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Posted: 14 June 2006 at 3:47am | IP Logged

Hey guyz this is my first fic.It is about the raining Scene in Saarthi in 13 June episode.

So here it goes:

In the night,it is light raining a car enter into the door of heritage house Arjun and Bhoomi are sitting in it now we can heard the thunders of cloud and now it's start raining heavily.

B:Lo itni tez barish shuro hi gayee is se pehle ke aur tez ho humein andar chaley jana chahiye.

A:Theek hai tum jao main car park kar ke ata hoon.

B:Haan magar jaldi.

By saying this she goes out of the car and starts walking fast towards the house (almost running)Arjun watches her go,and than a smile comes on his face he left the car where it was and comes out of the car and gets wet he run towards Bhoomi and stop her before she reach the house and pull her hand....... 

So guyz what do you think should i write more on it or not?

 



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Posted: 14 June 2006 at 4:11am | IP Logged
ohh wonderful!!!!how romantic!!!please continue

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Posted: 14 June 2006 at 5:02am | IP Logged
hey pls continue....very very good!!!!waiting for u to continue

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its really romantic... pls continue

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Posted: 14 June 2006 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Do you have any doubt??Yes you should continue.

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continue

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Posted: 14 June 2006 at 7:46am | IP Logged
its really nice Clap Clap
plzzz continue

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hey its gr8 , Clap Clap Clap plz write more. Smile Smile

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