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Nice part pls cont.

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Recap:
AB were dancing in the rain in order to celebrate the first rain of their wedding and in the morning they both catch cold and everybody on the breakfast table next day gave them meaning ful gestures and statements(Suraj,Manasavi,Khushi and Baisa)After that:- 


In the noon Arjun is sitting in his office doing some work on his laptop he heard the sound of thunder he close his laptop and go the window on the other side Bhoomi is also standing in front of the window and enjoying the rain Arjun smiles and remember the last night and Bhoomi also they both smile and sneeze.

Cut short to AB room where Bhoomi is still standing in front of window smiling than Shefali comes.

Shefali:Aa...aham.
B:Aray bhabi aap(she saw shefali has a bowl and spoon in a tray in her hands.
B:Yeh kya hai?
S:Mainey soocha key aaj saara khana main banao itna acha mausam hai tu koi mazay ki cheez bana loon is tarah khana banana bhi seekh jaon gi.
B:Acha kya kya banaya hai aap ne.
S:Biryani,Bharta,Kheer,Pakoday aur bhi bahut kuch... aur tumharay liye yeh soap.(By saying this she smiles)
B:Soap!!!!!
S:Haan woh tumhein itna zukaam ho raha tha aur zukaam ki wajah se tu bukhaar bhi jaldi charh jata hai na is liye mainey tumharay liye soap banaya hai ab tum biryani yeh sub kuch tu nahin kha sakti.Hai na.(says meaningfully.
B:(cinfused)Haan!! a Ji.
S:Ab zara pi kar batao kaisa bana hai.
B:She did.(drink one spoon)
B:Bahut acha bana hai Bhabhi aap ne baqi saara khan bhi bahut acha hi banaya hoga.
S:O thanx Bhumi phir bhi itna acha tu nahin jitna tum banati ho bas koshish ki hai.(Bhoomi smiles)
S:Aur is baat ka bahut afsoos hoga mujhe kay pehli baar sub ghar waloon ke liye mainey saara khaana khud banaya hai laken tum aur Arjun kha nahin saktey.

B:Bhoomi looks surprisingly at her.
B:Bhoomi gives a fake smile and says:Koi baat nahin hum soap hi peelangay yeh bhi bahut.........(she sneezes aaaachheeee!!!!)

Shefali smiles "acha main chalti hoon soap bahut sara hai tumharay aur Arjun ke liye bahut hoga aur raat ko bhi chal jaayega.

B:(Murmurring)kahin Shefali bhabhi ne mujhay aur Arjun ko dekh tu nahin liya tha dance kartey huay????
Shefali is still standing out of the room she smiles and than walk away.

Arjun calls Bhoomi on her cell phone Bhoomi picks up her cell phone and says:

B:Arjun ji aur kaisay enjoy kar rahay hain aap humari shaadi ki pehli baarish ko.
A:(He sneezes)kaam kartay kartay itna nahin thaka jitna chicktay huay thak gaya hoon.
B:Chuch..chuc..chuch bahut bura hua.Ab jaldi se ghar aajao Shefali bhabhi nay hum do bimaar logoonke liye khaas khaana banaya hai.(Ironic)
A:Acha.Ok main jaldi say apna kaam khatam kar kay ata hoon.

Cut short to AB's room Bhoomi is waiting for Arjun it is 11:00 and Bhoomi sits on the sofa than Arjun comes sneezing.

B:Aray tum jaldi say apna kaam khatam kar kay aagaye.
A:Sorry bhavri woh meray kuch clients aagaye thay tu unsay baat karnay main zara der hogayee.

B:Haan sirf ggayarah to bajay hain zara si der bilkul sahi ab jakay fresh hojao.
A:Aray shefali ki woh special cheez kya hai jo usnay humaray liye banayi hai.
B:Pehle tum fresh ho jao phir khud hi dekh lena main lekar ati hoon tum jab tak change karlo.

To be continued..........



Edited by Lois_Lane - 17 June 2006 at 1:48am

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good work Clap

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well done Clap

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WONDERFUL PLZ WRITE MORE! Clap

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Nice job pls cont. Clap

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gr8 work.keep it up. Clap Clap Clap

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Posted: 18 June 2006 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Thanx a lot for your gr8 response guyz sorry for late posting i have some cable network problems that's why.

So hear it goes:

Bhoomi comes into the room holding a tray with a bowl and a spoon in it.Arjun sees it quetioningly.

A:Yeh kya cheez hai?
B:Khud hi dekh lo.
A:(He removes the cap from the bowl)Soup!!!!!!!!
B:Haan soup ,bimaroon ka special khana.
A:Main koi yeh soup woop nahin peenaywala.(Becomes angry)
B:Arjun....Shefali bhabi nay itney pyaar se banaya hai aik baar pi kar tu dekho bahut acha ha.
A:Nahin!!!!!!
B:Magar kyun?
A:Baday pyaar say usnay sab logoonke liye itne ache mausam main pakoday,raita aur na janey kya kya banaya hai aur hamaray liye yeh soup.(Becomes even more angry)
B:Dekho Arjun mainey yeh soup piya tha aur is say meri tibiyat main bahut farq aya hai.Chalo moon khulo.
A:Mainay kaha na.....(Sneezes-aaaaacheeeee)
A:Mujhe nahin(before he says anything bhoomi put full spoon of soup in his mouth)
A:Hmmmmmmm...soup tu acha hai.
B:Hai na.
A:Haaan          ;           ;           ;           ;        B:Tu ab jaldi say khatam kardo.
(He finished)
(After sometime)
A:Hahhhhhh....waisay ab main kuch better feel kar raha hoon.
B:Main bhi.
A:Tu khanay khaain?
B:Abhi aur kuch bhi khana hai tumhein?????
A:Tu apka kya amatlab hai bhavri ji kya main soup pay guzara karonga?
B:Waisey bhook tu mujhay bhi lag rahi hai.
A:Tu phir aik kaam kartay hain.
B:Kya?
A:Pehlay yeh batao sab so gaye hain?
B:Haan.
A:Aisa kartay hain chupkey se kitchen main jatay hain aur kuch pait pooja kar kay ajate hain.
B:Haan ab tu yehi karna paday ga.Aaj tu ghannu kaka bhi chutti par hain.
A:(Becomes happy)is ka matlab hai kay raasta saaf.
B:Chalo chalo.
to be continued...........

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