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VirMan FF- When Two Worlds Collide (BONUS CHAPTER) (Page 47)

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Posted: 09 July 2012 at 11:05am | IP Logged
u are awesome!!! i love ur ff!:)
pliis continue sooon!:)

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Love it! Please continue!

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aww loved d feeding...loll

hating dis Raj to core...

thanx for pm...

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Loved it.. Virman feeding each otther.. and dat Raj..Angry wanna kill him..LOL
Wt he is upto nw..Ouch

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Amazing work till now dear!!!
Keep writing!!!

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Tongue nice update cont soon

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Okay, so before I start to get the tomatoes, chappals and negative comments thrown at me I would like to sincerley apologise for this short update. I have just been caught up with a lot of things and have been really busy. I didnt want to keep you guys hanging because I wouldn't be writing if it wasnt for you, so I have taken the time out to write a short update. I will try to update soon with a longer one. Hope you guys can understand, and once again a big thank you to all the lovely comments (and i really mean lovely!) and also the likes.

 
 

                                               ~Chapter 12~

"Hey Manvi, how was your day?" Kritika hugged Manvi as she entered the living room. Manvi looked over at the sofa where Raj was sitting down an ice pack on his nose.

 

"It was great Krtika. What's there for dinner? Do you want me to help make something?"

 

"Don't worry Manvi. I've made dinner it's all ready, just get ready and come down in a while." Manvi smiled and looked at Raj again.

 

"Look at this stupid brother of mines, he fell from his bike and broke his nose at the same time." Kritika went over to Raj and lightly punched his arm. He looked over at Manvi, his eyes full of anger and hurt. Manvi shuddered as she looked into his eyes. She walked of and went into her room.

 

                                             ___________________

Virat [18:05]: You reached home safely???

Manvi [18:06]: Yeah, I'm totally fine, you don't need to worry

Virat [18:06]: That's good, Raj troubling you?

Manvi [18:o6}: Didn't say a word. I think your punch taught him a lesson

Virat [18:07]:  Smile

 

Manvi scrolled through her messages as she texted Virat. She was glad he was concerned for her and she felt protected. A soft knock came on Manvi's door.

 

"Raj?" Manvi opened the door and saw Raj standing there. His ice pack was gone and she could see his bruised nose.

 

"Manvi, we need to talk."

 

"Please Raj, I think you've done enough for today."

 

"Look I wanted to apologise."

 

"Apology accepted now you can leave." Manvi wanted to stay far away from Raj. She didn't want him to hurt her again.

 

"Please, we need to talk its urgent." Raj placed his hand in between the door to prevent Manvi from closing the door. He forced his way inside and slowly took hold of Manvi's hand and dragged her to the window.

 

"Manvi, I'm really sorry about what happened today. I just wasn't thinking."

 

"Raj, I don't get what you have against Virat. What has he done?"

 

"Look Manvi, I just thought that Virat is one of those rich guys who just want to take advantage of girls like you."

 

"He's not like that."

 

"I know he isn't. Today he proved it by protecting you."

 

"What do you mean?" Manvi looked confused as she continued looking at Raj.

 

"Well I was just testing him to see if he cares for you or if he's just using you. And today he proved me wrong."

 

Manvi felt relieved. "So you won't bother Virat again?"

 

Raj smiled. "No, you can go with Virat. But I will still protect you no matter what."

 

Manvi smiled. "I think we should get going for dinner."

 

"Yeah, let's go." Raj took hold of Manvi's hand and they both went downstairs.

 

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"Wait, Raj said all of that?" Virat smirked as he listened to Manvi's recollecting her conversation between her and Raj. They were both seated in Virat's office sipping on coffee.

 

"Yeah, he seemed really upset when he told me. I think he was just being protective, that's all."

 

"I don't think so. I mean to be that over protective, come on."

 

"Give him a chance." Manvi looked at him with cute expression.

 

"Okay, fine, but that doesn't mean he gets to say anything he wants to me."

 

"He won't" Virat smiled.

 

"So, what about this success party you and Tanya was discussing?" Manvi swivelled around in her chair and placed her mug on the table.

 

"Well me and Tanya were deciding that we have a success party after the release of the new album. It will be held in a few days. I think everyone should be appreciated for their hard work and effort. What do you think?"

 

"I think it's a great idea, can't wait."

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ur story is fantastic and interesting. excited about next part.update soon.

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