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Thankuuu for the pm Big smile
I just love these two behenas...their love is totally hazaroon mei ek hai...loved it..
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res!!
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hrishikesh!! god knows i miss the scenes there.. lovely beginning to the story, jeevika is all worried about manvi, that all we need to fall inlove withthese sisters again..



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hey u knw that i don really like j !..infact i dislike her a lot!

but ur story j is a completely diff story..i like her!..
so hat tells u hw mch i like ur ss..
it was a really pleasnt read..thnk u so mch fr the pm..Smile

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Sorry Jessie for the late response, plus I'm a bit slow in reading lines in Hindi. It was great, so many different emotions and incorporated all characters. Loving the suspense!   :D

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brilliant update please pm when you update next thanks

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Finally read it:D..and the wait was worthwhile:D..I loved it Jess :D..Can't wait for your next update:D

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Thank you for commenting on my work. It really feels pleasure to read your comments.

 

 

Please leave your precious comments and criticism after reading. Will love to know your opinion.

 

 

PART 2:

 

Jeevika touched Maanvi ' s face hiding her tear back , Maanvi saw the fearful face Of Jeevika and hugged her tightly as she dint want to see her sister in pain .

 

Jeevika held Maanvi's face in her hands . "Maanvi its time for you take dinner na , you would have surely missed my feeding this  whole month ,  sit here I will feed you "

 

Within minutes Jeevika arrived with the dinner in her hands, she feeded her happily with a smile. Maanvi started narrating the whole story in Rishikesh that happened in the month. After helping Maanvi with medicines. Jeevika made Maanvi sleep in her lap. She comforted Maanvi to take a deep sleep.

 

Making her little baby sleep well Jeevika moved out the room. Everyone else in had slept off. Doctor's words were buzzing in her ears. She ran away to ganga ghat and sat there. She looked above with tearful eyes.

 

"Maa aur Papa, look at our conditions we both are helpless, when Doctors were discussing about Maanvi my heart beat stopped to beat for a while as their words brought me more fear , Maanvi is already having a weak body  but she was mentally prepared to fight beyond anything her disease , I was always proud of her internal strength , but now fighting and fighting  she has lost most of her weight and doctor has said some advance treatment should be done , I don't know how this advance treatment is going to help her whether her body conditions will accept it , more over A Senior doctor is arriving to check her condition within two weeks and discuss on further treatment , I am really afraid to face the whole situations we are going to face , please give Maanvi more strength and beyond that give me emotional strength to accept the realities . "She put her head as she was crying her heart out to her Mom and dad.

 

Meanwhile Viren had been trying to call to Jeevika to know about her where about, Jeevika had not opened her bag and took her mobile out.

 

Viren finally decided to call the land line number. Beeji picked up the call and answered "Beeji , Namastey Beeji , hope you all are doing good , I have sent Jeevika alone to look after Maanvi , I am trying to call her but she is not picking up the call . "

 

"Haan beta , Jeevika has reached safely she might be sleeping as she was tired , I will ask her to call you soon she gets up"Beeji replied.

 

"Teek hai Beeji ,I am just getting very tensed as Anytime Jeevika might get emotionally weak and breakdown ."Viren replied with a fearful voice

 

"Nahi beta , we will take care , we will surely be besides her not let her loose hope , please don't worry much about it beta , we are always there " Beeji replied

 

Viren cut the call as Beeji's words soothed him a lot.

 

 

Beeji knocked Maanvi and Jeevika's room to talk to Jeevika. There was no response. She opened to find Maanvi sleeping alone. Beeji got afraid and rushed to search Jeevika everywhere in the home. She couldn't find her anywhere. Beeji got scared and Made Dabbu to go in search of Jeevika.

 

Dabbu ran all the roads to find Jeevika. As he was approaching Ganga ghat he sensed some one sitting all alone there putting their head down. He felt it might be Jeevika.

 

Dabbu reached near Jeevika and touched her head. Jeevika looked up as her eyes were overloaded with tears.

 

Dabbu called out "Di , "

 

Jeevika immediately hugged Dabbu and cried . "Dabbu , Hamari Maani ko deka na , wu kitne hamzoor hai , aur doctor usse kis adavance treatment ke bare batha rahe , koi Senior specialist annale wala hai , muje bahut dar lag raha hai "

 

Precap:

 

Jeevika accompanies Maanvi for next chemo session. Senior doctor has arrived to check up Maanvi.

 

Hope my update dint make you disappoint .

 

Comments and criticism are most welcomed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

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