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Posted: 22 June 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Oh my God Iqra :O I am at a loss of words!! I don't Urdu at all but I have always loved this language and the way you have used it its just too beautiful to define!! I am going to edit later since I am on mobile but I honestly loved it!!

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Posted: 22 June 2012 at 7:08am | IP Logged
brilliant brilliant
really loved it <3

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Posted: 22 June 2012 at 10:05am | IP Logged
that was very beautiful! wow! seroiusly wow!

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Posted: 22 June 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged
nice...

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Posted: 22 June 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
It was such a beautiful piece IQ! I have absolutely no words! Its beautiful! I love it. Thankyou for writing such a touching part. Its al about belief, without it nothing works. Keep writing more IQ! :D

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Posted: 22 June 2012 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
beautifulll

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Posted: 22 June 2012 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arezo.

One classic piece of your work. No words :)


Loved it!

Added:

I don't know why, But I could hear some unfamiliar voice ending with echoes on this line "Mujhe bata ke main kia karoon, main kia karoon ay mere khuda..main kia karoon"  <3



Thank you so much Arezo!
yes that is the voice that we often hear within us, the voice of our conscience Smile

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Posted: 22 June 2012 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SmileyStar

Me!! =D

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Speechless! Totally at a loss for words! That was absolutely beautiful! I loved it sooo much!

And I loved the dialogues! So khalis urdu! Hehehe ;) I know it was kinda sad but it was sooo optimistic too... The way she had complete faith in Allah despite what happened... I totally loved it! It was one classic piece of writing! Absolutely beautiful and wonderfully written :) Love you for writing this one :)

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Thank you sooo MUCH!

haha yes i had to use urdu otherwise i wud have murdered the essence lmao
hehe im SO g;add  u liked and i was able to convey the message cuz honestly i didnt know if people would understand what i meant hehe
Thanks again<3

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