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Rhythm Last Part

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Pt9:pg 38
Rhythm Part 1
Arnav's college mates Lavanya and NK are getting married.

Lavanya was dressed up as a bride.
Khushi :You look so beautiful as a bride.
L:Thank you Khushi for dressing me up like this.You are my best friend.

NK ad Lavanya got married.

Their reception party...
Khushi appeared on stage wearing a blue glittering suit.
She started dancing...
'Maye Ni Maye Munder Pe Teri Bol Raha Hai Kaaga Jogan Ho Gai Teri Dulaari Man Jogi Sung Laaga..! Chan Mahiya...Chan Mahiya Mere Dhol Sipahiya...' '{Hum aapke hain kaun}.

Arnav was deeply involved in her dance.He could not take his eyes off her.

NK:Yes,Khushi is a wonderful dancer.
A:You know her?
NK:Yes.She studied with me and Lavanya in school.
Arnav was surprised:Oh cool.
NK:Her dad's business failed.He got paralysed.So she could'nt complete her higher studies.To earn for her family she is a bar dancer now.
Arnav was shocked:Bar dancer?Yuck.So she must be a loose girl.
NK:Nanav,don't talk like that about Khushi.She is a nice girl.


After some time...
NK brought Khushi to Arnav.
NK:Arnav,this is our school mate Khushi Kumari Gupta.
Khushi,meet our college mate Arnav Singh Raizada.
NK:He is a successful business man.He loved dance and music.So he runs a big dance troupe also.It's named as Rhythm.
K:That's nice.
Arnav was lost in her innocent face.
He thought:She looks so innocent.Can she be pure?After all she is a bar dancer.

Arnav went to the bar to see Khushi secretly.
It was full of drunkards.
Khushi started dancing wearing a glamorous dress.
'Lak Chiki Lak Chiki Chiki Lak Choom Choom
Main Khwaabon Ki Shahzaadi Hoon Har Dil Pe Chhaayi

Baadal Hain Meri Zulfen Bijali Meri Angadaai
Kahate Hain Mujhako Hawa Hawaai
Hawa Hawaai..'(Mr.India).

Then she came out with another performance wearing another dress.
'Ding dong ding, ding dong ding dong ding dong,
Ding dong dong, Ding dong
(Ek do teen, char paanch che saath aath nau, dus gyarah, barah tera) - 2,
(Tera karoon, tera karoon din gin gin ke intezaar,
aaja piya aaye bahaar) - 2...'(Tezaab).

Arnav as impressed with her dance.
A:She is the mix of Sridevi and Madhuri.That day she gave such an innocent performance.Todayshe is so seductive.

Suddenly a man pulled her towards him.
K:Shyamji,leave me.
S:No darling.
She removed her hand from him and slapped him tightly.
K:I told you many times that me..Khushi Kumari Gupta is not like you think.Don't think all bar dancers are call girls.I dance here as i have no option.I need bread nd butter for my family.But i will never sell my body.
Arnav was really impressed.
A:NK is right.I respect her now.I love her boldness.She has self respect.
Khushi walked off.Arnav stood in front of her.
She was shocked.
K:You?You are also here?
A:Yes.But not to drink.To watch your dance.Your dance caught my attention at NK nd Lavanya's reception party.Why don't you join my dance troupe?I promise you better salary and safety.No one will misbehave there.I swear...
Khushi could not believe it:Arnavji...are you serious?
A:I never joke.Come on tell me.Yes or no?
She smiled nodding her head:Yes.

Edited by jasminerahul - 30 July 2012 at 1:43am

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Nice os.plz continue.

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Anapneo3003 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Amazing do continue Big smile

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devishree IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 4:04am | IP Logged
jas di it is nice 
i loved it 
waiting for the update

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..SmaTz.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Superb yar!! Keep updating!!!
-Kina- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 4:06am | IP Logged
loved concept
ASADsweetZOYA IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Clapi loved that NK-La concept...
continue dear
thnx 4 the pm tooSmile
velangini IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
interesting concept
nice starting 
is shyam gonna pursue khushi here too
continue soon
thanks for pm

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