. I Can't believe this.Aapne apne aapko hotel ka assistant manager bana liya.LOL Now, I want to meet this girl.
Uday:-Milna toh hum bhi chahte hai. Par kaise?
Unnati:-Idea.Hum ek kaam karte hain aaj raat ko jo party humne rakhi hai usme use bhi invite karte hain. What you say?
Uday:-Wow, chutki. Nice plan. Tumhara dimaag to chacha chaudhary se bhi tez chalta hai.
Unnati:-Par ek problem hai hum use invite karenge kaise?
Uday:- Wo tum hum par chod do chutki. Humein pata hai humein use party mein kaise lana hai.Wink
Uday calls G.M. Mr.Rahil(Sana's Father)
Uday:-Hello, Mr. Rahil Party ki preprations ho gayi?
Rahil:-Yes SIr. Everyting is done.Aapko koi complaint nahi hogi. I promise.
Uday:- Humein aap ke upar poora trust hai. Aap humare saath itne saalon se kaam jo kar rahe hain.Humari aapse ek request hai.
Rahil:- Request nahi Sir, aap toh bas order kijiye.
Uday:-Nahi, nahi. Ye humari request hi hai ki aaj raat ki party mein aap apni famiy ko bhi lekar aaye,Humein bahut khushi hogi.
Rahil:- But Sir, Family ko...
Uday:-Aap itne saalon se humare saath hain. Agar aap apni famiy ko bhi saath layenge to humein sach mein bahut accha lagega.
Rahil:-Fine Sir, Hum unhe bhi saath lekar aayenge.
Uday:- Thanks.
Rahil:-My Pleasure, Sir.
Uday( to himself):-Aaj raat ko aayega party ka asli maza.( with his killing smirk)Embarrassed
Giriraj talking to someone on his phone.
Giriraj:- Ghani Khamma, Masaheb. Aaj raat ko aap sab log aa rahe hai na Uday ki welcome party mein.
Person:-Bilkul. Hum sab zaroor aayenge. Aaj poore ek saal baad Uday India aaye hain.Hum to unse milne ko taras rahe hain.
Giriraj:-Ji Masaheb. Toh phir aaj raat ko party mein milte hain
Person:- Ji, bilkul. ( call cuts)
Sana reached her home very late. She is very  tensed.
Nafisa:- Aa gayi humari Sana. Itna late kaise ho gayi ?
Sana throws her bag on sofa. She says nothing.
Nafisa:- Kya hua? Tumhare results toh acche rahe hain or tum itni chup kyun ho? Humein batao to sahi.
At that time Rahil also reached his home.
Rahil( to Sana):- Hi princess. Toh kaisa raha aapka result?
Sana kuch nahi kahti.
Rahil:- Kya hua beta, aap chup kyun hai?
Sana told him about her marksheet is missing from her beg & traffic jam incident.
Nafisa:-(angry) Kya zaroorat thi is tarah kisi ke saath jhagda karne ki. Jab dekho JHANSI KI RANI bani firti ho.
Rahil:-( calmly). Sana iss tarah kisi ke saath jhagdna acchi baat nahi hain or rahi aapki marksheet ki baat toh wo toh hum request karke University se dobara le lenge. Now cheer up & get ready aaj raat ko humein ek party mein jana hai.
Nafisa & Sana:-Party mein?
Rahil:- Haan aaj raat ko humare hotel ke owner Yuvraaj Udayveer singh ke aane ki khushi mein ek welcome party hai aur aap dono bhi humare saath chalengi. Humare boss ne humse specially request karke aap logon ko bhi saath laane ko kaha hai.
Sana:- Par Paa. Humara mood nahi hai, hum nahi chalenge aapke saath.
Rahil:- Ok, fine. Hum mein se koi nahi jayega.
Sana:-Par, Paa  aapke boss ki welcome party hai aapko toh jana chahiye.
Rahil:- Jahan humari princess nahi jana chahti wahan hum bhi nahi jayenge.
Sana:- Ok fine. Hum chalenge party mein.Ab hum apne room mein jaa rahe hain.Jab dekho Miya- Biwi milkar humein blackmail karte rahte ho, HAAN NAHI TOH.( All three are smiling)
Now scene shifts to Hotel Uday nivas.
Uday get ready for the party wears armaani,looks very dashing.
People arrived in the  party. Every person busy in talks, drinks with each other. All the royal families, businessman, politicians & media also invited in the party.Navalgarh family also arrives in the party. Giriraj welcomes them( Rajmata, Komal &  Brijraj)
Giriraj:- Welcome Maasaheb, AApsab ke aane se party ki shaan badh gayi hai.
Giriraj hugs Brijraj.
Rajmata:-Kaise nahi aate Maharaj. Aaj Uday itne dino ke baad aaye hain. Hum to unse milne ke liye tadap rahe hain.
Giriraj:- Jaynandini aur Vijay nahi aaye aapke saath.
Komal:- Wo log bas pahunchne hi wale hain. Kisi bhi waqt yahan aa sakte hain.
Rajmata:- Maharaj, Uday kahan hai?
Giriraj:-Uday ready ho rahe hain. Unnati bata rahi thi ki koi special guest aane wala hai, shayad wo unke saath hi yahaan aayenge.
Sana arrives with her parents in the party.
Sana:- Paa, hum sirf aapke liye yahan aaye hain agar hum bore hue to hum yahan se chale jayenge.
Rahil:- Accha baba, jaisa aap kahengi waisa hi hoga pahle andar to chaliye.
Sana's phone ringing.
Sana(to her parents):- Aap dono party mein jaiye hum call attend karke aate hain  hmmm.
Rahil:- Ok beta, par jaldi kijiyega.(Rahil & Nafisa leaves)
After talkng on the phone Sana walks for the Blanket Hall Jahan Party ho rahi hai.
Uday bhi apne room se party hall ke liye nikalta hai.
Suddenly wo Sana ko dekh leta hai.She wears a beautiful Anarkali. Uday staring at her & says:- Beautiful.
Sana bhi Uday ko dekh leti hai.Wo uski taraf badhti hai.
Uday:-You look hot.
Sana:-What?Shocked Abhi tumne kya kaha?
Uday:-Tumhe hot kaha(smirking)
Sana:-Shocked Tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui humse ye sab kahne ki. Bhool gaye hum kaun hain?
Uday:- Oh, I'm really Sorry. Hum toh bilkul hi bhool gaye the aap kaun hai? Hum to bas mazaak kar rahe the.
Sana:- Tum Mazaak bahut karte ho aisa na ho ki hum bhi mazaak karte- karte apne Paa se mazaak- mazaak mein tumhari complaint kar dein. Phir mazaak- mazaak mein tumhari job bhi chali jaye or phir tum aur tumhara mazaak.
Uday:- Are baba, tum itna gussa kyun ho rahi ho. Humne sorry bola na. Accha tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?
Sana:- Hum yahaan apne parents ke saath aaye hain party mein. Yuvraaj Udayveer singh ne specially request karke humein yahaan invite kiya hai.Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho jao jakar check karo guests ko kya chahiye. Jab dekho ladkiyon ko taadte rahte ho. Yahaan tumhe salary kis baat ki milti hai kaam karne ki ya ladkiyon ko ghurne or unhe hot kahne ki, Ye Yuvraaj Udayveer ne bhi kaisa staff rakh  rakha hai pata nahi kya hoga unke iss hotel ka.
Uday(to himself):-Ms. HAWAHAWAI. Jab tumhe pta chalega party mein ki hum kaun hai tab tumhare iss khoobsurat chahre se hawaiyaan kaise udti hai hum bas wo dekhna chahte hain.Smile
Uday:- Accha ek baat batao tumne kabhi Yuvraaj Udayveer ko dekha hai.
Sana:- Haan, dekha hai na humare ghar roz subah bread pakode khane aate hai na breakfast mein.Are bevkoofon wale sawal puchte ho humne unhe kaise dekha hoga wo yahaan nahi rahte the samjhe Buddhu.
Uday:-Par tum unse bach kar rehna.
Sana:-Par kyun?
Uday:- Tum jaanti nahi wo kis type ke hain. Jab dekho ldkiyon ko saath chipke rahte hain.
Sana:- HOOO. Tumhe sharam nahi aati, jiske yahaan kaam karte ho uski hi burayi karte ho agar aaj mein unse party mein mili na toh tumhari shikayat sabse pahle karoongi. haannahi toh.
Uday:-Theek hai mat maano humari baat jab tum unse milogi toh khud-b khud samajh jaogi.
Sana:-Humein sabse deal karna aata hai, chahe wo assistant manager ho ya yuvraaj Udayveer Singh. Humse jo panga lega use hum chorne wale nahi hai or hum kisi se nahi darte samjhe.
Uday:- Ok, as you wish. Humne toh tumhe bata diya aage tum jaano or Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh. 
Sana:-Oh, batane ke liye Shukriya. Aapne hum par bahut bada ehsaan kiya hai. Hum aapka ehsaan kaise chukayenge.HMMM.
Uday:-Koi nayi baat nahi hum aise chote-mote ehsaan karte hi rahte hai.
Sana gussa hoke chali jati hai.
Uday:-Tum gusse mein or jyada hot lagti ho. HAAN NAHI TOH.(  & laughs)LOL
Aaj raat ko to aatishbaaziyaan hongi humari Party mein BUUUMMM.
Sana arrives in the party &...

                                                                                To be continued...

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Edited by sonam2801 - 13 July 2012 at 1:22pm

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Posted: 11 July 2012 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Awww it was so beautiful, i think manyata n uday damakedar meeting z on d way. I m eagerly waitng for manyata rexn,update asap

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Posted: 11 July 2012 at 8:44am | IP Logged
awesome stroy yaar loved it 
beutifully written update soon waiting for atishbazian :p

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awesome update thx for pmBig smile

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aww cute manveer nok jhok very nice updateThumbs Up

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