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ahem ahem !!!!
so here;'s the second one !!Embarrassed
its bit philosophical !!!
Its not on the show !!
but ya wanted to share dis one also !!

so its bit confusing !!
as its on shining pure mirror - pure water !!... based on natural calamities face by this nature's mirror ..!!

any confusions ??? m there just write it down !!
- love upi !!

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Poem : The Shine ..
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The night sky calls me .
Call's me to come up and explore the stars ..

Why are they shining ..
They appear to be cherished ..

Soothing shine made me close my eye's and wrand around ..

The tree's .. houses. animals ..Big bruiser's  all are darkened..

Alas ...I found something over there ..

The sparkling mirror..with unusual shine ...

Giving blinks in the blur night ...

Shining in heaps ...

Protecting the love beneath ..

Its the water - the shining amore .


 I can see the sparkling water ..

Pure , beautiful, blissful .. , misty ..

Ohh !! so that's why star's are sparkling ...

Indicating the people overhere 

"Find yourself ...in the shining glow ..."
 
You sleepy creature's.. see the "nature's " miror...

It's right next to you ...see its sparkling ...

See you face in it ...

Is .it still dark ???

Wandering why ..??

Count the no. of times you served this mirror..

1 or 2 or 3 ...

No questions more ... neither an answer is needed now ..

See  what you made yourself and How ??

But See your eye's are sparkling ..

They are pure ..

Your eye's speak about your deeds..

Though you'r face is dark but your speaking eye's are alive ..
and sparkling with that unusual spine .. pure ..

Pure  as the shining water in the cold chilly night ..

Spreading the awakening light ...

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here it was ~!
do leave ur lovely reviews !!!!


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Originally posted by moonlight08

i am going to use this..Hug
Moon light di !!
Hug ya u can pehle ye batao h kesi ye ???
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awesome upasana. and fabulas
simply super
keep writing
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Its awesum ...i really luvd it...kahan chupi baithi thi ab tak?????
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Originally posted by moonlight08

Uppu,
do you really think bekar hoti toh main use karti?Tongue

marvellous it is..Hug
Aww thankew so much di !!
u know wen i wrote it i thought its bit confusing !!
it was difficult for me to clarify me point of view with clearing those confusions !! and maintaining the suspence factor in it !! *phew *
m so so glad it came out well
u know m feeling so light now LOL   ya seriously !!
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Sorry upasna dont mind my like button is nt working ...i ve tried many times hitting like ...but hamesha error in posting...
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