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MY STORY: FRIENDS FOREVER PART 2 @pg no 17 (Page 9)

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
gwen awesome poems Embarrassed

the cloud wala poem was awesome... other i cnt comment coz i dnt understand hindi that much Unhappy but m sure it will be awesome Big smile

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SanchayitaM

Gunnu gunnu gunnu my sweety! Aap itna achchha likhti ho? Laga hi nahi yeh aapki 1st story hai...
Main toh complete bhi nahi kiya aur comment karne chali aayi!
Pata hai mujhe laga ki main ne kabhi CID dekhi hi nai toh main ne socha kuchh samajh nai paungi! But u write so wonderfully dear... Bohot interesting hai kasam se! Pura complete karke phirse aaungi bakwaas karne...
Kams kam 5 comments toh pakka hai! No matter how irritated n bore u will be... I am full on excited! So.. 5 se jyada ho sakte ho. Mind mat karna meri pyari behna Ginni...!

koi baat nhi
thank u di
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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 11:11am | IP Logged
sanju di aapke comment padkar mujhe 
isa lga ki mujhe apni story fir se padna chahiye
wow ur comment was
lot better than my story

thank u di
for ur wondeful comments
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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sundasnaz

congratz dear on ur first stroy and ya its beautifully written,,,keep it up..

thank u di
u r the bestWink
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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sundasnaz

Clap...amazing Gwen dear...keep it up..you are very good writer..

thank u di
no not that gud
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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samiya.059

Koi chand sitara hai
koi phool se pyara hai
koi khushi ka ishara hai
hame bas itna kehna hai
woh naam tumhara hai my dear gunnu

aawww
thank u di
itna bhi mein achi nhi hoon
aap mujhe sharminda kr rhi hai

and awesome shayari
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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ---Priya---

gwen awesome poems Embarrassed

the cloud wala poem was awesome... other i cnt comment coz i dnt understand hindi that much Unhappy but m sure it will be awesome Big smile

its ok
thank u for ur comment
and thank u for reading
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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Gunnu u are vry speacial sweethrt .ye chori ki hovi shayari hai

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