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simply_thebest

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Posted: 11 June 2006 at 1:38pm | IP Logged

hi

this is first time i'll write a fanfic or a story

agr koi galti howi to plzzzz bata dena aur maine english main zyada nhi likha kyun ke meri english kuch kharab haiConfusedlolz

there is  the first part maine characters describe nahi kiye kyun ke abhi story age kaisse chale gi kuch pata nahi lekin kuch aissay bhi baath hongi jisske saath saaf zaheer hoga ke unka rishta kiya hai ek dosre se.......

hope u'll like it

Pyar, dil lagi aur zindagi

PART I

Ek larka nikal raha hai ghar se chehra nhi dikhayi de raha hai lekin woh bol raha hai " han mum main a jaon ga wapis college ke bad main sida ghar hi aon ga! ap tention na lain!!" aur usski mum ussko kehti hai " beta jee main appko janti hon appne phir ghar nhi ana phir se late ho janna hai!!!" lekin woh larka sun ne se hi pehle car main beth gaya a red sport car aur ghari tez chala raha hai bus abh woh azad ho gaya hai...... 10min bad woh college pohonchta hai aur ek larki awaz deti hai "ANGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD" aur finally woh palat ta hai ussne

kale color ki pent pehni hoti hai aur white color ka ek T-shirt (he looks so handsomeEmbarrassed)

angad: hey Sonia

sonia: hey angu how r u?

angad: cooooooooooool and u?

sonia: also do u know wht happen ?

angad: no but u r going to...

sonia: i am selected for the singing competition and u also

angad: wht?! i never wanted participate to this competition and u know tht no?

sonia: i am sorry angu... but now u can't do anything u have to sing

angad: in ur dreams

sonia: angu plzzzzz for me come on yaaar

angad: no and stop tht or else i am gonna be angry

sonia: hey angu just chill u r gonna sing and......

angad: no u listen to me u r gonna and tell them tht i don't want to sing at all ok?

sonia: it's impossible it's final

angad: fine

sonia: we have 1month for the preparation

angad: hey it's too early!

sonia: i know but i know wht to do don't worry

angad: oh really? tell me then

sonia: we are going to make us song and sing in front of all

angad: u r crazy damn it

sonia: crazy on ur love (laugh LOLLOL)

angad: stop ok? now it's not funny

sonia: ok ok now can we go in class?

angad: y not?

donon class main chale jate hain aur wahan unka Miss Cholo wait kar rahi hoti.

Miss Cholo: phir se late

angad: come on mam we r just 5min late

sonia: sorry mam

Miss Cholo: last time go on ur place and sit

angad+sonia: yes mam

donon apni jagaah chale jate hain aur batain choron late hain:

angad: i hate this bluddy teacher

sonia: come on Angu not again ok?

angad: she is so......... stupid

sonia: she is us teacher!

Miss Cholo dekh leti hai aur phir kehti hai ke issne donon ko dekhna hai class ke end main aur class ki end ho jati hai aur donon intezar karte hain ke dosre student chale jaey phir baathkarna choron kar dete hain

angad+sonia: yes mam

Miss Cholo: app donon ek to late ate ho upar se batain karte ho! agar app donon ne late ana aur batain class main karna kahtam nhi kiya to punition mil jaey gi

angad: but mam hamari koi galti nahi class itni boring hoti hai ke kuch na kuch karna hota hai

sonia: sorry mam yeh nhi kehna chahta tha ( angad ke paon par marti hai)

Miss Cholo: jo bhi kehna chahta tha keh diya abh agar ek martaba bhi maine dekha ke app donon chating kar rahe ho ya late aye to bohot bura hoga!!!!!!!

sonia: ok mam nhi honge bye mam

donon class ke bahir a jate hain aur dosri class ki taraf jate hain ke rastey main Pratam mil jata hai: " hey Angad

-hey pratam how's u?

-fine nd u?

-fine i don't wanna go in this class i am gonna hanging r u coming with me?

-yeah y not? i am free!

-angu u r not going anywhere we have class don't forgot!

-i know but i don't wanna go if u wanna go it's up to u but i am not going

-u r just impossible

-i know jaan hey i have a poem for u only

-oh really? how sweet!

-come on Angad tell us ur poem

-ok ok

Har kadam par imtihaan leti hai zindagi,

Har waqt naya sadma deti hai zindagi.

Hum zindagi se kya shikwa kare,

Aap jaise dost bhi to deti hai zindagi.

-how cute now i am going in class

- ok ok go lekin itna gussa to math karo aissa lagta hai ke kissi ko mar dogi hahaha

- very funny

-come on Pratam, Sonia to ja rahi ahi class hum chalte hian coffee bar main thik hai?

-ok thik hai

jab woh coffee bar pohonchte hain to wahan dekthe hain ke already unka pora group hai to sida wahan chle jate hain

pratam&angad: hey guys

all: hi u two

josh: hows u?

pratam&angad: cooool u?

josh: same here

Nosha: maine suna hai ke tum singing competition main hissa liya hai

angad: han yaar woh sonia ne mera naam dala tha aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi jab miss ne dala diya phir ati hai aur mujhe bata deti hai, mujhe koi nahi yakeen tha ke mera naam hoga uar main iss competetion main hissa longa kher abh le hi liya hai abh dikhate hian ke hum main kiya dam hain!

garv: Sonia? lo kuch na kuch dal main kalla hai

angad: sonia is just a ood friend nothing more

garv:....

vivek: teri partner kon hai?

angad: sonia!

all: wht?????

angad: han bus abh kiya ho sakta hia? kuch nahi!

garv: hahaha abh to tum gaye kamse

pratam: hey guys didn't u hungry?

josh: yeah i am so hungry!!!

vivek&garv: me too

angad go u guys, i'll meet u later k?

all: ok

Angad chala jata hai aur coll ke andar phirse chala jata hai wahan Miss Cholo pakar leti hai ussko

Miss Cholo: Mister Angad where r u going?

Angad: oh Miss Cholo! i am goin to meet Sonia for competition we are together so i am going to repeat with her: any problem miss Chooolo?

Miss Cholo: no but u r not with Sonia u r with Kripa mister!

angad: wht ? i am with Sonia! i think u didn't read properly ur copy

Miss Cholo: oh yes i read it and it's confirm u r with Kripa u can ask the principal!

angad: wht is tht now?damn it!

miss Cholo: hope u r going to have fun with Kripa (with a funny voice)

angad: don't worry Miss Cholo!

Miss Cholo: i am not worried and not have to be

Angad goes to meet Sonia and want to know wht is all tht!! wht is saying this stupid Miss Cholo! after 30min he meets her in the cafeteria!

Angad: Sonia! wht is tht? am i with u for the competition or no?

Sonia: yes off course y?

angad: coz Cholo met me and told me tht i am with Kripa

sonia to herself: oh this bluddy Cholo! i hate her. to Angad: don't worry Angu u r going to be with me i'll discuss with the principal and he'll accept don't worry ok?

angad: mean u lied me!!!!!! AngryAngryAngry

sonia: oh no angad don't be angry i didn't wanted!

angad: oh yeah u didn't wanted? first of all u give my name for this competition aur mujhse poocha bhi nahi tha second tumne mujhse jooth bola

sonia: oh angad i am so sorry i promiss abh nahi hoga aissa!

angad: abh aissa hoga hi nahi kyun ke main iss competition main kripa ke saath hissa le raha hon

sonia: noooooooooooo angad tum ussay nahi jante woh itni attittude girl hai aur tumko bohot nakhrey dikhaye gi tumko bohot bohot thang kare ge aur woh.....

angad: enough! main iss competion main Kripa ke saath hissa le rahah on samjhi tum!

aur angad wahanse chala jata hai aur sochta hia ke abh yeh Kripa kon hai?? kaisse pehchanon ga main ussko? lagta hai ke uss class main janna hi parega!

 

hope u'll like it

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Posted: 11 June 2006 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
wonderful start

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Posted: 11 June 2006 at 2:06pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by unum ali

wonderful start

thx a looooooooot

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Posted: 11 June 2006 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
wow!! awesome...Clap Clap Clap
plz continue

simply_thebest

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Posted: 12 June 2006 at 6:15am | IP Logged

Originally posted by koolchick

loved it...loved the teacher's name, Miss Cholo LOL LOL LOL
so A will hate K?
continue soon Tongue

thx a lto dear

just wait and wtch i think u'll have the answer in the next part

simply_thebest

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Posted: 12 June 2006 at 6:16am | IP Logged

Originally posted by lil miz

wow!! awesome...Clap Clap Clap
plz continue

thx a looooooooot

i'll send te next part friday

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hey gr8 start but wats the name anyways continue soooooon


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