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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
Guys, Thanks a lot I never expected this type of response from all of u. Thanking u so much for encouraging me for writing this FF. I promise I'll give u full comic & romantic tadka in my FF.Love u guys for ur comments & likes.U all are great writers & this FF's credit goes to all of you.If u want PM pls send me buddy request. In this part no manveer but there is base for manveer meeting & forwarding story.Love u all.
Criticisms are also welcome, because it's also a part of correctness.
                                         PART-1
Morning time- around 6:30 A.M. Alarm watch ringing in a house continuously, A lady comes in a room
Lady:- Sana beta wake up. It's already 6:30. College nahi jana hai kya aaj aapke results aane wale hain.
Jaldi kijiye.
Girl:- hmmm.
Lady:- Sana, bas bahut ho gaya ab agar aap nahi uthi na toh hum...
Girl:- Toh kya mum...( in her half sleep)
Lady:- ( pouring a full jug of water on her face) Toh ye beta.
Sana:- Kya mumma, aapne humara itna beautiful dream todh diya or humare sare sapno pe pani daal diya .haan nahi toh.
Lady:- Par aap humari baat sun hi nahi rahi thi hum kya karte? waise aap sapne mein kya dekh rahi thi.
Sana:- Humne dekha Salmaan humein propose kar raha tha wo bhi apne knees par baith kar. How RomanticDay DreamingBlushing
Lady:- Sana, ye Salmaan kaun hai? Kahin wo humari building ke 5th floor pe jo rahte hain unka wo awara beta to nahi. Ya Allah, agar aapke Pa ko pata lag gaya tho aapki khair nahi.
Sana:- (Chocking water from her mouth) Mumma aap bhi na. Hum kya uss champu Salmaan ko apne itne acche khwab mein dekhenge YikesDead Humari pasand itni ghatiya bhi nahi hai.
Lady:-Toh phir kaun Salmaan.
Sana:-Wanted Salmaan,Veer Salmaan, Bodyguard Salmaan. Humara Sallu.Blushing
Lady:-Oh, Salmaan ki Katrina.Uthiye warna college jane mein late ho jayengi.
Sana's father Rahil comes
Rahil:- Good morning my beautiful princess. Get ready fast. hum aapko aapke college drop kar denge,ok.
Sana:- Thanks Paa. Par humein aap humesha princess kyun bulate hain? Hum thodi na kisi state ki princess hain haan.
Rahil:- (Kissing her forehead) Toh kya hua aap humare ghar ki princess toh hain.
Sana:- Wo toh hain (They both hug each other) Accha Pa, aaj aap itni jaldi kyun ja rahe hain, kuch jaroori kaam hai kya?
Rahil:- Haan beta aaj humare hotel ke owner Yuvraaj Udavyveer Singh poore ek saal baad Newyork se aa rahe hain Mumbai. Toh unke welcome ke liye preprations toh karvani padegi naa.
Sana:- Ok, hum abhi ready ho jaate hain.
Manyata gets ready for her college & after taking breakfast 
Nafisa:-Beta, best of luck for your results.Aap dariyega mat haan.sab kuch accha hoga.
Sana:- Dar or humein. humein lag raha hai ki result humara nahi aapka aane wala hai Or waise bhi Gabbar ne kaha hai"Jo dar gaya samjho mar gaya"( All three are laughing & Manyata hug her mother & leaving with her father for college)
After reaching Sana's college
Rahil:- Best of luck Sana for your results.
Sana:- Thanks Paa & best of luck to you too.
Rahil:-(confused) Best of luck par kyun?
Sana:- Wo aaj aapke hotel ke owner aane wale hain na. Aisa impression mariyega taaki unhe bhi to pata chale ki Sana ke Paa kya cheez hai.Haan nahi toh.
Rahil(Smiling) :- Thanks beta. Humein aapke results phone karke bata dijiyega. Humein ghar aane mein der ho sakti hai,Ok. (Now he lefts)
Sana checks her results, she passed her exam with distinction in all subjects & she's getting second place in her exam. Her friends congratulates her.
She calls her mother & says :- Mumma hum second aaye hain apne college mein.Humein sabhi subjects mein distinction mila hai.
Nafisa:- Humne kaha tha na aapke results acche rahenge. Waise aapne apne Paa ko bata diya aapke results ke baare mein?
Sana:- Nahi mumma. Pa ko hum khud hotel jakar surprise denge wo bahut khush honge.Hum wahi jaa rahe hain bye. 
Call disconnects
Nafisa:-Sana humari baat to suniye aapke Paa aaj bahut busy hain Aap wahan mat...(to herself) Ye ladki bhi na bina puri baat sune phone rakh diya. Ab wahan jakar kya bawaal karegi.
IN UDAY NIVAAS HOTEL
Everyone busy for the preprations of welcoming Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh.
Rahil(G.M. of Uday Nivaas Hotel) to his Assistant Manager Vishal:- Vishal sab preprations acche se check kar li  hain na. Sir kisi bhi waqt yahaan aa sakte hain. Security bhi acche se check kar lena. Mujhe koi complaint nahi chahiye ok.
Vishal:- Yes sir. Everything is under control.Mein ekbaar dobara se check kar leta hoon. Koi problem nahi hogi sir.You don't worry.
Rahil:- Ok. You can go now.(Assistant manager leaves) (thoughts) Pata nahi Sana ke results ka kya hua humein abhi tak phone nahi kiya.(He calls her but network busy)
Sana in a taxi(Traffic jam):- Are bhaiyaji jaldi chaliye na hum late ho rahe hain.
Taxi Driver(too  much irritated by Sana's to much chattered):- Are madam ye taxi hai Tarzan-the wonder car nahi jo hawa mein udha ke le jaoon.
Sana:- Baaton me toh bade ustaad ho humse bahas mat karna samjhe, chup-chap apni taxi chalao..
Taxi Driver(Folding his hands) Bhari galti ho gayi madam.Maaf kar dijiye.
NOW TRAFFIC JAM CLEARS
Sana:- Ab taxi start bhi karo.
( Ek BMW car peeche se taxi ko hit kar deti hai & uski backlight toot jati hai)
Taxi driver & Car driver ek doosre ko blame karne lagte hain.
Sana(to herself):- Haaye Rabba ab ek aur syapa,ab humein hi kuch karna padega.
Sana to both driver:-Are kya hua hain? kyun ek-dusre par chilla rahe ho?
Taxi Driver:- Dekhiye na madam. Humari taxi ki backlight todh di hai ab isse kaun theek karvayega.
Car Driver:- Humne jaan bujh kar nahi todi hai.Aur tum jaante bhi ho ki ye kiski Car hain?
Dono drivers ladne lagte hain. Sana now in her angry mode.
Sana to both drivers:-Bas band karo ye ladna. Ab hum faisla karenge kya karna hai.
Sana( to Car driver):- Iske nuksaan ke paise dete ho ya nahin.
Car Driver:- Bilkul bhi nahi.
Sana(to taxi driver):-Ye tumhe paise nahi dega par hum isse kuch or bhi le sakte hain.
Both drivers :- Wo kya??
Sana(to both drivers):- ( Wo do bade patthar utathi hai) Ek khoon ka badla do khoon aur taillight ka badla Headlight.Aur zor se patthar headlight pe de marti hai Car ke.
Car driver:- Oh Madam, ye aapne kya kiya. aapko andaaza bhi hai ye kiski car hai??
Sana:- Kiski car hai Barak Obama ki. Haan nahi toh. Ab samajh aaya na Sana se Panga lene ka matlab
Tabhi ek handsome, good looking guy usi car mein se bahar nikalta hai & or tabhi...

                                        Thanks for reading
If u like then I'll continue warna hum update nahi karenge haan nahi tohLOL.Pls hit like button & do comments if u really like this part.There is no scenes of UV & Manyata. But next chapter is full of MANVEER. I know this is a boring part but this is only a trailer, Picture abhi baki hai.If u want PM pls send me buddy request.Smile Tomorrow is sunday If  you like then double update treat by me.Love u all.Wink










Edited by sonam2801 - 07 July 2012 at 4:54pm

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
Loved it. Different and interesting concept.
Please please continue soon.

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
Very nice start... But u left a cliffhanger... Please update soon dear...and thanks for PM...

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 4:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fia21

Loved it. Different and interesting concept.
Please please continue soon.
Shukriya. shukriya hum kal apni kahani aage badayenge aur humara vyaktigat sandesa bhi appko bhejenge. wo bhi 2-2 updates. Thanks U're my FF's first reader so Double updates for fia.HugHug Humari taraf se ye Rain hugs.

Edited by sonam2801 - 07 July 2012 at 4:55pm

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 4:24pm | IP Logged
haha aya re aya hamara prince aya.Wink...btw gr8 update thanx for pm

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
Amazing concept it's very interesting
its different well thought
looking forward to Uday entry
Cont soon this time long update thanks for the pm just got on the laptop so thought I will read and comment now
 

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
wow the first part was mind blowing omg y did u stop there please update soon really cant wait for the next part update soon and thanks for the pm 

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
Nice start...

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