Originally posted by: Arezo.One classic piece of your work. No words :)
Loved it!
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I don't know why, But I could hear some unfamiliar voice ending with echoes on this line "Mujhe bata ke main kia karoon, main kia karoon ay mere khuda..main kia karoon" <3
Originally posted by: SmileyStarMe!! =D
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Speechless! Totally at a loss for words! That was absolutely beautiful! I loved it sooo much!
And I loved the dialogues! So khalis urdu! Hehehe ;) I know it was kinda sad but it was sooo optimistic too... The way she had complete faith in Allah despite what happened... I totally loved it! It was one classic piece of writing! Absolutely beautiful and wonderfully written :) Love you for writing this one :)
Originally posted by: -Grace-
</div><div>Farrii😳Thank you sooo MUCH!haha yes i had to use urdu otherwise i wud have murdered the essence lmaohehe im SO g;add u liked and i was able to convey the message cuz honestly i didnt know if people would understand what i meant heheThanks again<3
Originally posted by: SmileyStar
Hahaha! Yes the urdu dialogues made it all the more perfect 😊 I totally loved it 😳 now off to read your other OS 😉
fikar mat karo baaji, aap ne kisi ka bura nahi socha aap ke saath bhi insaaf hoga
She has grown up so fast just yesterday she had remembered her crawling across the halls, echoing her laughter and giggles in the whole mansion and today she was standing here consoling her broken sister
Originally posted by: InvisibleSmilethis is so beautiful. I mean i loved how you kept her faith in her Allah as the backdrop of the story and entwined their story into it. Your dialouges are utterly beautiful, especially so because they are written in Urdu.
Once again life smiled at her as she succeeded in another test. Test of faith, test of strength. Beautifully, beautiful jaani. You have succeeded my expectations with this writing. I loved reading it.
Originally posted by: OnlyHopeThis was marvelous...I'm speecless!
The way her FAITH was what this revolved around, with her other story going on at the same time, just WOW.It was utterly beautiful.The VERY last line totally hit home...went right through to my heart.I <3 youuu for this! Now it's ME who is blessed to have read this ;)
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