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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged
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OMG! How I wish it was longer & didn't end at that part. :( I could feel the pain she was going through. You've beautifully presented each & every emotion she has been through, a great bonding with grandma & her friend. Very emotional & good piece of work.
Awh :( I wish she had got a little of happiness she deserved.


great one! keep them coming :D loved it overall :)


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Edited by Arezo. - 18 June 2012 at 12:12pm

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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 11:46am | IP Logged
an emotional OS...

u can never know what life throws at u...u just have to accept it...

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Wow...that was very very intense and emotional. Beautifully written!
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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 11:50am | IP Logged
super.
well written..

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sooo emotional os
how can parents treat dere children lyk dis

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nice emotional one

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Nice os...

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