Firstly, CONGRATS on becoming a Goldie! This is REALLY good!! Wow..I can't believe this is your FIRST OS!!! This is AMAZING for your first! I LOVE those little poem things...they added SO much to the story!! Thank you for making my boring weekend a little more fun! 😆 This is honestly amazing. Please please please continue soon! 👍🏼
this is beautiful.. loved the concept.. its different and nice... you know u should really continue this one.. it has a good potential... think about it...
this was amazing dear...& congrats on bagging the 'goldie' tag!!...😆..anyways would be looking forward to more such awesome works from you...so the next time you write something, do let me know...😊
This story should be continued. It has too much to say to be an OS... It leaves a lot of question unanswered. It will be better as ss or ff in my opinion. Good writing...
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