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hey there,
this was so beautifully written, i must now check out your other work, heart wrenching.. loved it.

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Thanks a lot to everyone who read and liked my OS. Hug

I hadn't expected so many people would like it. Thanks to Rashmi for sending PMs ^_^

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i am speechless...

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Awesome dear.

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This is very emotonial.I can feel her pain.There are tears in my eyes after reading this.

Good work.Keep it up.

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Posted: 23 June 2012 at 3:59am | IP Logged

OMG

u hav written so beautifull..i could feel d emotions between d lines..d unsaid words behind dose tears...

u hav done agreat job i must say...

very beautiufll peice of work..

too emotional 1...

hats off to u..

love

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Originally posted by Arezo.

Res=) Will edit soon!

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OMG! How I wish it was longer & didn't end at that part. :( I could feel the pain she was going through. You've beautifully presented each & every emotion she has been through, a great bonding with grandma & her friend. Very emotional & good piece of work.
Awh :( I wish she had got a little of happiness she deserved.

great one! keep them coming :D loved it overall :)

Arezo.

Thank you very much Arezo.

BTW, she did get her share of happiness at the end when she finally went to her friend and grandmother.. Embarrassed

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