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Posted: 04 July 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged

FOr all other comments i'll comment later sorry in a hurry...

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PArt 1 - pg 4
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Part 2

At airport

We see Vikram, Rishab and a girl waiting desperately for someone…after some time a man comes and says,

Man: Vikram sir, the flight is delayed by 30-40 minutes. They are saying some other flight is about to land so…

But before he could complete his sentence…

Girl: how dare they… how could they do this with my Prince… how??? I want his flight to land asap… or else it won't be good neither for them nor for you…

Vikram: Doll cool… agar usse pata chal gaya tum naraaz hui… toh…

Girl: yeah yeah I know…

Vikram to man: jao aur make it fast…

In Flight

We see a man sitting and looking outside the plane, just then

Aditi (his assistant)- Sir, we'll be going to office or…

The Man turns to look at his assistant and we see he is our RAM KAPOOR

Ram: Aditi yaha se office… never, I'm sure my princess must be waiting for me at airport… its almost 1 month since I met her… so office… !!!

Jab tak woh mujhse dil bhar ke baat nahi kar leti hai… office is not possible…

Aditi: ur princess!!! Ur daughter

Ram: No….

Aditi: hmmm I know… Ur wife

Ram: nods in negative, wife aur daughter hone ke liye shaadi bhi toh honi chaahiye

Aditi: then.. u have no sis…

Ram: my princess… Natasha Malhotra, u know Mr. Anand Malhotra

Aditi: yeah from Malhotra and associates, our lawyers

Ram: hmm, right actually he was very close to my father… so Natasha has always been close to me...

Soon the flight lands… and as expected by Ram, his princess was there to receive him…

In car

Natasha: Okay, so now when ur back, mujhe aapko 2 logo se milana hai…

Ram: okay mam…

Natasha: toh aaj raat ko 10pm humhe party mai jana hai, toh u better be ready by 9pm.

Ram:yeh mam… aur kuch

Natasha: yes, kal bhi aap apne ko free rakhiyega…

Vikram: par doll kal toh Board ofDirectors ki meeting…   h…ai

(his words trails seeing the anger creeping on Natasha's face)

Ram: yes princess who toh jaruri hai…. Par haan shaam ko free hu…

Natasha: shaam ko!!! Okay then I'll confirm that program later… okay

Ram: okay… anything else my princess

Natasha (still thinking deeply) mmm…. No… abhi ke liye toh itna hi..

Ram: okay… (looking at Aditi) sab note kar liya na… varna yeh mujhe nikalegi job se aur mai tumhe…)

Aditi: yes sir sab note kar liya hai…

Natasha: Hi aditi sorry voh CK kea age mujhe kuch dikha hi nahi… anyways do get scare… kuch galat bhi hua toh CK ka toh pata nahi par tumhari job ko kuch nahi hoga… so chill

And (looking towards Ram) CK u better not portray me as a cruel person…   

Do comment good or bad... and hit "LIKE" if u like the part...
I know this is not that good... sorry for that next part will be much better...

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Posted: 04 July 2012 at 11:34am | IP Logged
plz story ko jaldi aage karo other wise its nice and intersting story

Edited by viny_queen - 04 July 2012 at 11:35am

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Posted: 04 July 2012 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
hmm so mr.ram kapoor ka entry hogaya so meet them soon .. and next update i want both ram and priya ..pllzzz thanks for the pm ...
plz update soon

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Posted: 04 July 2012 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
It's not good...But it is  very  very  very  very Good...Heart
Very very well written..
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Posted: 04 July 2012 at 2:36pm | IP Logged

expected a bit longer update :(

anyways, the story is very interesting :D now plz update soon ;)

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eagerly waiting for da next partEmbarrassed

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