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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
hey there,
this was so beautifully written, i must now check out your other work, heart wrenching.. loved it.

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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Thanks a lot to everyone who read and liked my OS.  Hug
I hadn't expected so many people would like it. Thanks to Rashmi for sending PMs ^_^
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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
i am speechless...

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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 2:10am | IP Logged
Awesome dear.

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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
This is very emotonial.I can feel her  pain.There are tears in  my eyes after reading this.
Good work.Keep it up.

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Posted: 23 June 2012 at 3:59am | IP Logged
OMG

u hav written so beautifull..i could feel d emotions between d lines..d unsaid words behind dose tears...

u hav done agreat job i must say...

very beautiufll peice of work..

too emotional 1...

hats off to u..

love

Mish 


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Posted: 23 June 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arezo.

Res=) Will edit soon!

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OMG! How I wish it was longer & didn't end at that part. :( I could feel the pain she was going through. You've beautifully presented each & every emotion she has been through, a great bonding with grandma & her friend. Very emotional & good piece of work.
Awh :( I wish she had got a little of happiness she deserved.


great one! keep them coming :D loved it overall :)


Arezo.

Thank you very much Arezo.
BTW, she did get her share of happiness at the end when she finally went to her friend and grandmother.. Embarrassed

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