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Chp 2: Maanvi Chaudary
Manvi sat at the centre of the stage, her eyes on the man that had bought so much sorrow to her sister... And as much love as he had for her at that moment, it was equalled by her only in resentment.

She stared at him, hoping that her fury was recognised. While viren had spent many nights drying his mothers tears, it was jeevika who was left to clean up her husbands tears after they married. Everybody knew how much manvi loved her sister. Jeevikas sadness was manvis sadness. And in his absence Virat managed to give so much of it, that manvi was sure she would never be able to forgive him, even if Viren did.

Manvi stared deep into the crowd, she was always nervous before a performance and this time was no different. The irony was that before her sister had married his brother, manvi had idolised him... Like Many of his other fans, she couldnt resist his dashing princely good looks, he had a jawline so sharp it looked like it could cut glass and eyes that were so soft and kind that despite his angry music they spoke to her on a personal level. They told her a melancholy story of sadness, heartbreak and a man who had a troubled past which he was trying to hide from.

That was of course, before she knew him. When jeevika had married viren, manvi saw a broken family that had welcomed her sister in. She learnt the story of a man who used his brother to get ahead in his career, and then decided he didn't want to know him any longer. she despised the fact that virat so easily cut off the relationship between him and his mother, while in her childhood, manvi spent countless nights crying and wishing she had her parents there to share her sorrows and little joys. She was annoyed at the fact that he had so easily got his dream and in the process, forgotten everybody who had helped him to do so.

Manvi was unbelievably excited to meet him at her sisters wedding, viren had been so certain that he will turn up, that everybody began to notice the joy in his eyes and voice as he spoke in the days leading to the big day. He would constantly reminisce about the good days when him and his brother would get up to no good terrorising the neighbours and the kids in their locality and was eager to introduce virat to his wife and her family.

Manvi had thought she loved him then, and in her childish fantasy thought up a world where her life was a stage in which she could forever dance to his tunes, a stage that belonged only to him and her... He would be the music and her... The movement.

The love she had thought she had, was short lived. Virat didnt call nor send any notice but just decided he would not go. Viren tried hard to smile and make excuses but everybody could sense the disappointment in his voice as he spoke. Manvis delusion of love was shattered, the 'happiest day' of jeevikas life was one of the saddest things manvi had ever seen. Vanshika, jeevikas mother in law, welcomed the guests with sorrowful puffy eyes that had spent the nights crying for her sons, and although everything was beautiful as it met the eyes... It was like a mirage, just a delusion... It was a colorless rainbow. people went through the motions but they were not filled with the colors of bliss and joy that manvi had hoped would paint her sisters wedding.

Long before she had met virat, she HATED him with all the strength shed ever known, and as he stared at her from across the stage and all her resentment came flooding back...she realised it was the first time she ever felt that way.

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Hey guysss!! Thanks to everybody who liked my post... I know m pretty annoying but m travelling soon so i wanna get my story going! Please comment if i should continue![/B]

Chapter 3: Meeting 1

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Virat watched in awe as the angel on the stage elegantly twirled and leaped with the grace of a mermaid in water. The candles illuminating every angle of her perfectly seductive body. she used her dainty body in such a way that by the end of the performance, virat had memorised every angle of it... A memory he knew would not easily be forgotten.

It was his idea of perfection, a miracle that bought meaning to his life, pleasure to his eyes and lyrics to his music.

Virat sat through the whole performance besotted by the beauty on the stage... With every movement she made, from the point of her perfect toes to the lifting of her perfect hand, she told the audience a story. A
Story that was not a sad one but rather one of anguish and desperation. She was angry about something. Her face tilted upwards towards the candlelight and her eyes revealed several shades of brown, beautiful sandy deserts, sweet tasting chocolates and cups of coffee framed by dark lashes that virat Couldnt help but lose himself in...

Was she looking at him or had he lost himself so far in her eyes that he had developed the illusion they were meant solely for him? He wondered quietly to himself but shook his head at the thought, how could he be so stupid? She was putting on a show why would she look at him?! He smiled quietly to himself putting the thought down to wishful thinking. He was so caught up in the show that he failed to recognise he was alone on the table and everybody else was standing clapping for a show that had ended a few minutes ago.

Virat sighed desperately, he wished it would never end and that he would forever be caught up in that moment where he glanced into her eyes and everything had fallen into place.

As viren and jeevika sat down and waited patiently for maanvi to come to the table, virat excused himself feigning a phone call and made his way behind the curtains to find the girl who had made him feel like he was dreaming and when he realized that it was a reality, he decided right then that this reality was much better than any dream hed ever had.
Being as famous as he was, virat had no problems getting backstage. He knocked on the first door he saw and prayed that she would be inside.
After receiving no reply, he entered anyway. The quiet room consisted of a dresser, a small pink sofa and a few rails on which hung the gold lengha that was worn on stage... Virat realised he was in the right room so he sat patiently waiting on the small sofa, he figured she would have to come out sooner or later and he would wait forever if he had to.

Suddenly he heard the distant sound of a tap being shut off... He stood up. A door he hadnt realised was there, opened and as she walked out of it dressed in a stunning ashes of rose anarkali suit with her hair falling effortlessly down her small back pinned to the side with tiny silver pins, virat realised he was "starstruck". he stood gaping at the girl who looked even more beautiful offstage and up close he noticed a small beauty mark on the right side of her sculpted nose and wondered naughtily how many more she had on her body. As his thoughts drifted, he failed to hear the girl calling his name as she waved her hands in his face "VIRAT!! VIRAAAT!! HELLOOO ARE YOU DEAF!?!"

'So she knows who i am' virat thought proudly to himself 'this shouldnt be too hard, she must be a fan of my music...everybody knows me' with that virat took hold of the girls slender arms and turned her body trapping her between him and the sofa... He looked deep into her confused eyes and placed his lips on hers...as he leaned in to kiss her, he noticed that she smelt of berries and Jasmine a smell that would forever haunt his existance , it bought a sweetness that was never present in his life before today, before this moment. In order to heal, he needed her. BADLY.

As he kissed her he was so sure of himself that it was not until he was on the floor that he realised that he'd been rejected "HOW DARE YOU! YOU THINK BECAUSE YOUR FAMOUS THAT EVERYONE WILL AUTOMATICALLY FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU?! YOU DONT EVEN KNOW ME , YOU DISGUSTING EXCUSE FOR A HUMAN BEING!... GET OUT NOW!" her voice was soft like the sound of musical rain even in her anger, virat looked at her and smiled.

He wouldnt give up, not that easily.



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Awesome, I was completely lost in your story, their
emotions everything, it is really beautiful!

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wow! nice update and please do continue :D

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Wow...amazing
do cntinue soon and pm me

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Awesome 1. U should continue dis. Pm me when u update.

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