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glossyglassy

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 1:26am | IP Logged
I loved the first part di!!!!!
The way u showed their bond was amazing
Wondering why Prithvi left
Eagerly waiting for next update
Lov u...
 
 
P.S  Manali..Prithvi...horses...everything reminded me of PriDa...Why don't u post a PriDa version of this story...just a suggestion...hope u don't mind di...


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rtmclover

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 2:34am | IP Logged
thanx 4 d pm dear...loved d first prt...d way u described nandini's emotion n pains for prithvi is magnificient...feeling sad 4 her...waiting for prithvi's comeback n d nxt part...by d way wats d name of ur story???...aeway thanx 4 pm once again.

tejjo

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged
omg myuri what an update

loved it
its amazing yr

i loved the way u started the story

n then the childhood story its fabulous
oh nandni was crying for prithvi

so lovely they loved each other from childhood their love going to be vry strong

i love the scene when he cares her injury so lovely...n then wild horse ko handle kiye usne

oh so sweet nandni ne use danta bhi or prithvi use i love kehte kehte ruk gya

i jst loved this childhood story bt prithvi nandu ko bina btaye studies ke liye kyun chala gya koi fight hui thi kya uska bhi flashback dena pls

first scene mein nandu kitna royi thi uski innocent questions ko me visualise kar rhi thi
or nandu ki mom kitne pyar se usko answer kar rhi thi so sweet

i just waiting ki jb wo bde honge or ek dusre se milenge to unka kya reaction hoga

ud soon
pls jaldi karna
luv u

rasp_berry

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Firstly I luv u for starting such a fab. Story dat too on rtmc :*

so they got separated from each other in their childhood, dats really sad :( ;(

i think prithvi is aware of his feelings towards nandu. As Rashu said dat may b prithvi is from rich or royal family nd nandu may b a daughter of servant or something like dat :|   :|

but in ur prologue, it says dat a boy is fighting for his love... So may b nandu will change when they grow up but he still remains d same... OR

may due to d fear of society nd family she rejects his feelings... Oh god, i'll go mad if u don't ud soon as i will keep thinking abt further story. So plz ud soon.

But y don't u give a name to dis story??

swati_prithvi

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 10:31am | IP Logged
It's damn superb Mayuri dear..
I luvd d 1st part..
they both luv each-other so much..
Y Prithvi left widout telling Nandini anything?
I really wanna know..
giv nxt ud soon..& giv PM plz..

shruja

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Posted: 07 July 2012 at 6:09am | IP Logged
thanks for writing & sharing rtmc ff
sorry for late comment
prologue is very nice
loved 1st update!! very beautifully written
liked how he saved her from wild horse
so he loved her from their childhood
very sad tht he had to left her for studies
or he had sent purposely to keep him away from her?

tejjo

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Posted: 14 July 2012 at 7:00am | IP Logged
myuri pls ud soon

--Ruchi--

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Nice update dear..continue soon.

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