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Next scene:

Bhoomi is sittting on the bad Arjun took her into his arms.

B:Kaisa laga khana?
A:Hmmm acha tha..magar utna nahin jitna tum banati ho.
B:Waisey maza aya choroon ki tarah khana khanay main.
They both heard the sound of clouds thundering.
B:Yeh baarish tu lagata hai ruknay ka naam nahin legi.
A:Acha hai na rukay(getting romantic)aur maza karnay ka dil chah raha hai.
B:Arjun koi nahin dekh liya na "shaadi ki pehli baarish"main maza lanay ka anjaam.Ab please aur nahin.
A:Aray main kab keh raha hoon phir se dance karney ke liye.
B:Tu?
A:Aray baarish honey do waisey hi itna pyaara mausam hai main tu woh doosra wala maza laney ki baat kar raha hoon.
B:Kaun sa maza?
A:Woh humari jo baat usdin adhori reh gayee thi.Beta bhi chahiye beti bhi chahye....
B:Haan aur mainey tumhein kamray se nikaal diya tha.
A:Kyunke main office ke liye late ho raha tha is liye chala gaya tha.Laken aaj tu main kisi cheez ke liye bhi late nahin horaha kunke kal Sunday hai.
B:Tu phir?
A:Tu phir yeh ke hum usdin tu mehnat nahin kar sakay tu abhi se shuru kar detay hain.
B:Mehnat.
A:Haan(he kissed her on the cheek, and than switch off the light)

 

To be continued............



Edited by Lois_Lane - 19 June 2006 at 3:40am

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Next morning in heritage house Arjun is sitting in the garden with keshav.

K:Wah kya mausam hai aisay mausam main tu loog ghoomte hain tafreeh kartey hain mauj udatey hain bhale puri khatey hain......
A:Bus bus bus tafreeh hum baad main karengain pehley kuch kaam ki baat karlein.
K:Hum nahin sirf main tum tu bahut tafreeh kar chuke main tu aponi baat kar raha hoon.
A:Arjun raised his brow(he blushes and murmers...)kahin isay pata tu nahin chal gaya kay main aur bhavri....
K:Kahan kho gaye?
A:Aaah...hmmm kuch nahin.
(They dont know that Bhoomi is stnading behind them and she overhears their conversation)
K:Aray bhoomi.
B:Apki chai.
A:Aur meri?
B:Tumharay paas do haath hain khud banalo.Humh.
She goes.
K:Isay kya hua?
A:Pata nahin.
K:Pata nahin.Laken mujhe pata hai.
A:Tumhay kya pata hai?
K:Yeh hi kay tum duno ka koi jaghra hua hoga.
Arjun says nothing.
K:Hain na(meaningfully)
Arjun hide his face in the file.

In the night Bhoomi is standing in front of the window and the moonlight is comming direct on her face.
Arjun comes and stands with her.
B:Aaj kitney dinoo kay baad chand nikla hai na.
A:Mujhay kya farq parta hai mera chand tu har waqt meray saath meray paas rehta hai.
B:(She smiles)waisey mujhey na tum pay bahut ghussa a raha hai.
A:Kyun mainey kya kiya?
B:App nay yeh kiya hai kay usdin Baarish main dance karney wali baat subko pata chal gayee thi.Na tum baarish main dance karney ki zid kartey woh bhi ghar kay bahar aur nahi....keshav bhaiyya ko bhi pata nhain kaisey pata chal gaya.
A:Bhavri ab dekh liya tu dekh liya.Hum husband wife hain.
B:Kuch bhi ho tum wada karo kay aaj kay baad...
A:Aaaj kay baad...
B:Kabhie bhi baarish main....
A:Kabhie bhi baarish main...
B:Dance nahin karengain....
A:Ghar kay bahar dance nahin karengay.
B:Ghar kay bahar kab kaha mainey.
A:Laken mainey kaha hai.
B:Arjun....
A:Aray bhavri Baarish main loog kya kya nahin kartey hum nay tu sirf dance hi kiya tha na.
B:Tum nahin mano gay.
A:Theek hai meri jaan ab jo bhi karengain ghar kay andar karengay.
B:Haan.Thanx.Waisay kuch bhi hai tumne hummari shaadi ki pehli baarish ko bahut yaadgaar bana diya Arjun.
A:Haan is main tu kher koi shak nahin hai.

A:Tu karay?
B:Kya?
A:Jo bhi humain karna hai.
A:Jaisay dance.
B:Dance!!!(she laughs)
A:Dekho ab Sunday khatam honay main sirf aik ghanta baqi hai phir 12 baj jaayenge aur bajay ke baad time kitni jaldi guzar jata hai so lets start.....
He took her into his arms and she put her head on his shoulders and they dance.
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That's all friends "Howzattt"like it please post your comments.Whether it is good or bad.





Edited by Lois_Lane - 20 June 2006 at 1:12am

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very very very good n sweet..
u shud keep writing.. Smile

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great !!!!u must def continue to write cause u do such an excellent job!!!!
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yeah i am agree 100% with tunna and kkituu
u should continue ur fanfic!!

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