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maaneet SS Ek Duje Ke Vaaste...11pts ( COMPLETED )

sobia4maaneet IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 12:43pm | IP Logged

My First Maaneet SS ...Blushing

Ek Duje Ke Vaaste ..
... an un-conditional bond of pain ...Cry

~~~* PROLOGUE *~~~


Right now I am sitting in a crowd ...

But your name makes me feel proud ...

You aren't with me right now ...

But your words are enough to cool me down ...

Even in this crowd ,I am thinking of you ...

Because all I want is, you ...

Distance doesn't matter to me now ...

I wish I could prove my love somehow ...

You have no idea, how much crazy I am, for you ...

The one who increases my heart beat is, only you ...

You are flawless ...

You are all I need ...

You mean a lot to me ...

And that's how I will let it be ...

I wish I will be like this forever ...

Breathing every second for you,will be my honor ...Heart

They were bound to be together... but yet apart.. far away from each


still they were living for each other ...just for each others happiness...

least they know ...the happiness for which they r living is gone long back...

the day they parted...

but they were being tested... tested by the time .. fate .. destiny ..

and destiny was playing its own game...

they met .. but got seperated...

and then met again ...but fate wasn't in their favour and they parted\

and destiny turned the tables ..made them together again...

but will the time favour them ...??

will they be able to meet each other ...!!

waqt ..halaat ..kismat aur kudrat ke khel mien mil payeinge ye do dill...


     Smile~~* CHARACTER SKETCH *~~Smile

the most desirable business man of india ...
for the whole world .. he is cold hearted ...
for people around him .. he is merciless ...
for his dadi maa .. he is self centered ...
for his wife ... he is a silent saviour n companion ...
for HER ... he is just like a small child ..Embarrassed
carving for love .. who has sealed his heart ...
for anyone to sneak in... n the reason...
un-known to everyone except HER ...
he is THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA ...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
a ruthless, cold hearted, merciless, 
shwerd business man of India ...

a perfect architect designer for the world ...
she is the queen of everyones heart around her...
her smile which can make anyone do anything ...
her beauty which can make God n Devil bow
infront of her ...
her heart ...which is full of love is above all ...
apple of everyones eye ...and HIS angle ...
she can make anyone smile ...
with just a look of her hazel eyes ... and mesmerizing smile ...
and she did made him smile ...
but who will make her smile ...
the only reason of her laughter ...
destiny has snached fron her ... now
will destiny play another game and make the angel smile again ...
she is GEET SINGHANIA ...Embarrassed

Armaan ...Dr. Armaan Malik ...
geet's cousin n more like a brother for her ...
loves her he most in the world ...
n can make world upside down for her ...

Meera Singh known by the interior designing firms in India ...
n Meer for her friends ... serious, reserved by nature ...
but can go to any extent for her friends geet and armaan ..
n for their friendship ...

Daai Jaan ... geet's gurgion n armaan's aunt
love geet even more than armaan n
wants her to get married soon ...

Aditya Chaterjee ( ADI ) KC's CEO n
maan's only n best friend ...NOW
the only person who knows everything about
Maan inside out ...and respects him alot ..

Dadi Maa ..(Savitri Devi Khurana ) loves her
grand son the most as he is the last memorial of
her dead son n daughter-in-law ...
worried for his happiness in the last days of her life ..

two more characters are there but they will be revealed as the story goes on ...

...let me tell u all its a short story of about 6 to 8 parts only but with alot of twists n turn ...its my first attempt so ... plzzz friends pardon me for my mistakes  ...SmileWink

part 1 on page 3 ...n part 2 on page 7 being a newbee cant post the link ...Cry

thnxxx a ton Varsha di ...Hugwithout ur help i wont be able to do this ...Smile

n secondly my bestest friend ZARA HeartHeart

enjoy and do give me ur response  ..SmileEmbarrassed


PART 1 :-

PART 2 :-

PART 3 :-

PART 4 :-

PART 5 :-

PART 6 :-

PART 7 :-

PART 8 :-

PART 9 :-

PART 10 :-

Part 11 (last) :-

hopefully u will like this bond of maaneet ...

enjoy reading n plsss do give me ur response ...Smile

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 19 July 2012 at 4:08pm

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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
congrates sweety for ur first sure u gona rock wid thisBig smile...
me dancingDancing...chalo finally u did it...
superb character sounds damn intresting...
maneet love each other yet apart and craving for their loveCry...
me so much excited for this continue soonSmile...aur ha mere tarah wait mat karwana sabkoLOL...
wish u gr8 success wid this...looking forward to read more from uBig smile...
love u lots...n teri help kaise na karti...after all u are my swt lil sisTongue...keep rockingHug

Edited by mahimaneet - 19 June 2012 at 10:53am

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nats0101 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
nice start
do continue

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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
wow great start waiting 

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Waiting Smile Smile

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Edited by KasiKasi - 15 June 2012 at 10:03pm

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nice start...add me in..

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Nyshh concept.. I jst lovd d poem vry mch..its realy superb.

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