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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by xxAqeelahxx




Yipeee Not hitler for long I told Aneesah ... about your message and your nickname she got happy ... I call her that now 😊

Im so happy i came up with a nick name for Aneesah in real life too. πŸ‘πŸΌ
Posted: 11 years ago
Hahahahaha i made Jess a side character
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by unknownunknown



Im so happy i came up with a nick name for Aneesah in real life too. πŸ‘πŸΌ


Yep πŸ˜ƒ I didn't even think about that ...
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by xxAqeelahxx




Yipeee Not hitler for long I told Aneesah ... about your message and your nickname she got happy ... I call her that now 😊
Oh what softer...πŸ˜†Hitler kya Rajbeer pe line maregi ...?🀣 
Edited by snehapatro - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by snehapatro


Oh what softer...πŸ˜†Hitler kya Rajbeer pe line maregi ...?🀣 

funny, i should have that as Rajbeer's nightmare. 
Posted: 11 years ago
Aqeelah had told Rajbeer that he was doing his shift with her. Aqeelah- Dr. Preeto ap Dr. Zakir ke saath general ward mein hain. Dr. Ishmeet aur Dr. Banji aids ward. Dr. Aneesah ap senior Dr. Dhruv ko surgery mein assist karengi. Aur Dr. Rajbeer ap humare saath OPD mein hai... One more thing i hope ke ap sab ko yeh yaad hai key hum Nurse Station pe duties assign karte hai.
Dr. Preeto-  ya di.
Rajbeer is shocked when Preeto called Aqeelah di, and he looked at her. Aqeelah gave Preeto a stern look. Aq- Dr. Aqeelah... u call me Dr. Aqeelah.
Preeto- yes Dr. Aqeelah.
Aqeelah- Rajbeer tum OPD mein jao hume ek important kam hai,
Rajbeer- ya doc
Aqeelah leaves. Rajbeer- preeto tum Dr. Aqeelah ki choti behen ho
Preeto- han
Ishu- aur mein Aqeelah di ki cousin.
Rajbeer- agar mujhse koi bhi bhol hue ho toh please mujhe maaf karna. (He kneels and takes Preeto's hand) Please  Preeto, apni di se keh key mujhe suspend maat karwana. Please Preeto mera career khatam hojae ga.
Preeto tries freeing her hand and finally suceeds. Preeto- u know what just just f off. Hume tumse koi bakwas nahi karni kyunki humare paas fisoul ka time nahi hai.
Rajbeer is laughing and Preeto leaves. Benji and Zakir laugh too. Annie smiles- Rajbeer tumhe patta hai jab Benji ko patta chala tha na key Preeto Dr. Aqeelah ki choti behen hai tab woh toh behhosh hokey gir gaya tha.
Benji- of course kun behhost nahi hoga. Pepsi kitni full of life hai aur Dr. Aqeelah woh Hitler ki choti behen hai. Kun maane ga yeh donu behene hai.
Zakir- han lekin agar tum Dr. Aqeelah ko unke ghar pe milogay na tab tum believe nahi karogay ke Dr. Aqeelah Dhillon aur Aqeelah donu ek hai.
Rajbeer- i dont care mujhe toh bas Preeto ko pareshan karne ke liye ek aur point mil gaya.
Ishu- guys hume late ho raha hai.
Annie- arrey han chalo... Rajbeer tum Dr. Aqeelah ke saath ho kahi aisa na ho key tumhare doosre hi din tumhe suspension letter dey dey.
Rajbeer in the mocking voice says- Apko suspend issi liye kiya ja raha  hai kyunki ap late hai. Remember rule number 2; hume late comers nahi pasand.
And continues laughing. Benji- chal warna sach mein suspend kar deygi Hitler tujhe. Mujhe toh ek baar suspend kar rahi thi lekin meine jhoot bholke paata liye. Mein soch raha tha ke agar mein suspend hua toh mere Pinky, Bubli, Pintu, Sachin ka kya hoga.
Rajbeer- Pinky, Bubli, Pintu, Sachin kun hai yeh.
Annie- Benji shut up apne paed poudho (trees and plants) ki history isse suna na baand kar.
Rajbeer- Benji tumne  apne plants ke naam rakhe hai.
Zakir- han aur bhi hai Nemo toh naya naya aya hai.
Ishu- guys tum log actually Benji ki idiotic baate sun rahe ho. Bye im going.
The interns go to their duties.

Lunch...

All the interns except Preeto are in the cafeteria. Rajbeer is seating with Dhruv and the other gang is sitting on the table in front of them. Dhruv- weyse Preeto se mile
Rajbeer- han
Dhruv- keysi laji.
Rajbeer- come on dude woh salwar kameez pehenti hai not my type.
Dhruv was staring at Ishu and Rajbeer was talking about how Benji names his plants. Preeto comes and sees Dhruv staring at Ishu. She smiles and starts singing: Kiska hai yeh tumko intazar mein hon na. Dekh lo edhar toh ek baar mein hon na.
Dhruv stops staring at Ishu. Dhruv- arrey Preeto tum.
Preeto seats next to Dhruv- very bad Dhruv very bad. Hum tumse bhaut naraz hai.
Dhruv- kya kiya meine.
(Position is like this, Preeto, then Rajbeer and then at the other side its Dhruv.)
Preeto- tumne kaha tha key hum tumhe iss duniya mein sabse kubsurat lagte hai
Rajbeer was drinking coffee and then starts coughing. Rajbeer- kya kubsurat aur tum.
Preeto- chup raho essdroper
Dhruv- o im so sorry Preeto. Kya hai na key confession toh lift mein kiya tha meine. Aur lights chali gae aur jab lights ae tab mujhe patta chala key confession meine tujse nahi teri cousin se kiya.
Preeto- o no
Dhruv and Preeto start laughing. A taxi driver comes in the cafeteria. Driver- Preeto kab khatam hogi teri duty.
Preeto turns around- tum
Driver- han mein mera bhoot nahi hai.
Rajbeer- ab tum kun ho
Driver- mein Preeto ka padoshi hon
Preeto- Rohan tum chale jao hum kud  ati hon
Driver- o mummy ji mujhe pe jussa karegi. Kab free hogi.
Preeto- patta nahi koi emergency case agay toh.
Driver- baata dey mummy ji meri band bhaaja deygi.
Preeto- tu jakey mummyji ko hi pick kar ley na.
Driver- oye teri mummy ko jakey meine yeh baataya key tuney yeh kaha toh fir mera keema baana deygi.
Preeto- panch bhaaje ana.
Driver- panch bhaaje atta hon aur yeh ley tera lunch. Mujhe reste mein bhaut bhook lagi thik issi liye meine ek roti khali hai.
Preeto- accha hai humhe lunch nahi karna.
Driver- yeh ley
The taxi driver gives the lunch to Preeto and leaves.
Annie comes to Preeto, Dhruv and Rajbeer and seats there. Annie- hi
Preeto- hey
Annie opens her lunch and has a yucky expression- gobi ki sabzi
Preeto opens her lunch and has a yucky expression too- bharta
Annie- switch
Preeto- switch
Rajbeer- so mere boss ki behena kya hukum hai mere liye
Preeto- what
Rajbeer- i mean agar meine tumhara kehna nahi maana toh tum apni di se keh ki mujhe suspend kara dogi na.
Preeto- tumhe toh iss duniya se suspend kar deyna chahiye.
Rajbeer- suna meine, tumhare  jeysi choti height nahi hai meri lekin chaan tumse bhi ziyada tezz hai.
Preeto- tumhare kaan hai hume toh dekhae nahi diye, ek pacaas (50) maley ki building ke upar kya hai yeh dekhna difficult hai na.
Rajbeer- listen tum meri height pe maat jao.
Preeto- aur tum humari height pe maat jao.
Dhruv- guys chill
Annie- ya apni kud ki world war three maat suro karo.
Preeto- humne kaha suro ki hai iss khambey se kuch kaho na.
Rajbeer- eh, iss khambey ka koi naam hai
Preeto- kya... Devnagar ki roshni
Rajbeer- just shut up
Preeto- exactly what i excepted usske niwae tum aur keh bhi kya zakte ho
Rajbeer- listen mein chup hon isska matlab yeh nahi key tum kuch bhi bhologi.
Preeto- bhologay hum kya kar kya logay tum
Rajbeer- o ya want a bet
Preeto- really
Rajbeer- tum jeyse ladkiyon ka moo band karna mein bhaut acchi tarah se jaanta hon.
Preeto- tum kya humara moo band karo gay.
Rajbeer puts his hand on the back of her neck and goes closer to her face. Rajbeer- agar tumne kuch aur kaha toh yeh jitni bhi doori hai na woh nahi rahegi.
Preeto's eyes get wide, full of anger and she says- dog
Rajbeer- witch
They both get up and go their separated ways.
Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for making me a doctor , just read all the parts ... i like the nickname you gave me :) ... very very nice story :)

so Aqeelah is preeto sister  nice :)

I like the bit where me & preeto switch lunches ... hehe I love it :)
us docs have a lot of fun :)

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by PrincessAneesah


Thanks for making me a doctor , just read all the parts ... i like the nickname you gave me :) ... very very nice story :)

so Aqeelah is preeto sister nice :)

I like the bit where me & preeto switch lunches ... hehe I love it :)
us docs have a lot of fun :)




What about the part where benji was talking about his plants. i like that part, i thought the viewers got a idea that preeto & aqeelah were sisters when aqeelah started using the term hum
Posted: 11 years ago
I think the viewers like this better then preeto personal track cuz this ff reached pg 8 and personal track was at pg 12
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by unknownunknown




What about the part where benji was talking about his plants. i like that part, i thought the viewers got a idea that preeto & aqeelah were sisters when aqeelah started using the term hum


yes everything is nice :) the dialogues of all characters :) ... Yeah hope more ppl read this ... i think everyone is loving it

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