Intoxicated (removed) - Page 7

Blimey

Unexpected or what!!

So basically they love each other??

Hmmm can't wait for more

I absolutely love this! PM me updates at once! And I like! The snarky, cussing Khushi: I like! :D

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oh god I wrote this huge ass comment and I just deleted it  when I was editing it😡😡 Edited by CDlove - 11 years ago

I did not see that one coming so you have one less person to be worried about  being in you head! :P

The plot is scandalous and I'm loving it!!

Your Khushi is awesomeness personified! And Arnav is as always hot. And the cockiness suits him. Glad to see Aman here. Shyamu is once again a Kameena. Is Anjali his poor wife? Damn! Cant wait for more.

okay im very very confused

can some one explain whats happening

who was the fellow in the 1st chapter? plz dont say shyaam

Two chapters and I say this is one of the best stories I've read. Lady, this enthralled me. I can't help but marvel at and imagine the whole set-up. This is epic! 

Damn woman!

Well color me surprised!

I didn't think Arnav would be the betrayed husband, so not the type, but I did think he would be the cheater!

Aw man! You stole my secret affair, forbidden sex fantasy! No fair Arisai!

But, I loved it!

This is so sooo different!

Don't listen to any *ahem* nice people with *ahem* nice opinions.

Write it the way you want to!

Cause...*drumroll please* You're sexy and you know it!!!😆


Edited by BlueMystique - 11 years ago

All I have to say is... WOW.

Okay so, I had to read it twice to sorta get it and still I'm confused LOL.

Beginning is awesome... I usually don't read stories like this because it's just not my type but good start!

Also, I have to mention.. I read alooot of fanfictions and I've never seen a story like this dude! :)

That's what we call a Mahatwist! both are screwing up Jha?

Confused= YES