THE HIDDEN PAIN - Page 4

glossyglassy

@glossyglassy

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

great update!

So Prithvi is also a criminal...but a righteous one

They met...

Waiting for them to talk

Lets see how she earns his trust and how they track Raghu together

Eagerly waiting for next updtae

thx for pm

Lov u...

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744961

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

nice update!!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊

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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

IF-Stunnerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

nice but short part
continue soon

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shruja

@shruja

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

nice update
so prithvi is criminal
atlast she met prithvi

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

nice one di...super intresting story line
let's see prithvi will help her or not
update soon
luv u :-)

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rockstarashu

@rockstarashu

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

concept seems wonderful and different please do continue soon

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Priya Sharma

@Priyart12

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

[b]awww :D
u r so swt di
luv u
inna sara 🤗
la la lala la lala
m on 7th sky
ek bada wala THNKU 😊
me as mugz
i mean as hes choti sis
muggu ki choti sis to ho skti hu na 😉
now abt ss
so our muggu is CBI officer
luv to see mugz as CBI
our hero pakka criminal hoga
tbi to bnegi ek romantic luv story 😳 🤗
ye dekha prithvi criminal h 😉
ab ye raghu kis khet ki muli ka naam h
kitna bhi tez ho ye
bt prithvi se jyada nhi h
or fir yha to do most talanted bande h PRITHVI n PRIYA
band bajne wali h teri to 😉
w8ing for next ud [b]

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sultanahabeeb

@sultanahabeeb

Groupbie

Posted: 11 years ago

truly u r a very very wonderful writer

hatts off nd a biggg salute,plzzz accept

nd add me in ur pm list for all ur ff nd ss now nd in future also

thanks

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riya

@Riyaa16

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

di want a ud...pls ud soon this one also

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