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Roxxy47 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 7:42am | IP Logged
'Mysteries' n then more 'Mysteries'...
Really this is 'Door to Hell' LOL...
Swayam bhaga then Sharon bhagi then Rey ran behind her n then so on , chasing each other ROFL...
What was this , jumping off a cliff n then disappearing in mid way Ouch...
Rey lost i drunk Kria Day Dreaming...
Yeh kya karing??
Haath pakring n then gayab hoing LOL...
KR ended up in Kria's room n then ahem ahem , lost in each other Embarrassed...
Aww Kria finds Rey's nose 'Cute' , that's Sweet...
Superb part Big smile...
Loved it Heart...
N Take Care Sista Smile.

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Pihu.k11 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 8:27am | IP Logged
Hah.. Finally u got time to update it.. Busy bee Tongue
Ohki.. Dis comparitvely longer in length.. Smile

Ye kya hoin..
Swayam ran aftr kriya.. Sharon aftr swayam n Reyaansh afte sharon n gang aftr Reyaansh.. Bhaago bhaago bcho.. Paharo tk pahunchna hai LOL LOL

Here louisans wer relaxin dat now swayam cud easily confront kriya n thr kriya jumped off a cliff n same wid vicky n simmi.. Bt thn they disappeared!!

Swayam widout givin any thots jumped aftr dem bt agn.. He too dissapered from middle of nowhr.. N it came as realisation to Reyaansh tht somethn is wrong n thus he too jumped n thn evrybody did d same..
It actually us strange tht they all dissapered..
Wht more strange is nobody got hurt.. Kriya vicky n simmi ka toh smjh ata h coz its thr routine bt louisans.. They too dint get hurt.. How is it possible???
Wht was dat white mask???
Wea r they???
Umm.. Heaven?? O any othr planet???
Haila.. Ye kya hoin..
Nil.. He cn neva mend his ways.. Yha b simmi pe line maar rha:p


Kriya was bdly drunk n Reyansh was admirin her in tht state too.. Awwwieee..
Finally vicky saw dem.. Bt ye kya hua
Swicky alag n kriyaansh reachd kriya's room.. Gayab ho gye kya???
Eee.. Finally kriyaansh moments.. C they r destined!
Haha.. Kriya.. She's so adorable.. Usey Reyaansh ka nosi cute lgta h.. She was playin wid it..hehee
Poor Reyaansh.. Bdly embarassed bt still was admirin her.. Thr connection.. I too felt it!
D romance part was writtwn beautifully.. As innocent as pure as our kriyaansh.. I loved it..

Kriya.. Felt attracted towards Reyaansh n he is alrdy drowned in her.. Ye toh hona e tha..
Pr.. Kriya h kya?? Is she alive?? O dead?? Wht r they???
N n wht danger vicky was tokin abt??
Whts gonna hpn??
Umm.. Kriyaansh ka romance Reyaansh ko problm mei daalega kya???
Wht wud happen when kriyam wud come face to face??
Wht abt kriyaansh?
Wht abr swaron??
N viha??
What all wud hpn wid hpn to louisans??????

M so so excited fr d nxt part.. Plz update it soon.. :)

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 9:02am | IP Logged
all parts r amazing
just wow
i really loved it...
nxt part soon
pm when u update

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Wonderful update.. Wanna knw wats this place.. Ahem ahem Kriya and Rey that was hot..

Thanx 4 the pm and update the nxt part soon.. Do pm me whn u update..
Arsha1994 Goldie
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Awesum stry line
it's different
thnx fr d pm
moon_cupcake IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:05am | IP Logged
Amazing loved it
thodsa aur romance deti toh kya jaata tera??
update soon

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Great update
Loved kriyansh
Thnx 4 da pm
yogini64 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
They jumped off the cliff Shocked
insaan nhi hai kya? LOL
ye sab bhi kood gaye . . . . . . Sab pagal hai D'oh
aise kaandd sirf tu hi kar sakti h nims ROFL
is it like some other world? Ermm
yahan bhi kriya drinking . . . . . She is addicted for sure Silly
hehehe . . . . Swayam n vicky alag place pe LOL
& kriyaansh kriya k room me Day Dreaming
ho gye chalu . . . . . I'm loving it Blushing
han devil . . . . Aise hi fataak update chahiye meko Cool

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