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Posted: 24 June 2012 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Nice poem Big smile plz try to write more.. want to read more..

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Posted: 24 June 2012 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Lovely poem upasana
I have no words to ex press the poem its awesome
sorry I don't have tat much vocabulary
your poem is s imply rocks
every mother dreams I saw your poem
hats off upu
this birthday ll make you as pottery upusana

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Posted: 24 June 2012 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komal_naksh

Nice poem Big smile plz try to write more.. want to read more..
Thanks a lot komal Hug
m glad u liked my pity work !! will surely write more !

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Posted: 24 June 2012 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kumarandils

Lovely poem upasana
I have no words to ex press the poem its awesome
sorry I don't have tat much vocabulary
your poem is s imply rocks
every mother dreams I saw your poem
hats off upu
this birthday ll make you as pottery upusana
Thanks a lot kumaran !!!

ya i tried writing poems frm the basic topic only - a mother's voice .. though its a emotional topic but ya its wide to !!
m so glad u liked it !!! Embarrassed

ya heehehe .. on this birthday i became a poetess !! LOL
though i hv a zero experience in writing poem as i basically write fanfictions but ya m happy its getting gud response !!! Big smile

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Posted: 24 June 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by upasna_mishti

Originally posted by kumarandils

Lovely poem upasana
I have no words to ex press the poem its awesome
sorry I don't have tat much vocabulary
your poem is s imply rocks
every mother dreams I saw your poem
hats off upu
this birthday ll make you as pottery upusana
Thanks a lot kumaran !!!

ya i tried writing poems frm the basic topic only - a mother's voice .. though its a emotional topic but ya its wide to !!
m so glad u liked it !!! Embarrassed

ya heehehe .. on this birthday i became a poetess !! LOL
though i hv a zero experience in writing poem as i basically write fanfictions but ya m happy its getting gud response !!! Big smile

Y u glad me . :-) ha ha
I like your way of mother thought of grown up their child . for your age u think these level tat wat I say we get as pottery upasana

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Posted: 24 June 2012 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
its sooo touching upasna...
its aweasumThumbs Up

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Posted: 24 June 2012 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kumarandils

Originally posted by upasna_mishti

Originally posted by kumarandils

Lovely poem upasana
I have no words to ex press the poem its awesome
sorry I don't have tat much vocabulary
your poem is s imply rocks
every mother dreams I saw your poem
hats off upu
this birthday ll make you as pottery upusana
Thanks a lot kumaran !!!

ya i tried writing poems frm the basic topic only - a mother's voice .. though its a emotional topic but ya its wide to !!
m so glad u liked it !!! Embarrassed

ya heehehe .. on this birthday i became a poetess !! LOL
though i hv a zero experience in writing poem as i basically write fanfictions but ya m happy its getting gud response !!! Big smile

Y u glad me . :-) ha ha
I like your way of mother thought of grown up their child . for your age u think these level tat wat I say we get as pottery upasana

hehehe.. ya !!!
yeye!! hehe... me  now a poet !!! Tongue LOL

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Posted: 25 June 2012 at 12:03am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Maha_Naksh4ever

its sooo touching upasna...
its aweasumThumbs Up
 thenkew maha !!!!!!!!!! Embarrassed

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