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hey guys m back with my third kriyansh os back to decmeber!!!!!!!!!!
back to decmber song suits kriyaansh !!!!!!!!1alot
so thought of writitng one on it
plzzz like n comment
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KRIA'S POV!!
it had been one whole month now since i was back!!!!!!
yes back to mumbai!!!
back to St Louis!!!!!!
where i made my friends my dance team
where i met him ,rey!!!!!!!
but now when m back it seems why m i back!
why???????
when everyday i die seeing rey totally heart broken seeing him ignoring me!!!!
seeing him hating me!!!!!!
i wish i never came back!!!!!
my friends too pretend to hate me!!!!
i knw they can never but still do
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KRIA'S POV!!!!!
 
i saw sitting on the stair case writting my feelings in my diary !!!!!
 
when rey came from behind n looked at me with mixed emotions his eyes were hurt,angry,feeling of being ditched!!!!!!!
 
i couldnt look more into his eyesi had to start pretending!!!!!!!! to hate him
 
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REY'S POV!!!!
 
i was shocked thoughtn she would look into my eyes n say tth wht she ddi tht night was all wrong!!!!!!!!
 
but she dint again dng her work nt even looking at me!!!!!!!!!!
 
I took courage n said,"kria woh rdx has called us!!!!!!"
 
he saw kria still dngher work said,"kkk i'll cum in 1 min"
 
I got down from the stairs
 
kria who was waiting for rey to turn
 
I turned n looked at kria she was also staring at him!!!!!!11
I came back to her n said,"kria tell me thr truth dint u ever love me????????
 
kria was shocked
 
kria was just ignoring rey n she was still sitting
 
I cupped her face n made her look at me...
 
"tell me kria" i tld kria"
 
kria dint answer
 
"fine dnt answer but remember one thing i dnt care if ur around i dnt care for u i dnt love...
 
I stopped cuz i knw i love her n cant stop loving her !!!!!!!!
 
I just left from there n reached rdx sir's cabin!!!
 
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rdz sir's cabin!!!!!!!!!1
 
kriyaansh were present there!!!!!!1
 
rdx:guys as u kne hamre coll main again ek dance fest hai n las tym tum dono ne perform kiya tha so this tym i want youl to perform again!!!!!
 
rey was nt ready for his
 
rdx:rey i knw but plzzz keep ur personal n prefession life separte plzzz n start rehershing from tday it self!!!!!!!!
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kriyaansh reached the rehershal hall
 
rey said,"kria which song should we dance on??"
 
kria went to her bag removed a CD
 
rey was confused
 
kria went n played a song!!!!
 
rey was waiting to knw which song is it!!!!!!!!!1
 
suddenly back to december starts playing!!!!!!!!
 
rey suddenly looks at kria
 
rey in his mind,"why this song????"
 
kria said,"should we start!!!!!"
 
rey gave his hand to kria
 
kria accpeted it n rey pulls kria to him
 
back to decmber music starts!!!!!!
 
during the music rey put his hand on kria's waist
 
n kria put his hand on his shoulder!!!!!
 
they were trying thier best to look into thier eyes!!!!!!
 
but sumhow tht night emeries cum into thier minds!!!!!1
 
the song starts
 
I'm so glad you made time to see me.

kria remebered when rey looked at her into her eyes tday on the stair case


How's life? Tell me how's your family.
I haven't seen them in a while.
You've been good, busier than ever,
We small talk, work and the weather,
Your guard is up and I know why.
Because the last time you saw me
 
rey twilred kria n kept on twirling her
n he left her!!!!!!!

 

both looked at eachother n kriyaansh threw their one  hands in the air n moved their left leg near the right leg n flew their right leg in the air staight n twirled around

(note:now they were dancing induvilually)
 
rey took kria's hand n twiled her towrads him n she came in a hugging postion from behind n rey caught her waist n kria looked at rey 
Is still burned in the back of your mind.
You gave me roses and I left them there to die.
rey remembrred when he gavwe kria the rose n she slapped him
n the second tym on the pre-valentine day...

So this is me swallowing my pride,
Standing in front of you saying, "I'm sorry for that night,"
And I go back to December all the time.

It turns out freedom ain't nothing but missing you.
Wishing I'd realized what I had when you were mine.
I'd go back to December, turn around and make it all right.
ry made kria cum more close to him n said,"us din oh bhi kaha woh sab jhoot tha na!!!!!!1
I go back to December all the time.

These days I haven't been sleeping,
Staying up, playing back myself leavin'.
When your birthday passed and I didn't call.
And I think about summer, all the beautiful times,
I watched you laughing from the passenger side.
Realized that I loved you in the fall.
 
kria loked at rey in his eyes n nodded her head n hugged him

And then the cold came, the dark days when fear crept into my mind
You gave me all your love and all I gave you was "Goodbye".
rey said woh good bye hamesha ke liye nahi tha right!!!!!!!!!
So this is me swallowing my pride
Standing in front of you saying, "I'm sorry for that night."
And I go back to December all the time.
It turns out freedom ain't nothing but missing you,
no said kria i love u rey us din mom...n she starts crying!!!!!
Wishing I'd realized what I had when you were mine.
I'd go back to December, turn around and change my own mind
I go back to December all the time.
rey twirls kria n brings her back to him n catches her waist n picks her
 up n twirls her around!!!
I miss your tanned skin, your sweet smile,
rey smiled at kria n kria was happy to see him smile
So good to me, so right
And how you held me in your arms that September night --
The first time you ever saw me cry.

Maybe this is wishful thinking,
Probably mindless dreaming,
But if we loved again, I swear I'd love you right.

I'd go back in time and change it but I can't.
So if the chain is on your door I understand.
 

But this is me swallowing my pride
Standing in front of you saying, "I'm sorry for that night."
And I go back to December...
It turns out freedom ain't nothing but missing you,
Wishing I'd realize what I had when you were mine.
I'd go back to December, turn around and make it all right.
I'd go back to December, turn around and change my own mind
rey went close to kria kissed her forehead n said i love u
 
n kria too said i love u!!!!!
 
they hugged !!!!!!!
 
she opened her eyes n saw she was on the stairs dreaming all the tym gng back to december!!!!!!!!!

I go back to December all the time.
All the time.
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plzxzz like n comment i knw its not kriyaansh standrd i cnt describe dance m sorry
really sorry
 
i will surely improve in my dance writing
 


Edited by dmg_mjht_d3_rox - 06 July 2012 at 4:29am

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Posted: 30 June 2012 at 12:18am | IP Logged
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1st to comment...Dancing

it was awsum...

just a lil confusion ...is taani there or not...

da way u descrided da feelings were so good...

and da song back to december was just marvellous...

please cont soon...


Edited by Angel56 - 30 June 2012 at 12:30am

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Amazing!!!

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hey its really nicely written...i dont know what standard level are set on the kriyansh stories...but this was so amazing kriya dreaming solving MUs with Rey...just thought of this is awsome...

and the song was really good...and described it also superbly...

I loved the os very much...

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Posted: 30 June 2012 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angel56

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unres 

1st to comment...Dancing

it was awsum...

just a lil confusion ...is taani there or not...

da way u descrided da feelings were so good...

and da song back to december was just marvellous...

please cont soon...
thanx btw whts ur name sorry i forgot!!!!!!!!
no tanni never entred nly
 kne right back to december is just awesome!!!!!!!!
 
conting if i get any idea will surely continueEmbarrassed

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Originally posted by alisha.a.s

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thank u alisha!!Smile

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Unresd !!


Wink
Osm effort akshu baby !!

how i luved the title yaar !! - back to december !! sho cute !!Hug

n ya it was so so cute yaar i so wish it cud come true !!!

ab to sirf ff me hi aise scene padhne ko milte h humme !!

*sigh*

But ye dream kyu rakha tune !!!Cry inna achcha flow tha yaar !! seriously continue dis one !! and next chap me please kuch mast sa krva diyo nah !! n ya no dream seq !!!Angry

osm jaan !!! u r getting better at this !Wink

do write more !!

Hug
lov ya lods !!Hug


Edited by upasna_mishti - 30 June 2012 at 5:10am

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