I killed Uday- OS! PART 3 on PAGE 12 Updated. - Page 3

Seriousllyy Adden...I LOVED LOVED LOVED this!!! It was soo simple and sweeett...seriously amazing job! I really hope you will continue this..i actually felt bad for Manyata for the first time :( ..ahhh that line: I killed Uday...aww man i seriously hope that it doesnt happen for real and even if we do see a different cold Uday, that is doesnt last for a year and a half..i mena i do wnat Manyata to learn a lesson but not for that long! :O seriously though fantastic OS..i really enjoyed reading it :D Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 11 years ago

u have written it beautifully portraying manyata's feelings.. 😊 adden i was already feeling very bad for manyata.. ur post makes me almost cry.. 😭😭
😭i hope she is not treated like this for 2yrs by her family.. yes she does deserve to be taught a lesson for taking things granted but she definitely deserves better treatment than jay at least 😭

Wonderful job Adden...truely wonderful...this was the most touching OS i have read...brilliant...update asap n thanxxx a tons for the pm...!!

awesome adden⭐️ i know u didt kill our uv bring him in part2😃 update as soon as possible 

Amazing OS Adden, you are killing me with suspense! Can't wait till Sunday for u to update WTWTTW :)

w-o-w...dats ol i can say u r suj a beautiful writer keep it up...👏.loved every line of it

Sooo goooddd!!!! lovely!!! loved it to thecore!!! felt manyata's pain!!!! loved it!!! cntinue krna!!! love u sis!! and ially u udating ur ff!!

urghh!!! kab update karoge adden..dying wid suspense!!
kya sach mein uv ko m ne maara? i am loosing my sleep...

OMG what an OS! Wow Adden it's amazing... 👏 I loved it.. Continue soon... Will be waiting for it...

awesom OS adden loved it😊