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MG SS Dare to Dream Part 9 Pg 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello!
 
This is my first SS! Please bear with me! I am posting the Character Sketch and Prologue right now will post first part tommorow...
 
So here goes:
 
Character Sketch:
 
Maan Singh Khurana: Arrogant, Attitude problems, Snob, aspires to be the best businessman in India one day' has 2 twin brothers and a lil Sister who he pampers
 
Adi Sehgal: Maan's best friend, opposite of him, covers up for him every time, well and signature laugh hehehehe
 
Dev Singh Khurana: First of the twins, funny, outgoing, pampers sister Anvesha loads.. 

Vicky Singh Khurana: Younger of the twins.. (by 2 mins), same as Dev

Anvesha Singh Khurana: the "PRINCESS", cute, innocent, pampered, childish'.

Geet Handa: Daughter of the richest Businessman in India, down to earth, bubbly,  friendly with everyone, has a childlike innocence but can be mature too'.. best friends with Meera, friends with Adi too.. Hates Maan (*ahem ahem*) 

Meera Singhania: Geet's best friend, supports Geet everywhere, finds Maan arrogant and stuck up

Rajji Handa: Geet's sister, same as Geet, less loved by father but doesn't mind.

*Note: I wasn't able to post pics.. All the characters are the same as from the show except: Annie: she's Taani from Tere Liye or Anupriya Kapoor
Prologue:
 

"Come on go and ask him go! Geet this is the last day yaar! Ab nahi puchegi to kab?", Asked a girl sitting in the college canteen.

"I am too scared Meer. What if he says no? Mein to marr jaungi!! Babaji sirf mere saath aisa kyun hota hai? Bataon na!!", Cried Geet to her most favourite person in the world Babaji.

"Abbe jaa na!"

"Fine!"

 

"Umm.. Hello? Maan?"

"Yes", asked a dashing guy sitting and eating his lunch with his only friend Adi.

"Can we be friends? I know this is the last day but oh well!?"

"I am sorry Geet but I don't befriend strangers'"

 

"Kya yaar Maan! Vo kitne pyaar se puch rahi thi aur tu hain ki?"

"Mein kya huh? Kisi bhi ladki ko mein apna friend nahi banaunga' Pata nahi kaha kaha se aa jate hain?"

 

Unaware to them Geet was listening to all of it with tears brimming in her eyes.

"Meer He said NO Meer!"

"Its okay Geet! Uska loss hain tera nahin! Ab bata vo kya bola!"

Geet told her all that she heard them say..

 

"OMG!! Ussi ka loss hain man! Usse thodi na pata hain ki to India ke sabse bade businessman ki beti hain!! I mean Uncle ne to tere naam pe apna pura business kiya hain even if you don't want it!"

"Oye! Yaha kissi ko nahi pata itne jor se mat bol meri maa!"

Meera thought, ' Lakh lakh shukar hain Babaji ka iska dhyaan to bhatak gaya!'

Geet thought, ' Meera is right ussi ka loss hain' Agar future main vo meri paas friendship ke liye naa aya to apna naam badal dungi! Babaji maaf karna!"

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice cs..n prologue...

Thanks will post next part tommorow!
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Part 1:

3 Years Later:

"Mr. Maan Singh Khurana!! How does it feel to be the second best businessman in town?"

"In town? Well, as far as I can see it's in all India!"

"Yea yeah... How is it though?"

"Well I can say I am disappointed in myself because I didn't come first but don't worry I'll come first next year! After all Mohinder Uncle has to make way for me doesn't he?"

"Mr. Handa? Well, don't you know that since the last 3 years his daughter has been taking care of his business while controlling her own one which is the third best and not by much?"

"Well... I sure didn't know that looks like I got to read the magazines carefully!"

"No Mr. Khurana. Mr. Handa hasn't yet introduced his daughter to the world. As children both his daughters hid their identities and so none except perhaps their close relatives know about this young businesswoman!"

"Looks like I'll meet her tonight after all!"

"Yep you sure will!"

'A girl! A girl beat MAAN SINGH KHURANA to the first position! A GIRL!! Not Possible... I have to take care of this girl NOW!'

"Adi! You know the invite to Mr. Handa's party? The one I wasn't going to go to? RSVP them that I am coming!"

"Sure Maan!" chirped Adi only to realize his mistake...

"Sure Maan SIR!"

"Good Job!"

 

In another part of the city:

"I am nervous Meera! What if our friends get mad because the truth was revealed in such a way to them?"

"Don't worry Geetu. It'll all be fine!"

"Meer is Maan coming?"

"Why? Mujhe to laga ki tu usse bhool chuki hogi? To ab kya hua?"

"Meer mein usse bhool kaise sakti hoon? GEET HANDA se uss tarah se koi baat nahi karta! Aur jo karta hain usse GEET HANDA akela nahi chodti!"

"Theek hain tujhe jaisa karna hain vaisa tu kar' Aur haan vo aa raha hain!"

"Okay! Then lets wear something great!"

And she picked out a sexy yet sophisticated dress deciding to go and check the arrangements first.

 

It's Party Time:

"Geet I want you to be present at the party looking after guests but don't let anyone know that you are my daughter just act as if you are a guest as well!"

"Sure thing Papa!"

"Come on leave the old man alone and go enjoy!! The guests have started arriving!"

"Yes Papa"

 

"Hello Geet! How are you beautiful?" asked a verrry handsome guy dressed in a black tuxedo which made every girl's heart flutter.

"Hello Yourself! I am fine sweetheart how are you?" asked an absolutely unruffled Geet.

"Arre yaar why is it that every girl's gaga over me except for you?"

"Maybe because I am your childhood friend and have seen you become "Handsome"", said Geet drawing air quotes or rabbit ears in the air.

"Fine fine!! Waise aaj sabko pata chalega na?"

"Haan Yash! Everyone will know about it today! I am sooo scared! Papa ne kaha hain ki I must look after guests and act like one until he announces! Ab ye mein kaise karun?"

"Aise!" said Yash as he linked his arm through hers and walked her around nodding and acknowledging the presence of all the guests present'

"Yash! I have to go and change! Mera party dress meri raah dekh raha hain!"

"Okay beautiful!"

And away she went' and as if on cue Maan walked in and stole every girl's breathes as he did so.

 

"Oh Hi Maan!" said our Yash a bit acidly.

"Hi Yash! Came here to flirt I suppose?" replied Maan glaring at him.

"Well I actually didn't! You see my family and the Handas have been friends for ages so one of these ladies is actually the girl the whole world is waiting on and in this hall I am the only guy who knows who it is!"

"Well Well I hope you wouldn't mind telling me would you?"

"Actually yes' you see me and her have been friends since childhood and I am ready to do anything for her and don't want to betray her! So, better luck next time?"

Just as he said it a Pari walked down the stairs making every guy go "WOW" and every girl Jealous' yes it none other than our one and only Geet!

 

"Oh my! Someone looks gorgeous!" said Yash forgetting Maan's presence next to him.

"She sure does!" said Maan in a daze not able to take his eyes off her.

 

'Is she really coming towards me or am I hallucinating?'

 

"Hey Yash! Told you I'd look better than I did earlier!"

"No you don't! Go back up to the guest room and change into something better! You are making me jealous!"

"Hold it there Mr. Singhania (Yes ppls! He's Meera's childhood love/Husband I am sorry didn't say it earlier! Well him, Geet and Meera are best friends since childhood!) I am not going to change! I am your FRIEND! Meera is your wife you can order her but not me! So go away!"
"Okay fine fine sissy! Wear this! But I get to escort you right? Since Meer isn't coming?"

"Sure, Bhai!"

"Kya yaar dil tod diya mera!"

"Chup kar khotte!" looked around, "Oh Hi Maan! Remember me? Geet from your college?"

"Oh Geet? You mean the one who was always lost in her books to care for her looks?", asked Maan coming back to reality after checking her out big time..

"Well yes", responded Geet smirking to herself thinking how step 1 of her plan had gone now only if her Papa would hurry up with the introduction!

"Great to see you again! And a great transformation too!"

"Thank you"

 

And as if her father had heard her he came to the stage and said, "Ladies and Gentlemen! Today is the day when I, as a proud father, will introduce you all to my daughter, my pearl, my jewel. My daughter has never let me down and has always made me proud. By achieving this great feat on her own while juggling two companies she's given me another photograph to hang on my wall for my late wife who died 12 years ago'", he wiped a tear from his eyes.

 

Maan looked to his side and saw Geet crying her eyes out and unknowingly felt a pang in his heart.

 

"I would also like to say that she's midst you all and none has yet identified her which means you kept your promise sweetheart! Without much ado I present to you my daughter! Rajji come here dear!" He said chuckling.

 

Maan could hear the same chuckle echoed on his side which made him wonder' 'Is she his daughter? No can't be this behenji'no no she's too pretty this bookworm can't be his daughter!!'

 

"Papa! Stop kidding me and introduce me already papa!"

 

A sweet voice could be heard on the speaker. Maan looked to his side and saw that Geet had gone away'

 

"Sorry Sweetheart! Anyways I have two daughters! Rajji is my younger one' Well, I'll introduce her later at a similar party but for now I present before you Ms. Geet Handa, CEO and MD of Handa Industries and RGRM Industries!"

 

'What the ****? Geet is THE GEET HANDA?? I can't believe this I lost to GEET!!!??"

Precap:

Maan: I'll make your life hell Geet
 
Edited by Pariluvsmeet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
CS
awesome...

prologue
wow awesome...
interesting...
sent the buddy invite...
pm me plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 1
awesome...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: spvd

CS
awesome...

prologue
wow awesome...
interesting...
sent the buddy invite...
pm me plz...

 
Thanks Dear!
Added you Will pm you for sure!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
awesome...
cont soon dear...

Will update today or tommorow probably today!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: dona86

awesome update...

loved it...

Thanks! next part will be up today!
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Posted: 11 years ago
thats brilliant...loving it