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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Awesome yaar...
It is sooo painful yet touchy...
U hv described every emotion so nicely that i could feel it...
A really sad story bt   Written amazingly...
Keep it up

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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
hey...very emotional os...
U made me cry...
Y our lyf is nt simple????
Do pm me if u write another story...

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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
very beautifully written 
very emotional 

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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
awwesum Os ...sooo touching ...amazing ...thnxx fo pm

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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
AMAZING
but it was painful

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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
are you really a new writer coz i swear i wont beleive it!!!!
its was such a beautiful update dat i'm speechless and not able to put my feelings in words..
i did read the whole os wid full concentration and it really touched somewhere deep in my heart.
while reading dat para which says ...
I ran away from there to my home, the memories of my happy childhood flashing in front of me, then slowly, the times which almost shook my whole life, came in front of me. The faces I always longed to see, of my parents; the faces I always saw and loved, of Alisha and grandma; the lovely memories; the harsh memories came across me, as I ran across the road. So much noise, the noise of shouting of the people, the noise of the horns of the cars and bikes, the noises ware filled in the air. But in my mind, I had other noises- the memories.
i was in tears..
and once again i'm saying i still dont believe its ur 1st attempt..
loved it dear..and love you and thanks for giving such a beautiful os..
 

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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
thanks a lot rashmi for pm..
 
@ AfflicteD pls add me in ur buddy list so dat i may get the pleasure for reading such a beautiful os/ss/ff in nearby future..

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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
Emotional and nice os

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