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Posted: 14 July 2012 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MeghPiyashi

superb...

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 3:25am | IP Logged

Wow...that was very very intense
and emotional. Beautifully written!

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
I loved the way you described the pain...emotional, yet not overdone...
Something that life is really good at? Betrayal.

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PoojaSheth


Wow...that was very very intense
and emotional. Beautifully written!

Originally posted by ..Ankita..

I loved the way you described the pain...emotional, yet not overdone...
Something that life is really good at? Betrayal.

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Posted: 18 December 2012 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
irony of life well written.
i could feel the pain.

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Hey Dear,

That was so Touching! Heart
I could feel the pain,the betrayal she felt, you are one amazing writer. Approve
Beautifully written! Thumbs Up

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Posted: 11 May 2013 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
i was looking for some OS to read and came across yours bulletin...
really beautifully written...was able to feel the pain that ayesha went through..very sad indeed.

i have to read all of your stories now...you have got me hooked now!

plz do pm me whenever you write more!:-)

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Posted: 27 May 2013 at 3:29am | IP Logged

wow dear 

beautifully written

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