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IBADAT- RTMC ff (part 4- pg no. 7)

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Posted: 02 July 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged
hey guys...i m mayuri...  I m writing a new story on our favorite jodi RTMC.Smile
I m posting its prologue, its very short but do comment on it and let me know whether i should continue it or not. 


Edited by mddmayuri - 30 May 2013 at 2:50am

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Posted: 02 July 2012 at 4:03am | IP Logged
PROLOGUE 

''People says a Person can never change his destiny, a person can run from everything expect his destiny, but little did they know that destiny can be change with the power of love, power of faith, power of prayer.'' There are very few people who can change their destiny and it includes one boy who lives in Manali. Who has ability to change his destiny, Who is ready to face any danger to fight for his love.  He will fight for the girl who meant to him everything. He will stand against the whole world for her but the question is will he stand against her…………???.


so guys this is the prologue..press the like button if you like it and do let me know your true opinionsOuch 



Edited by mddmayuri - 02 July 2012 at 4:10am

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Posted: 02 July 2012 at 4:28am | IP Logged
mujhe acha laga, bhott acha laga...
prologue, powerful h,

rt k character main dum h..
bhott brave h, 
but hamuri mc ko kuch serious na karna di, 

rt has to stnd against her.. dats wrying
i mean, uski death matt karna.. or kinda..

 dono jinda n sahi salamat chahiye...Day Dreaming

mc ka bhi thoda hint do na di.. her role...

but i excited for dis stry..
 plz cont. it...

and title ka kya hoa??

title h na, aapke paas...
nhi h, tho i will suggest .usmain tho main number one hun. Embarrassed

lov u di, strt soon, sooper soon..Day Dreaming


Edited by sweetsanyo - 02 July 2012 at 7:24pm

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Posted: 02 July 2012 at 5:01am | IP Logged
vry nice yr

loved the prologue
it seems intresting

pls cont soon
luv u

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Posted: 02 July 2012 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Destiny is determined by one's willful participation...so can be changed.!
coming to prologue , its nice and interesting...rajat's character seems firm and brave...looking forward to this story...

continue soon...thanx for PM.


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Posted: 02 July 2012 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Interesting prologue...esp the last line..very promising
Waiting for 1st updateAre you going to title the story??
Thx for PM
Cont soon
Lov u...

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Posted: 02 July 2012 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
 Thanx dear for starting New RtmC Ff
Liked the Prolouge .It's representing Suspense and Rajat haracter very nicely
 loved .n story is interasting.
plzz continue soon
n the last line ..He has to stand against her .means ...
update soon
wanted to read further .
love u
 

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Posted: 05 July 2012 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsanyo

mujhe acha laga, bhott acha laga...
prologue, powerful h,

rt k character main dum h..
bhott brave h, 
but hamuri mc ko kuch serious na karna di, 

rt has to stnd against her.. dats wrying
i mean, uski death matt karna.. or kinda..

 dono jinda n sahi salamat chahiye...Day Dreaming

mc ka bhi thoda hint do na di.. her role...

but i excited for dis stry..
 plz cont. it...

and title ka kya hoa??

title h na, aapke paas...
nhi h, tho i will suggest .usmain tho main number one hun. Embarrassed

lov u di, strt soon, sooper soon..Day Dreaming

are rashu...dont worry mein rtmc ko sahi salamat rakhungi puri story mein...
and abt the title...meine abhi tak socha nahi hai...agar tumhein koi title aacha lage toh plz batana...
and thanks a lot for ur lovely comment...
luv u
 

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