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vry nice dearClap...  totally hatke concept!! keep it upThumbs Up
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Originally posted by baspa

vry nice dearClap...  totally hatke concept!! keep it upThumbs Up
Thank u very much and yes u too coninue  ur ff i waited a month to read the next update

Well i have written another ff if u want u can have a look on it
INSHI FF - a relation beyond words  
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Originally posted by MultiPAULOMI

Originally posted by baspa

vry nice dearClap...  totally hatke concept!! keep it upThumbs Up
Thank u very much and yes u too coninue  ur ff i waited a month to read the next update

Well i have written another ff if u want u can have a look on it
INSHI FF - a relation beyond words  
i've read that ff too n have commented also see initial chapters and i must say u r a vry good writer n u have a vry good imagination and yes thank u for waiting for my ff update i've updated it and hope u'll like it. do give ur feedback i'll really wait for it.
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CHAPTER – 4

It was late night and everything was dark outside.But in SN a very fishy thing happened.Slowly one after another each bedroom's door opened and one by one,with a tip-toe movement,came and stood outside Sonia's bedroom.They slowly and very silently opened the door and as soon as the clock struck 12,all shouted,"HAPPY BIRTHDAY."It was Sonia's 10th birthday.Every year she used to get this surprise,but today,after seeing the newspaper,she couln't stop thinking about it and slept unknowingly.So when they all shouted,she jumped up on the bed and was surprised.Suddenly she remembered it was her birthday.She smiled.All wished and kissed her one by one and left.

                                                        Next morning,everyone dressed in white,got ready to go to the temple for HAVAN as it was Mandira's BARSI.During the havan,everyone prayed for the peace of her soul.Sonia whispered to Rishi,"Pata hai Daddy main jab bhi sochti hu ke mere birthday waale din hi maasi ki death ho gayi thi toh mujhe bohot bura lagta hai.Tab mujhe kuch bhi achcha nehi lagta aur mujhe mera birthday tak manaane ka dil nehi karta."She became sad.Rishi patted her on her back and said,"Sonu beta ab bhagwaan ji ki yehi marzi thi toh kya kar sakte hai?"Sonia sadly agreed and then happily added,"Pata hai sab kehte hai ki main bilkul maasi jaisi hu,ekdum carbon copy."Rishi smiled,"Ha beta ekdum carbon copy"Sonia then concentrated on the havan.Rishi looked at her and thought to himself,"Lekin kabhi kabhi jab tumhe gussa ata hai na toh bilkul apne papa ki parchaai lagti ho"and looked forward,"Apne - asli - papa ki."

                                                       In the evening,all her friends and neighbours came at Sonia's birthday party.She received many beautiful gifts.Rishi presented her an i-pod and strictly ordered her not to tell this to anyone especially Indira.Indira gave her a beautiful frock.

                                                       At night,after the party,when she was sitting outside with her i-pod.Her eyes got again stucked to that newspaper which was falling on the ground by her side.She picked it up and opened the front page and was again got lost in the name and the picture.She went to Indira and Rishi's room who were making sleeping arrangements.Sonia went inside and they got surprised to see her awake at that time.Indira called her inside and asked,"Kya baat hai beta tum abhi tak jaag rahi ho?Neend nehi aa rahi hai?"Sonia slowly came towards them and sat on their bed.She looked at them and asked innocently,"Mamma,Daddy yeh Sameer Diwan kaun hai?"The question appeared to be a smashing thunder in their ears.Indira fearfully asked with a low voice,"Kaun?"Sonia again asked very casually and normally,"Sameer Diwan?Kaun hai woh?"Rishi anyhow  smiled and asked,"Tum aaj achaanak yeh sawaal kyu puch rahi ho?"Sonia replied,"Vo aaj subhe ke business newspaper mein na maine front page mein ek photo dekhi,jise businessman of the year ka award mila hai,niche naam likha hua tha Sameer Diwan…..,ek minute"Incompleting her sentence she ran away and came back with the newspaper and showed them,"Yeh dekhiye,isi photo ki baat kar rahi thi"and then continued,"Main bhi toh apne naam ke saath likhti hu na Sonia Sameer Diwan isiliye pucha."Indira's hands were shaking while holding the newspaper and she exchanged a scary look with Rishi which was interrupted by Sonia again,"Vaise ek baat na maine notice ki hai ke Rish aur Ishu apne naam ke piche aapka naam,yani Ricky Diwan likhte hai,phir mere naam ke piche Sameer Diwan kyu?"Rishi became speechless and started searching for an appropriate answer.He very slowly and carefully replied,"Beta ye tumhara pura naam hai Sonia Sameer Diwan,ab agar main isme Ricky bhi ghusa du toh bohot lamba ho jaayega na,Sonia Sameer Ricky Diwan achcha thore hi lagta hai itna lamba nam sunne mein bas isiliye aur vaise bhi ek naam ke bohot saare log hote hai is duniya mein."Sonia seemed to be convinced with his justification.She smiled broadly,kissed them and after bidding goodnight,she left.

                                                     Indira immediately closed the door and attacked Rishi,"Yeh sab aapke vajah se ho raha hai.Kya zarurat thi aapko iske naam ke piche us hevan ka naam lagane ki?Us raakshas ne meri behen ko tabaah kiya aur ye maasum,isko toh is baat ka andaaza hi nehi hai ke jise voh maasi samajhti hai vo uski apni ma hai."She stopped to take breath.Rishi calmly put his hands on her shoulders,"Mujhe pata hai aur main sab samajhta bhi hu Shrimatiji,lekin ye baat to sach hai na ke vo asliyat mein Sameer aur Mandira ki beti hai.Mandira se maine ye vaada kiya tha ke kabhi bhi uspe us khaandaan ka saaya nehi parne dunga aur ye vaada main marte dum tak nibhaunga bhi,lekin main Sonu se uski asli pehchaan nehi cheen sakta.Yeh uske saath nainsaafi hogi.Is naam pe uska pura hak hai."But Indira still argued,"Aapne kabhi socha hai ke kya hoga jab usey ye saari sachchai maalum paregi?Kya beetegi us choti si bachchi pe?Meri toh sochke bhi rooh kaap jaati hai."Rishi said,"Lekin agar usey yeh baat kisi aur se pata chali tab vo hamare bare mein kya sochegi?Kya tab uski nafrat aap bardaasht kar paayengi?"After a few moment,he consoled Indira but said firmly,"Ek na ek din usey ye baat pata chalni hi hai,usey ye jaanne ka pura adhikaar hai,aur sahi waqt aane par main khud usey bataunga."Indira remained shocked at his last words.Rishi looked at her and understood her pain of loosing Sonia.He said,"Ghabraaiye mat Shrimatiji,Sonu humari beti thi,hai aur hamesha rahegi aur usey humse koi bhi nehi cheen sakta lekin is sach ka to usey saamna karna hi parega aaj ho ya phir kal."Indira understood Rishi and nodded her head in agreement but inside her she still could feel the pain and terror thinking about the reaction of Sonia when she will be introduced to her actual identity.



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