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Pehli Baarish!!!!!-Last part

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Posted: 14 June 2006 at 3:47am | IP Logged

Hey guyz this is my first fic.It is about the raining Scene in Saarthi in 13 June episode.

So here it goes:

In the night,it is light raining a car enter into the door of heritage house Arjun and Bhoomi are sitting in it now we can heard the thunders of cloud and now it's start raining heavily.

B:Lo itni tez barish shuro hi gayee is se pehle ke aur tez ho humein andar chaley jana chahiye.

A:Theek hai tum jao main car park kar ke ata hoon.

B:Haan magar jaldi.

By saying this she goes out of the car and starts walking fast towards the house (almost running)Arjun watches her go,and than a smile comes on his face he left the car where it was and comes out of the car and gets wet he run towards Bhoomi and stop her before she reach the house and pull her hand....... 

So guyz what do you think should i write more on it or not?

 



Edited by Lois_Lane - 20 June 2006 at 1:14am

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Posted: 14 June 2006 at 4:11am | IP Logged
ohh wonderful!!!!how romantic!!!please continue
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Posted: 14 June 2006 at 5:02am | IP Logged
hey pls continue....very very good!!!!waiting for u to continue
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Posted: 14 June 2006 at 6:20am | IP Logged
its really romantic... pls continue
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Posted: 14 June 2006 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Do you have any doubt??Yes you should continue.
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Posted: 14 June 2006 at 7:46am | IP Logged
its really nice Clap Clap
plzzz continue
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Posted: 14 June 2006 at 8:19am | IP Logged
hey its gr8 , Clap Clap Clap plz write more. Smile Smile
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Posted: 15 June 2006 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Thanx a lot guyz for your wonderful support and encouragement here it goes:

Arjun pull her hand and took her under the open sky(starts raining even more heavily)

B:Arjun itni tez baaarish hogayee hai thand lag jaaayegi.(Almost shouting)

A:Wow!!!!!koi baat nahin.

B:Arjun...
A:Bhavri ji yeh hamari shaadi ki pehli barish hai aur barish ka maza to tab aaye ga na jab hum pori tarah bheeg jain.
B:Bhoomi shook her head and smiles.
A:Arjun(getting closer to her)lets dance!!!!

And they start dancing(and you guyz imagine that "Dhoop khiley" song can be heard in the background.)

Cut short to Shefali's room she came into her room with a strong wind blows windows get opened she came and try to close the windows but the wind is to stong suddenly she saw AB dancing.A smile come to her face and she remembers(flashback) that how she and Arjun were used to enjoy the rain in their college days.
Wind blows again and Shefali is about to close the window but she see AB dancing , suddenly Bhoomi's leg slipped and she is about to fall but Arjun hold her in his arms and they begin to stare in each others eyes than Bhoomi blushes and she hugs Arjun he did the same.
Shefali shook her head smiling and than close the windows.

Howzzat????????

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