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.Sandy.

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Posted: 29 June 2012 at 11:42am | IP Logged
HELLO


So here i come with chapter one,
i am really over joyed seeing your responses.
i hope u like this one too.
this one is very interesting story i hope u like this concept too.
CHARACTERS AND PROLOGUE

Chapter one

Khushi it's time to go home. shop owner Mrs wadia said. Khushi obideintly got up from her desk and picked  little one from baby cot and carry him on her hips. she walk out and shut the small boutique's door.

Tomowrrow mrs wadia new stock will be in and i'll try to add tags to them and rearange then in perfect manner. Mrs Wadia smiled good khushi i loved your spirits how you work my child.
Mrs Wadia is christian women. she live here in goa from long time now. Her husband Mr wadia died five years ago. she didn't have any children. 


She runs a small boutique but her boutique was famous for exclusive work.
Khushi too design some pieces for her. 
Her recent design was quiet famous and her boutique got many orders related to that specific design. 

-*-*-


She walk to her apartment which about half an hour walk far from boutique. She preffer to walk back home to safe money. From that money she can buy something for her son Aryan


She reach her apartment. It wasn't much big enough with 1.5 rooms small living room and adjoining kitchen but khushi settled whole aprtment as her small heaven on earth, this was Mrs wadia's apartment. Her rent was being deducted from her salary. 


She opened the door and enter and walk inside. She left little toddler on floor and walk to phone and switch on her phone message box.

There was just one message she played the message and walkinside towards kitchen. She fold her hairs in messy bun. 

Ari (ARYAN) wait baby i am coming with dinner. 1 year and 6 months aryan was crawling on floor crying as he was hungry now. 


*I AM GOING TO ADD LITTLE TODDLERS VIEWS TOO IT WILL BE FUN TO READ THEM.

Mummy i am very hungry!!!!

See baby Ma is here with your dinner. She took little one in and  sat on sofa made him lie in her lap and fed him. He cried, he struggle to make an escape from this kitcheri but vain Ma made him eat forcefully.

Mummy no ...plzz ..no this isn't much good, daily u made me eat this same food, 
OH god why these mummy never listen to us, they truly take advantages of us wen we can't speak to refuse having this same tasteless food.

After making him eat she lulled him to sleep and made him sleep on bed but putting pillows as barriar so he won't fall down.


She changed her messy clothes as her little one eat his dinner like he fighting a battle.


She took quick shower and change into simple light blue cotton sari and sat on table to eat her dinner. She don't feel like eating something mostly at night but she has too as her little baby need her milk she avoid having dinners sometime coz she don't feel like eating alone.


Her life was all alone now. Her parents left her long ago. orphanage where she was grown up...she has to leave it. A tear role down her eyes. She misses mother marry alot, she was just like her mother. Her friends her studies everything was left behind. All because of one person. 


He ruined her life but was living his life satisfactorily. He snatch everything from her...but he gave her the thing which no one can give her. Her Aryan. Little bundle of joy.


-*-*-



DELHi

Arnie darling Lavanaya swayed her hips sexily walk to him locked her arm with his she kissed his cheek lovingly. I missed you alot.

Lavanaya i too missed you darling. He kissed her at coner of her lips. 

You too make a good pair anna mutual friend of Arnav and Lavanaya spoke. She usually add such cheesy comments so Arnav could offer him some shoots contracts and some time does too.

Lavanaya she help her to get contracts by using her sources. Lavanaya was successful top model. Every designer was desperate to take her as their show stoppers.

Thanku anna Lavanaya replied almost throwing her body weight on arnav. Excuse me arnav left both girls there and move to his friends.


Hey arnie darling did you missed you la baby alot. Rahul burst out laughing. Arnav smiled Crap she is too hectic to handle sometimes.

oh i can understand it these models are just looking for top designers to take them in their laps so she could show how cute, how romantic how biggest witches they are Akash gritted throw his teeth. 

Oh come on akash here i am the controller not her and i won't even let her control.

Arnav if you don't like her then why are you linked up to her. Akash asked him.

Well Well Akash i am not an emotional fool i want my company to be leading one in fashion industry and for that i could go to any extent.

I don't like to loose and i love to rule.


*Flashback*
You can't rule everything in this world
Ofcourse i can rule Arnav said 

one day you will realise everything can't be in your controland that day you will remember my words.
i will never let day to rise.

she smiled taunting him with her silent smile.
He looked at her little dumbo founded but recovered soon
Don't forget i am Arnav Singh Raizada
Don't forget Raziada there is a God who control what you can not...!!!
*flashback ends*

He shook his head to get rid of these thoughts!!!

Don't waste your time on stupid thoughts Raizada he compose himself and walk ahead. 




Ok how was it???
if you don't like aryan's view or u thought they are mature enough for kid and want me to stop please don't hesitate do let me know.
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Edited by sandy1 - 15 September 2012 at 9:24am

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Posted: 29 June 2012 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Update soon
What happened between them

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Posted: 29 June 2012 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
Amazing want to know water happen between them

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Posted: 29 June 2012 at 3:33pm | IP Logged
Amazing ..Cant wait to read more 
I feel Arnav did not love Khushi he just used her ..Please update soon with long updates

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Posted: 29 June 2012 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
it was amazing including intense!Day Dreaming
PM me when you update Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 June 2012 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 29 June 2012 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
Lovely update pls cont soon i like aryan thoughs hehe

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Posted: 29 June 2012 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
So glad you updated.  This story got my attention because she contacted him again ..Based on teaser and prologue...I am very curious as to what makes her do that, I am sure it is a majboori.  He of course is arrogant...but I know he will repent or fall.  Fascinating.

I personally do not like the baby talking or thoughts, what may work better is for Khushi to may be have thoughts such as the baby probably does not like eating the same dinner every night etc.

Look forward to reading more.


Edited by Anamika100 - 29 June 2012 at 4:44pm

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