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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
I love it Add! I hope you continue soon!

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 5:28pm | IP Logged
loved the os adden but for some reason all i do id pity her loved it continue soon

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 5:32pm | IP Logged
i like dit adden plz  do continue and ya plz do pm me when u post it plz thank you
She always comes in my dreams and ever since one and half year I have had the same dream, "Manyata beta, don't give up, the day you'll give up, I'll die" ' she hugs me and then leaves.
i was going to cry after reading this lines

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 6:27pm | IP Logged
Loved it yarr...it's so emitional... I was crying when manyata was talking abt DS...but it is nice to read such a lovely post... Please update soon dear and if possible please PM me...thanks

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
Seriousllyy Adden...I LOVED LOVED LOVED this!!! It was soo simple and sweeett...seriously amazing job! I really hope you will continue this..i actually felt bad for Manyata for the first time :( ..ahhh that line: I killed Uday...aww man i seriously hope that it doesnt happen for real and even if we do see a different cold Uday, that is doesnt last for a year and a half..i mena i do wnat Manyata to learn a lesson but not for that long! :O seriously though fantastic OS..i really enjoyed reading it :D
oh and ur making me miss DS!! Ouch


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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
u have written it beautifully portraying manyata's feelings.. Smile adden i was already feeling very bad for manyata.. ur post makes me almost cry.. CryCry
Cryi hope she is not treated like this for 2yrs by her family.. yes she does deserve to be taught a lesson for taking things granted but she definitely deserves better treatment than jay at least Cry

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
Wonderful job Adden...truely wonderful...this was the most touching OS i have read...brilliant...update asap n thanxxx a tons for the pm...!!

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
awesome addenStar i know u didt kill our uv bring him in part2Big smile update as soon as possible 

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