Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


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Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

DIL, DOSTI.. HUM!! ch25: pg 148,thread #2 link:pg1 (Page 120)

Madhuri53 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
loved it...
geet finds lots of things common in DD and maan...ufff kab samjhegi ye geet ye dono ek hi hai...
liked that even maan was not telling her that he is her DD...may be he is hurt in their first meeting...that she could not recognise him as her DD...and waiting for her to realise herself...
loved how he is ready to help her even in mid-night...she dosed off on him...very cute...
cont soon

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nats0101 IF-Dazzler

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Chapter 21


I woke up wid a smile on my face, my eyes still closed.. n feeling so wonderful.. a happiness I cudnt describe.. a warm feeling from within..

But what was different I wondered..

As alwaz I was in my room, on my bed, tucked in my favorite duvet..

Nothing unusual..


Then it struck me..

It was dis very usual surrounding tht was d unusual thng today..

I sat up wid a start, taking my surrounding in..

Hey babaji!!

I tried to recall last nyt.. n all I cud remember was maan being late bt still we decided to sort out d site issues n then..

 I was blank!!

Hey babaji.. then hw did I reach here.. did maan..?!!!

A forbidden image came to my mind..

N for a sec I was lost in it..

N then came d shyness n d embarrassment!!

Wht must he be thinking of me?

I cud vaguely rememeber cuddling into sm warmth? Resting my head on.. maan shoulder?

Hey babaji.. I m so dead.. I cud feel d warmth course thru my body.. n red color of my cheeks..

Wht was I thinking..?

Not only had I not managed to complete my work.. I had also slept off.. n worse still I had slept off on maan's shoulder.. I cud only guess his reaction..

But still he had been sweet enuf to tuck me safely into bed!!

I cud feel myself turn crimson..

N then I saw the clock.. 'twas already past ten.. I was still in bed!!

Hey babaji.. m so dead.. it wont take a sec for mr sweet to turn to dusht danav mode..

I hurriedly got up n was about to head in for a shower whn I noticed a paper by my laptop..




Geet ,

I ve completed all the work.. but still if u hv ny queries, feel free to call me..

I m sorry I shudnt hv totally ignored dis work..

But I ve already got a tight schedule for the next two days..!

Wht u've planned is great..!

So all d best for it..


PS: don't panic if u get up late.. I ve informed evrybdy at home n at work tht u ll b takin a half day.. bt if u don't feel upto it u can take a day off..


For a few minutes I guess I just stared at the beautifully hand written note tht maan had left behind.. my mind cud hardly process nythng for the moment!!

Wht was dis man?

The more I get to know him.. d more I feel der is to him!!

Nywaz I did manage to smhw clear myself out of dis web of thots n reach for work by lunch time..

Maan wasn't der bt I hardly missed him as all I cud think of was him!! I dint understand wht was happening to me.. bt like all thngs associated wid him.. I knew he was a mystery I just wasn't being able to unravel..

Plus I wasn't sure hw I d face him..

I dint even know whn d weekend passed off as we were working hard to meet the deadlines..

Just a week was left.. n my life was totally engrossed in work..

When I got back home.. all tired n famished, I was suddenly lifted in the air n swung arnd..

B4 I cud realize wht was happening, I was crushed in hug.. it took me a few sec to realize it was dev..

He was back!!

We looked at each other.. der was a weird awkwardness for a moment.. his sudden show of affection had taken me by surprise..

But then I chided myself.. dis was DD.. hw cud I feel awkward..

I hugged him back..

Bt smhw dis wasn't DD.. bt..

I moved out of the hug n den all of us sat down for dinner!! ie except maan..

As we sat down n chatted late into d nyt.. I forgot d awkwardness.. this is hw dev is..

Maan only turned up by arnd 12 n den he n dev continued talkin abt d project..

Thr was a glow on bth their faces.. dev's for having completed d project on his own while maan reflected d pride of his brother's achievement!!

I went to my room b4 I slept off in d hall itself.. flashes of tht nyt comin to me.


The project was completed.. n d clients appreciated my.. umm.. our work..

I was so so happy!!

Not just coz of the clients who praised my work bt also coz I dint let maan down!! I was on top of the world..

To celebrate the occasion, a casual party was planned.. for the KC employee and d clients!!

Wow.. I loved parties.. music n dancing.. !!

Bt maan being the khadoos .. made almost evry excuse under the sun to excuse himself bt smhw in d end he had to give up!!

I was so excited.. wid d theme being black n white.. I chose a short black dress bt at the last minute daadi n maa forced me to wear a white saree..

This was weird.. bt I dint hv ny option.. meer chose d accessories n did my make up coz I wasn't really into it!!

I went to the party wid dev who looked wow in white!! We matched a lot..

Bt wht blew me off was whn I saw maan in black!! He looked every bit like a greek god..!!

Wid his top three buttons undone.. giving a perfect glimse of his well chiseled body.. enuf to tease d senses of evry gal present!!

Hey babaji..

Every gal seemed to glancing his way..

He was definitely better off not socializing..!!

The party was great.. wid music, good food n dancing!! Which was precisely wht I was looking fwd to..

N thts why I immediately said yes to dance wid dev wen he asked me..

It felt nice.. he was flexible n a good dancer bt smthng felt incomplete..!!

Wht it was.. I dint know..!!

While still dancing.. I glanced at maan who sipping a drink n.. lookin at us?

Wid the same blank expression tht he had wen he held his meetings bt his eyes.. they had smthng..

He looked away..

When dev left to get us a drink, I walked to maan..

I don't know why bt I really wanted to dance wid him..


Don't know wht came over me, bt gathering all my courage I asked him for a dance..

He looked at me like I'd asked him smthng out of this world!

"sorry.. I don't dance..!!"

I was really hurt.. I walked away without listening to whtever he was going to say..

I knew he dint like socializing n all bt he cud agree.. atleast for me..

I felt terrible..

I dint even understand wht was happening in d party wht nyone was saying.. or doing..

I just wanted d comfort of my room!! I wanted to b alone!!

Bt guess it wasn't to b..

Coz evry1 was awake wen we got back home..

Bt I escaped dem all going to terrace.. wanting to find sm solace n sm fresh air..!!

I was totally lost in maan's refusal..


Suddenly I felt a hand grip my waist..


Music playing in the background..

It was maan..!!


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Edited by nats0101 - 19 August 2012 at 7:32am

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-Gemini- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Cute update...
Hope the precap won't be a dream...

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nishnal Senior Member

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Omg...geet askd maan 4 a dance n maan refusd it...:-( bt the precap is meantastic lets c wht haqny whn they manbje... LOL Wink

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 7:44am | IP Logged
nice part

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 7:50am | IP Logged
geet felt incomplete near dev maan denied dance

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 8:00am | IP Logged
omggg!!! dis part was jzt tooo gud! strtin wid him carrying her, n endin wid maan comin to her for a dance :):):)! update soon, cant wait fo d nxt part anymore!

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