IBADAT- RTMC ff (part 4- pg no. 7) - Page 4

nice part

Hey I m glad dat u gave an update nd dat too such wow update.

So prithvi had a fight with his dad...

I m more interested to know, who has changed with time of d two. By looking at current track, it must b prithvi

But I will b happy, if it is other way round, bcoz y shud girls hav all d pain...???

Update soon sweetheartEdited by samu_khamkar - 11 years ago

wow awesome update after so many daysss😃

thanks for updating after long time and for pm!!
awesome update!!
so prithvi left coz of fights with his dad!!
wht happend between his mom n dad?
so his mom n nanhi's (loved this pet name to mugz) mom were frnds
and he respects nanhi's mom!!
nanhi still heartbroken
and now prithvi is returning!!
lets see will she able to recognise her best frnd n love!
Edited by shruja - 11 years ago

di ..
 pehle tho seriously a hugggy shuggy to you for updating it finally...
dis story is a serious suspense.. nn may be thriller too
...

pehle tho aapne itni baar past past past likha ki laga iss past mei hi guss jaon ye dekhne k liye..
 actuaalyy wat is it jisne prithvi ko itni pain diya...
postpartum karne ka mann kerr rha h iska

and secondly...
itna capturing update tha ki main ruk hi nhi aapyi aapne aap ko first part phirr se read karne k liye...
ek reason ye bhi ho sakta h ki iss update mei ek bhi rtmc scene nhi tha..
 i m missing rtmc badly..
 so .. so..
 maine first prt phirr padha.

nanadini is broken..
 she is pathetic wid out prithvi...
 pratap unkle..
 he is rude a bit..
 avanatika aunty ne chodd diya unhe...
 ismain prithvi ki kya galti...
 why he is rude to him...

vir uncle is gud..
 i quite liked him..
sushma aunty is sweet.. n very kind hearted...

best scene ws- jab aapne kaha ki suhma aunty ne sabse pehle prithvi ko 1 yr old dekha tha...
wen he ws trying to walk...
 scho chweeettt...
 kya chubby baby ki image aati h samne


10 years later...
 by god..
 nandini ka intazaar 10 saal lamba h...
its the limit...

hawhh!!!...

di, seriously want their next meeting in next update plz...

dekh lo..
 serious wali badi wali big approach h..
 plz dena, next ud mei prithvi nandu ki meeting...
 after 10 years...


kya magical love effect aata h na...socker hi..10 years baad do lovers ka milan...


lov u di,..
 miss u too..

 
Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago

di maine bhi ek title socha h...

thoda deep h..
 so i want to actually explain u dis thing..
 why? how? n what?

jab main bed per juzt sone jaa rhi thi..
 just before slepp..
 my all thoughts are captured by rtmc..
so, last nite, its ws your ff.. rtmc ff..

maine bhi socha ek title..
 n evn a PUNCH/THEME LINE...

title i suggest is IBADAT..
  its meaning is worship..

jaise hum god se pyaar karte h..
 though humne kabhi unhe dekha nhi h.. n all...widout any reason we belive in him, lov him...

d same is love.. it happens wid no reason...

aage piche u can add-
 ishq idabat...
..
ibadat is cute...


punch line is...
 inspired frm ur prologue ki ye line...
He will stand against the whole world for her but the question is will he stand against her…………???.


so finally it is-

PYAAR KO PAANA HUMESHA USSE HASSIL KARNA NAHI HOTA...USSE JITNA HOTA H...

thodi senti line h na...boring bhi hogi...
 but aapki serious story k liye perfect h...
 i feel.. strongly...

I MEAN, AAP YAHAN PER NORMAL LOVE SE KUCH HATKE DEKHA RAHE HO I FEEL..
 SO ISKE LIYE THO PUNCH LINE ACHI HI H...

aap isse add karoge kya???


Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago

great going plzzz updt soon and pm me too

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