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Pehli Baarish!!!!!-Last part (Page 2)

-LetItGo- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 June 2006 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Thanx a lot guyz for your wonderful support and encouragement here it goes:

Arjun pull her hand and took her under the open sky(starts raining even more heavily)

B:Arjun itni tez baaarish hogayee hai thand lag jaaayegi.(Almost shouting)

A:Wow!!!!!koi baat nahin.

A:Bhavri ji yeh hamari shaadi ki pehli barish hai aur barish ka maza to tab aaye ga na jab hum pori tarah bheeg jain.
B:Bhoomi shook her head and smiles.
A:Arjun(getting closer to her)lets dance!!!!

And they start dancing(and you guyz imagine that "Dhoop khiley" song can be heard in the background.)

Cut short to Shefali's room she came into her room with a strong wind blows windows get opened she came and try to close the windows but the wind is to stong suddenly she saw AB dancing.A smile come to her face and she remembers(flashback) that how she and Arjun were used to enjoy the rain in their college days.
Wind blows again and Shefali is about to close the window but she see AB dancing , suddenly Bhoomi's leg slipped and she is about to fall but Arjun hold her in his arms and they begin to stare in each others eyes than Bhoomi blushes and she hugs Arjun he did the same.
Shefali shook her head smiling and than close the windows.


simply_thebest Senior Member

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Posted: 15 June 2006 at 1:19am | IP Logged
nice part

conitnue sooon
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Posted: 15 June 2006 at 2:59am | IP Logged
nice one continue.
-LetItGo- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 June 2006 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Thanx guyz.
Scene 2

In the morning it is still very cloudy Bhoomi comes and open the windows and take a deep breath the wind blows,Arjun is still sleeping she looks at him for a moment than smiles and than start looking at the sky.

B:Lagta hai abhi aur barish hogi.Kitna khobsurat mausam hai.

Arjun wakes up comes out of the bad and from behind he took Bhoomi in his arms.

A:(Getting romantic)haan dekh raha hoon sub kuch such much bahut khoobsurat hai.
B:Arjun time dekh rahay ho jao jake tayaar hi jao warna late ho jao gay.
A:Mujhe kahin nahin jana.
B:Tu office ka kaam main karongi?
A:Bhavri tum bhi kamaal karti ho itnay romantic mausam main mujhe baar baar kaam yaad mat dilao.
A:No(put hands on her lips)
Than he takes her face into his hands and about to kiss her but suddenly Bhoomi sneezes.
Bhoomi laughs.
A:Hehehehe tumhari is cheenk ne sara maza kharab kar diya aur tum.......
He sneezes too.
They look at each other and they both laugh.
To be continued......
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Posted: 15 June 2006 at 4:28am | IP Logged
ya...pls continue.....with more romantic moments !!! Smile
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Posted: 15 June 2006 at 8:03am | IP Logged
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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 1:44am | IP Logged

Thanx for the great response frndz:

Cut short to the dining hall,Suraj,Manasvi and Khushi are doing breakfast Baisa also comes and joined them then Arjun and Bhoomi comes they are standing in the corner of the staircase which leads to the dining table both are hesitating to go to the table.

A:Ab hum duno kaisey jain baar baar cheenkengay to sab samajh jaayengegay....
B:Bahut shock tha na Shaadi ki pehli baarish enjoy karney ka ab woh kya kehte hain na haan "after effects"bhugto.
Manasvi saw them.

M:Aray tum duno wahan koney main kyun kharay ho aao akar nashta karlo.
AB looks at each other and than come and sit with them.

Bhoomi fuss and so as Arjun.Manasvi looks at them and than smiles.

AB:Ji!!!!they both replied and than sneeze.(acheeeee!!!!!!)
Baisa smiles and so as Suraj,Khushi and Manasvi.
Baisa:Tumhare dada ji ne yeh kaha hai ke Goenka Group of Industries key fund may se 1 crore cash humain yeh charity organization ko dena hai jiska aaj inogration hai aur yeh kaam tum duno kay haathon say hona chahiye.

A:Ji baisa hum duno chalay jain gay.
Suraj:Arjun Mr.Ahuja nay humaray naye order kay finance budjet kay baray main mujhe fax kiya tha.
A:Acha! tu tum nay mujhey kal kyun nahin bataya.
S:Woh kal tum bahut busy thay.
A:Arjun raised his brow(and Bhoomi also)
S:A...Ahhm mera matlab hai kay kal raat tumhey anay main itni der hogayee thi tum bheeg gaye thay aur change karnay main busy thay isliye mainay socha kay kal baat karloon.
A:Haan to aaj humari meeting ka agenda hoga kay.....(aaaacheeee!!!!!)
S:Haan main samajh gaya(trying to stop himself from smiling)
A:Theek hai tu phir chaltay hain.
They both stands up than Arjun says goodbye to everyone and when he looks at Bhoomi he sneeze and in reply she sneezes too.
Baisa,Manasvi and Khushi laughs too.
Suraj smiles shook his head and than goes out of the hall.
An expression of irritation cross Arjun's face and he goes too(almost running)
Than Baisa and Manasvi looks at Bhoomi.
B:Main kitchen main jati hoon bahut saara kaam hai.

Baisa and Manasvi looks at each other than smiles meaningfully.

Too be continued.......

Edited by Lois_Lane - 16 June 2006 at 1:51am
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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 2:05am | IP Logged
nice part
continue soon

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