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glad u got the feeling of it!! n he wants a gudiya for himself... yup he is...hehhe Gudiyaan Sis how can he upset his Champ??
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Awesome shona.
Brilliant write up
dear *standing ovation from my side* what a touchy update. I felt Goosebumps
while reading it. Superb dear. ur every single word means a lot!!
Loved the way u described
Arjun & his profession, his dedication towards work has been described
brilliantly. thank u!!
Amazing shona we can so feel the connection with his character. Wow this is the
first time i am reading Arjun as commissioner. Lol I wish aisa commissioner har
city mein ho. Lol people will get busy in admiring his persona &
personality that they will forget crimes & doing any insane
activities. Oops I am sooo lost in drooling over him & before I forget to
write comment I'll get back here :) awww
i loved the start & convo between arjun
& arohi. But the call broke their moment. It was so touchy the way u described
the pain of mother. The way she cried & complained was super touchy. I am
speechless. The way u have written the moment their dialogues, their pain i
mean everything was so awesome that it gave me Goosebumps. Sorry I am actually
at loss of words. Apologize if I write anything stupid. Girl u better not say anything like that again
...I read in ur other comments...u always say srry if I'm writing anything stupid...who told u that?? ur comment is the best n never ever stop what u feel in expressing!! I love reading them n when it comes from ur heart that's the best part!!
I really felt bad
for arjun here. Poor guy was badly trapped in the situation. A father inside
him was dying to do anything to save his son. But his duty his loyalty towards
our country didn't allow him to take any step further. & importantly
a husband inside was feeling helpless as he cant see his wife in that
condition. I loved the way u have described his pain & dilemma *claps* u read very carefully na...dissecting every single part of the story
...
Arjun had agreed to
meet goons to bring aman back & the cost of his own life. Finally arohi
talked to him. Their conversation was extremely touchy. & yippeee
arjun rocked it & aman was back with his parents i am so happy that he is
absolutely fine. yup their love won!!
I loved the end.
Super duper cute. Pure update ne jitna daraya utna hi end part ne khush kar
diya. Hugss to you Shona. Loved Aman such a cutie pie Asking for Kid sis
& she will be his fav Doll :) Aweee Such a Lovely Moment *Awesome''Awesome
& Awesome* Lolz Like father like Son '.Naughtyness Ki hadh :P Loved the moment Shared by Arjuhi :) Superb It
made Us all Smile :D hahha jaise baap waisa beta
...I'm really glad the end made u smile...yuppiie Aman is the cuttiee n he wants a dolly...
I am So sorry for commenting late. Sorry my net
wasn't Working :( Finally its working Now :) never be srry...always comment when u have time!!
Thanks for the Amazing Write up :)
Love
Pranjal.
Muaahh sweetheart...love u...u always manage to give lamba lamba comments n I love how u express all ur feelings...
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thank u Prerna for ur lovely words!! feels really good!! 
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always yup haye mereko toh koi sharmati najar arehi hai!! aww thanx...yeah way too difficult!!...aare Arjun ll take care of that...humein kya tension!!The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:
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