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Posted: 04 July 2012 at 2:16pm | IP Logged

Guys I am finally starting my first ff.

 

In a small town of Punjab, Amritsar there was a huge mansion. The mansion was big and the condition of it was poor. U could tell that the family of the house was very poor. Yet the family is really respectful. It starts of with a girl on the terrace, working on a sewing machine. Finally her face appeared and the girl was Preeto. Her dad called her- PREETO!

She quickly picked up the clothes and went downstairs. Preeto- han papaji

Papaji put the newspaper down and looked up at Preeto. Papaji- hmmm, mera puttar aaj phir se nahi so ya.

Preeto- kya papaji kal hi toh Nirmila aunty ne itna saara kam dey diya hai.

Papaji- toh na leyti na leyti yeh kam

Preeto- kya Papaji abhi ek mahenye pehle Meeta di ki shaadi hua hai, uska kars utar na hai aur abhi kal toh Ishu di ka rishta tey hua hai. Upar sey iss ghar ki maramat bhi karani hai.

Papaji- rab hai na bacha

Bj- han saarey kam sirf rab pey choud do.

Preeto- Bj bilkul sahi key rahi hai Papaji, abhi toh Ishu di ki shaadi bhi  toh karni hai. Sonu Bani ki padhae aur kuch peyse bhi toh bachaney hai.

Papaji gets upset- aaj mein firse publishing house jaaney wala hon aur agar unhe meri novel pasand ae toh fir tu bhi iss din raat ki mehnat se shaanti paegi.

Bj- o mein toh pandara (15) saalo se keh rahi hon key anki novel chaap jaani chahiyeh taki hum radi wale ko dey de.

Preeto- o ho Bj ap kyun tension ley rahe ho.

Bj- tension keyse na karo Preeto keyse na karon. Agar tu nahi hoti toh yeh chaat toh humarey sir pey bhi nahi hoti. Meeta ki shaadi tune karae, humne usse betti ka janam diya lekin tune usse uska dosra janam diya ek patni honey ka janam. Teri shaadi bhi toh ek din honi hai.

Preeto- Bj please meine kitni baar kaha hai key mujhe yeh shaadi whaadi nahi karni.

Papaji- Preeto tu bhi kisi ki amanat hai.

Preeto- han mein amanat hon lekin sirf apne Bj Papaji ki.

Bj- ladki jab tu shaadi kar key chali jaegi na tab bhaut yaad aegi teri.

Preeto tries to calm her anger- Bj thik hai mein shaadi karongi lekin chahiye beheno mein mera number 3rd kyun na hon shaadi mein 5th aega.

Papaji- thik hai meri maa jeyse teri marsi ab jaa apni beheno ko oatha key la.

Preeto nods, puts the clothes on the bench/sofa  thingy and goes to Ishu's bedroom first. She sees Ishu  sleeping peacefully. Preeto- Ishu di chalo oatho subha hue hai.

She opens the curtains. Ishu wakes up. Ishu- kya Preeto itni acchi neend a rahi thi aur oatha diya.

Preeto- kyun sapne mein apkey hone wale patti dev, Dhruv ae the

Ishu- hmmm, jab tera ashiq teri zindagi mein ae ga na tab dekhengay.

Preeto- ya right

Ishu- jab tera rishta hoga na tab dekhengay.

Preeto gets angry again- tum sab kyun haath dhokey mere pechey pade ho. Shaadi nahi karni nahi karni nahi karni.

She leaves her room and Ishu smiles. Preeto goes to Sonu's room. Sonu is sleeping with her glasses on and a science book on her. Preeto goes to Sonu and takes her glasses and her book and puts it aside. Preeto smiles- Sonu' Sonu chalo oat.

Sonu wakes up and checks the time. Sonu- kya di aaj mera test tha meine kaha tha na key mujhe jaldi oathana.

Preeto- betta tu kal raat key tin baaje tak study kar rahi thi.

Sonu- fir bhi.

Preeto gets up and goes to Bani's room. Bani is messy, she has headphones on which were supposed to be plugged to the radio. The radio was off. Preeto plugs the headphones to the radio and turns on the radio on a high volume. Bani's sleep breaks and she gets up. Bani turns the radio off and Preeto leaves her room. 



Edited by JessLucus - 13 March 2013 at 9:16pm

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Yes finally someone wrote a ff. Sneha well i know that she wont update for like another ten days. Aqeelah stopped, dont know about Aneesah and Gurmi well she says tom and she'll update like a month later.

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Nice one Jassica i am remembering 1st  episode  loved itSmile

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Jess sweet start...waiting for next part...

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The phone was ringing at the Dhillon house and Preeto gets the phone. Preeto- sasriakal

Aunty- sasriakal Preeto mein aur tere chacha aaj Amritsar a rahe hai.

Preeto- kyun chachiji koi kas waja

Aunty- woh actually Amritsar key bas hi tere chacha ji ki ek meeting hai

Preeto- meeting achnak se hue kya

Aunty- nahi nahi hum toh bas sab ko surprise deyna chahata.

Preeto's mind- surprise deyna chahate they ya khaney key peyse nahi karach ney they.

Aunty- puttar kaha hai tu

Preeto- han yahi hon.

Aunty- thik hai toh tu a jaana airport pey shayam 7 bhaaje.

Preeto- han chachi mein aongi.

Preeto puts the phone down in frustration and yells- BJ PAPAJI BANI SONU ISHU DI CHALO GHAR KI SAFAE SURO KARO! MOOSIBAT A RAHI HAI!

Ishu quickly runs downstairs to Preeto. Ishu- kyunsi moosibat.

Bj- kyun chillah rahi hai.

Preeto- Chachi aur Chacha ji a rahe hai.

Bani- NAHI!

Preeto- shut up Bani

Sonu- kitney baajey a rahe hai.

Preeto- aaj saat baaje.

Bani- NAHI!

Preeto- arrey tu kya pagal hai jo baat baat pey nahi nahi chilati hai. Nahi nahi

Papaji- lekin leyney kyun jaega.

Preeto- mein aur kun

Ishu- mein facial kareney jaaney wali thi.

Preeto- thik hai jao lekin pehle ghar ki safae kar dey na.

Ishu- thik hai thik hai.

Bj- Preeto Ishu Bani Sonu chalo safae karna chalo karo.

Sonu- meri test hai kal

Bani- meri bhi ek test hai kal.

Ishu- meri...

Preeto- appointment hai... lekin  woh saat baaje hai.

Ishu- fine

Papaji- mein toh publisher saab key yaha jaana hai.

Bj- haye meri jhootno (knees) mein bhaut dard hai toh fir saara kam Ishu aur Preeto ko karna padega.

Preeto- thik hai.

Ishu and Preeto are cleaning the house and Ishu- haye Preeto mein toh thak gae. Tu safae kar mein paani pi kar atti hon.

Preeto- thik hai.

Ishu goes. Preeto gets busy cleaning the house and Ishu didnt return for hours. Ishu was in her room reading the magazines and Preeto was done cleaning the house. Preeto- Ishu di kabhi kuch kam nahi karti. Lekin ab kahana bana ney mein mein unki koi madat nahi karongi. ISHU DI

Ishu drops the magazine and rushes to Preeto. Ishu looks around- arrey wow... tuney toh itna accha ghar saf kiya hai.

Preeto smiles- really... dont flatter me ab jao aur poora kahana kud baanao.

Ishu- kya... ab dekho toh saara ab 6:10 baaje hai mujhe apni appointment pey jaana hai.

Preeto- o hello sara kam meine kud kiya hai aur ap kahana bhi nahi baanaogay. Its not done.

Ishu- what to do appointment key baad koi refunds bhi nahi hai..

Preeto- thik hai jao.

Ishu- thank u... lekin Preeto peyse dey na.

Preeto- mere pas nahi hai.

Ishu- jhoot maat bol tuney aaj Nirmala aunty ko unkey kapdey diye they na aur unhoney tujhe peyse bhi toh diyeh they.

Preeto- lekin Ishu di woh Bani aur Sonu ki fees key liye hai.

Ishu- o ho unhoney kya baada kam karna hai baada ho key.

Preeto- shut up di mein kuch bhi karongi lekin Bani aur Sonu ko apni life kud jee ney ki azadi dilah key rahongi.

Ishu- whatever lekin please peyse dey na

Preeto- nahi

Ishu- dekh abhi toh iss maheney ka pehla hafta hai na baad mein aur jama kar deyna.

Preeto gives up and gives Ishu the money. Then she goes to the kitchen to make the food. Preeto is done making the food by 6:40. She made paneer tikka, dak makhani, tondori roti, rice, sarso da saag, kheer. Bj comes down. Bj- arrey wow... baana diya Ishu ne kahana.

Preeto- Ishu di aur kahana no ways Bj... ek toh safae mein madat nahi ki aur fir meine jab unhe kahana bananey key liye kaha toh unhone kaha key unki appointment hai.

Bj- kya uss nalayak ney kuch nahi kiya.

Preeto- hmmm. Bj mujhe late ho raha hai mein chalti hon.

Bj- mein uss Ishmeet ko aj khana hi nahi dongi.

Preeto goes to her room and gets dressed in a long red skirt, a white tank top and a blue denim jacket. Preeto then goes to the airport and meet her aunt and uncle. Preeto is waiting for them at the airport when a guy bumps into her. The guy has short hair, had a 100% shave, he was wearing black jeans, a white t-shirt and a black leather jacket. He was carrying a hand bag. The guy was obviously Rajbeer. Rajpreet bumped into each other and Preeto dropped her phone. Preeto got mad- hey dekh key chala nahi atta kya.

Rajbeer- im so sorry mein bhaut jaldi mein hon.

Preeto- toh kya doosro ko jaldi nahi hoti kya

Rajbeer- listen meine sorry keh diya hai na

Preeto tries to make her phone work. Preeto- god' mera phone bhi tout gaya ab issi firse repair mein dey na padega.

Rajbeer- mein apko naya phone lakey donga.

Preeto sighs and leaves her anger- its okay.

Rajbeer- nahi mujhe apko ek naya phone dey na chahiye.

Preeto's uncle comes- Preeto.

Preeto looks up and says- its okay

Rajbeer-Preeto apna last name toh baatakey jao... takey mein tumhe dhoond sakho aur naya phone don.'

Preeto- its okay

Rajbeer- email

Preeto smiles- no

Rajbeer- cell phone number

Preeto- agar phone hi nahi chalega toh number ka kya karogay.

Rajbeer smiles and scratches the back of his head because of his silliness. Preeto smiles and then leaves. Aunty- Preeto kun tha woh

Preeto- koi nahi we just bumped into each other.

Uncle-  chaley

Preeto- chalo 



Edited by JessLucus - 06 July 2012 at 12:16pm

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Awww my Rajbeer enteredHeart and Rajpreet's 1st meeting also niceThumbs Up ...heheh  Rajbeer asking cell no and loves preeto reply
how again Rajbeer meets preeto waiting waiting 

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Good one Jess...waiting for next part and for Rajpreet next meet..

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Aunt and Uncle  come home. Aunt- paripona behenji

Bj- jeendi reh

Papaji comes. Uncle- paripona paji paripona bhabhi ji

Papaji- paripona Rajindar.

Bani- chalo chalo khana khaney chalo

Bj ' han

But Bj takes Ishu's hand and takes her aside. Bj- kaha maar gae thi tu

Ishu- Bj agar mein marti toh mein yaha keyse atti.

Bj- chup kar tujhe acchi tarah se patta hai na key Preeto bahar key saath ghar ka kam bhi karti hai lekin tu' tut oh kisi ki madat hi nahi karti.

Ishu- o ho relax Bj

Bj- accha hai key shakal dekh key Dhruv ney shaadi key liye han kaha hai warna sanskar jeysi toh koi chise hi nahi hai.

Ishu- sanskar mujhe mein nahi hai.

Bj- han zara Preeto se kuch sik

Ishu- kya Bj jeans, T-shirts, dresses, skirts yeh sab who pehenti hai aur mujh mein koi sanskar nahi hai.

Bj- ek insaan ki pehchan uskey kapdo se nahi hoti. Koi insaan jeyse kapde pehen ta hai weyse uske sanskar nahi hote.

Ishu- whatever mujhe bhook lagi hai

Bj- koi khana nahi mile ga tujhe.

Ishu- kyun

Bj- koi kam kiya hai tune

Meanwhile Sonu comes. Sonu- Chacha ji Chachi ji

She rushes to them. Uncle- keysa hai mera puttar.

Sonu- perfect

Uncle- result keysa aya.

Sonu- first in everything.

Uncle- good.

He takes out money from his pocket and gives it to Sonu. Uncle- jo chahe woh ley leyna.

Sonu takes the money- thank u chacha ji.

When no one was looking, Aunty whispers in Uncle's ear- kya zarorat thi peyse deyney ki.

Uncle just ignores her. Ishmeet gets upset and goes to the terrace. Preeto recalls Bj saying Ishmeet ko khana nahi dongi.

Everyone is eating and Preeto gets up. Bani- kya hua di

Preeto- woh aaj mein terrace pey Ishu di key saath kahana khaongi.

Preeto takes two dishes of food and goes to the terrace. Preeto- Ishu di

Ishu turns around to Preeto. Ishu- kya hai.

Preeto- dinner is here.

Ishu smiles and says- thank u bhook key marey meri jaan  ja rahi thi.

Preeto gives Ishu her plate and the sister eat their dinner while staring at the sky.

 

Dinning table'

Uncle- paji meine soch raha tha key Preeto ko mere saath Mumbai ley chalon.

Papaji- woh waha jakey kya karegi.

Uncle-  kya paji' Preeto ek bhaut acchi interior designer hai ap kyun usse kapdo ki designing kara rahe hon aur woh bhi ek local designer ki post pe.

Bj- toh kya karey Amritsar mein interior designing bhaut kam thodi atti hai.

Aunt- issi liye toh behenji' hum usse apne saath Mumbai ley jaatey hai aur waha pey interior designing karegi.

Papaji-  lekin Parmindar woh abhi razi hai ya nahi woh hume nahi patta

Aunt- toh poch lo na  usse.

Bj- poch toh leyngay lekin woh rahe gi kaha.

Uncle- kya parjae hum koi parae hai kya.

Papaji- nahi nahi Rajindar'. Tujse woh ehsaan nahi leygi.

Uncle- ehsaan kis baat ka'. Thik hai toh woh humarey ghar mein rahe gi toh uska hum usse rent leyngay aur fir jab woh kud ka ghar afford kar sakey tab woh waha chali gaegi.

Bj- yeh baat sahi  hai.

Papaji- thik hai usse aaj raat ko baat karta hon

Aunt- yeh hue na baat' agar uski han hai toh humarey saath ki tickets ley lete hai

Bj- thik hai.

Bani- wow I cant believe di agar chahati hai toh woh Mumbai jaegi' waha pey Amitabh Bachan, Genelia Deshmukh, Shahrukh Khan, Katrina Kaif. Too good.

Bj- woh waha pey kam karney jaegi actors se milne nahi.

 

NIGHT'.

The elders call Preeto in the living room and night. Bj- Preeto.

Preeto comes, Preeto- han Bj

Bj- puttar tujse ek baat pochni thi

Preeto- kya Bj

Papaji- kya tujhe Mumbai jana hai

Preeto- kya baat kar rahe ho Papaji' itna sara kharcha hai aur ap keh rahe ho key Mumbai jana hai

Papaji- waha pey interior designing ka kam karney.

Preeto- kitne waqt key liye

Papaji- puttar teri marzi, agar tu chahe toh ek saal, do saal ya teri poori zindagi.

Preeto thinks for a while- thik hai Papaji' lekin mein kaha rahongi.

Uncle- humarey yaha

Preeto- nahi chachaji mujhe apki free help nahi chahiye.

Aunty- rent deyna padega tujhe

Preeto- fir thik hai.



Edited by JessLucus - 09 July 2012 at 3:27pm

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