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svrinda1

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Posted: 30 June 2012 at 2:32pm | IP Logged

New Arshi FF: Mending a Broken Heart Chapter: 1

Note:  Hey guys this is svrinda aka Vrinda this is my first FF you guys can write about my FF weather its good or bad you if you think it's not a good try please write it in your comments I will not mind if you say that you don't like my first chapter or whatever because it will help me write my second chapter better and also please write what you think was not good in my FF so I can fix that problem in my second chapter and the chapters after….thank you….enjoy…….

 

Three months later after Arnav and Khushi's marriage……..

Khushi woke up and got dressed, yeh kya hamein aisa kyun lag raha hai jise kuch missing hai, she mumbles to herself.  Are haan yaad ayaa kya missing hai LAAD GOVERNER!! Achaa hi hai ki hamari subah ki shuruaat unka chehra dekhe bina hui hai ab to hamara din bahut achaa bitega.  Khushi then hurries to the kitchen. 

Anjali: Good morning Khushi ji.

Khushi: Good morning di. Achaa di ham aapse ek sawaal puchein?????

Anjali: ji poochiye na Khushi ji.

Khushi: vo Laad Governer…hamara  matlab hai Arnav ji vo dikhai nahi  de rahe vo kahan hai????

Anjali: chote vo to nani ke saath mandir gaye hain. 

Khushi: kya? Mandir! Aur vo bhi Arnav ji aur vo bhi itni subah subah. 

Anjali: vo baat yeh hai ki aaj chote ka Birthday hai aur ham unke har Birthday par unhe Mandir bhejte hain. 

Khushi: kya? Aaj unka Birthday hai.

Anjali: ji.

They heard a knock on the door. 

Khushi: di aap rukiye ham dekhtein hain. 

Anjali nods. 

Khushi opens the door and see Arnav is standing on the door. 

Khushi: aap!!! Are ham to kehna hi bhul gaye Happy Birthday!!!!

Arnav: aisa kya important kaam aa gaya tha jo door kholne mein itna time laga diya.

Khushi: vo hum….

Arnav: I said answer me, he yells. 

Khushi: aap chilla kyun rahe hain. 

Arnav: kyunki tum……..

Anjali: chote khushi ji aap lad kyun rahe ho. Aur chote nani kahan hain vo bhi to tumhare saath mandir gayi thi na.

Arnav: di unhone kaha ki unhe aur kuch der mandir mein hi rukna hai, well anyways di mai office ja raha hoon. 

Anjali: kya matlab chote ki tum office ja rahe ho kum se kum aaj to office mat jao. 

Arnav: nai di main office jaa raha hoon mujhe bahut zaroori kaam hai. 

Khushi: aap ruk nai sakte kya di ne itne pyaar se…….

Anjali: rehne dijiye khushi ji, she interrupted. 

Khushi: aap di ko mana kar rahe hain aap unke liye apna office sirf ek din ke liye cancel nai kar sakte kya????

Arnav: fine par sirf aaj ke liye!!!!!!!!

Anjali: thank you chote achaa tum jaldi se dining table par chalo breakfast ready hai. 

Anjali: khushi ji apne kheer taiyaar kardi na chote ko kheer bahut pasand hai. 

Khushi: ji di.  

They both headed towards the dining table. 

Anjali: chote apni favorite sweet dish nai loge. 

Arnav: what?????

Anjali: are baba kheer nai loge???????

Arnav: no am full. 

Anjali: apni di ke liye kha lo please. 

Arnav: fine, I will take some. 

Arnav grabs the kheer and puts some in his bowl. 

Anjali: chote tumhe kheer kaisi lagi??????

Arnav: very tasty.  

Anjali: jante ho kyun????

Arnav: kyunki aapne banayi hai. 

Anjali: wrong! Kheer to khushi ji ne banayi hai. 

Arnav looks at khushi when khushi gives him a smile, but he ignores her. 

Arnav: anyways di where's everyone else?????

Anjali: hmm…. Mamiji and mamajai mamiji ke mayeke gaye hai unka phone aya tha tumhe wish karne ke liye par tum yahan nai the!!!!

Arnav: and Akash and Payal???

Anjali: Akash went to the office and Payal went to buaji's house.

Arnav: well di, I am done eating so I am going in my room, you guys carry on. 

Khushi: par aap apni kheer to………

Arnav ignores Khushi and headed towards his room, khushi gets mad and follows him to the room. 

Arnav shuts the door on Khushi's face which makes Khushi angrier on Arnav.  Khushi opens the door in anger and hits arnav's head.

Khushi: I am sorry Arnav ji , is it hurting????

Arnav: just shut up Ms. Khushi Kumari Gupta. 

Khushi: kya? Hum shut up? aap shut up Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada aur vaise bhi hamara naam ab Khushi Kumari Gupta nahi raha Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada hai aur next 3 months yani ki contract khatam hone tak yahi rahega samjhe aap.

Arnav: oh really Ms. KKGSR!!!

Khushi: oh yes!!!!! Mr. ASR!!! Aur vaise aap khud ko bahut intelligent aur smart samajhtein hai na jo aap kisi ko bhi kuch bhi keh dete hai…

Arnav: samajhta nahin hoon Ms. Khushi Kumari Guptaaa!!!

Khushi: dekhiye aap phirse……

Arnav: oh yes I forgot Ms. Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada and now just leave my room vaise bhi tum 3 months mein is ghar ko chod kar ja rahi ho to abhi se mere aur mere parivaar se door rehne ki aadat daal lo, you got it!!!

Khushi: aap ek aise insaan hai jise doosro ki khushion se koi matlab nahi sirf apni aur apne parivaar ki khushion se matlab hai.  Aap nafrat karte hai na hamse to khatam kar dijiye is jhoote rishte ko aaj dining table par apne hamari banayi kheer nahi khai agar aapko humse itni hi taqleef hai to kyun ki humse shaadi kyun arnavji boliye?????

Arnav: tumhe jaanna hai na kyun ki maine tumse shaadi to suno mai tumhe aur us shyam ko apni di ki life barbaad nahi karne doonga. 

Khushi: kya??

Arnav: haan aur isi liye mai tumse aur us shyaam se itni nafrat karta hoon aur jab tum mere paas aaogi vo nafrat aur bhad jaegi.

Khushi: par aap…..

Arnav leaves the room and Ignores Khushi. 

Khushi: kahan gaya vo pyar arnavji jo shayad aapke dil mein hamare liye kabhi tha, she mumbles to herself while the tears came out of her eyes. 

 

 

So how was it guys?

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I will tell you guys what is gonna happen in the track so this is what is gonna happen I am just gonna tell you the main part and it is Arnav's gonna RAPE Khushi I can't tell you anymore you will find it out in the track and also I will be updating soon . 

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Posted: 30 June 2012 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
Still MU happening .. ok go on...

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Posted: 30 June 2012 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
SHUCKS ARNAV RAPING KHUSHI Shocked

Well a nice try, for you permit for constructive criticism, this chapter is nice but does need editing on places.
For now I can say 'm gonna continue reading it. It does sound promising for now Smile


Edited by fire.whiskey - 30 June 2012 at 2:44pm

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Posted: 12 July 2012 at 12:51am | IP Logged
why rn't u updating dude??????? gosh its been hecka long...n u kinda killed the suspense already but still its gud n promising...sooo plz continue...Thumbs Up

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 5:42pm | IP Logged
ohh, are you gonna continue this?! i think you should!

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
Hey, I just came across this, it sounds interesting   Smile
Are you going to continue it?

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
ver is d other parts, pls send me d link to it

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
NICE
 
LOVED IT
 
I THINK KHUSHI SHLD NT TRY TO CLEAR HIS MISUNDERSTANDING
 
AHE SHLD IGNORE HIM
 
SHE SHLD NT JUSTIFY HERSELF TO A PERSON WHO THINKS SO LOW OF HER.

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