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Dancing Queen! CHAPTER 25 part 2 !! hello again.!

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Posted: 10 June 2012 at 5:51pm | IP Logged
Hey guyss!!! Im kinda new to the forum and have been spending ages being inspired by ur stories, im tryna write my own and am really hopin nd praying u enjoy it! Read it and let me know plzz ... Comment nd leave ur love (or ur hate) be honest!


He stood at the door reluctant to get out of the car... once again his brother had managed to win the argument and virat was to drive his brother and his wife to the function. Hed just come back two weeks ago from his UK tour and didn't make it to his brothers wedding... this was therefore the first htime he would meet his bhabi as it was her sister who was performing at a local charity function to raise money for cancer awareness and she was adamant that it would be the best place for virat to be introduced to her sister, even though her husband begged to differ.

Viren understood his brother better than anybody else.virat was the typical cookie cutter rockstar in the eyes of the media with tremendously good looks and an equally bad attitude, but viren had only known the guy before the heartbreak, virats ex girlfriend maya had broken his heart leaving him miserable broken and in despair. He had sunken into a deep depression secluding himself from the world... Virat had figured that if he forgot about the world, the world would forget about him. When shed chosen stardom over him he couldnt describe how he felt but as soon as he got home he feltlike ripping his own heart out just so he wouldnt have to face the pain it was causing. He wantedto cry, but couldnt He just felt an immense cloud of depression sink over him and he couldnt escape. He wasnt dead, but he couldnt live either. It had taken 3 years for virat to even consider getting back into the music business and when he mentioned it to viren it wasnt even 3 months before his elder brother had some pulled strings and got him out of the city and in the heart of the USA recording his first hit.
When hed got to the USA, virat had decided to get rid of his past by cutting off all relations, even the one with his bhai which he now regretted.viren was so willing to forgive virat for disappearing that whenever virat looked at his brothers face he was consumed with the feeling of an overwhelming guilt... After he left, it was viren who took control drying his mothers tears late at night and answering curious society members whenever they asked. It was 2 weeks ago that virat had decided he would swallow his pride, he had been in the papers for attacking his staff at the record label after a drunken escapade and after being released hed come home to a message from his worried brother who had called to let him know that his wife was expecting a baby and viren would never forgive him if he wasnt there to help them through it.
Virat saw jeevika for the first time as she stepped out of the house looking stunning in a violet and pink sari her silky smooth hair framing her small face and he understood immediately why his brother was so smitten with her she was absolutely gorgeous... he still couldn't be bothered to turn up to the function, it was a waste of his time totally not his scene plus...he would feel like a third wheel it was undeniable.
Virat listened to jeevika making small talk as they made their way to the hall... She spoke of Her sister most of the way, her antics, her love for life and the joy she brought to everyone she met, virat could help but envy 'maanvi' even before hed met her, even though shed been raised solely by her sister due to the death of her parents while virat had the love and support of His whole family, hed never bought anything but shame and misery to his family. As his bhabi spoke with the joy and pace of an 8 year old at a funfair, virat sighed miserably... He REALLY REALLY did not want to be there. He handed his keys to the valet and shuffled into the hall quietly behind his brother and his wife. They were a few minutes late and the show was about to begin, they sat on their assigned seats and virat looked pensively at the empty chair next to him silently counting the minutes before he would go back to the solitude of his empty room.

The lights suddenly dimmed and the stage glistened with the brightness of 1000 candles, it was decorated in golds and dusky browns, and even in his mood virat couldnt help but to notice the charm of the hall, it reflected something he wished he had in his But the contentment he felt was heightened by the introduction of a girl onto the stage and while she was not alone, it was her who captivated everybody. Dressed in a gold lengha with heavy silver embridery, she let her raven black tresses tumble down her back. She sat on the centre of the stage and positioned her small yet perfect frame in a crouching position using her beautiful hands to arrange her skirt around her delicate feet...with every movement virat could hear the clinking of her shimmery bangles each paving a path that led directly to his heart which before this moment thought it would not and could not beat for anyone else.

As she sat there with the grace of a swan prepared to begin her performance, she looked directly at virat... Although he had already fallen in love by the mere presence of the angel upon the stage, he could not help but be stunned by the beauty of the girl. Her eyes were pools of molten chocolate, her lips tinted a shimmery red were perfect and her nose smooth and delicate although she was not as fair as jeevika, her face held a radiance that could not be matched by the stars in the sky, she radiated With one look, all the anger of his rock and roll lifestyle vanished and was replaced by the spinetingling sound of her anklets. While her eyes spoke a million volumes, her face was a picture of peace the kind of peace that virat had decided he could not live without.

Chapter 2: manvi chaudary + chapter 3 meeting 1-page 2
Chapter 4: sleepless nights PG 3
Chaptr 5: unexpected visit PG 5
Chapter 6: unwanted memories pg 7
Chapter 7: space PG 9
Chapter 8: revenge PG 12
Chapter 9: shameful secrets pg 17
Chapter 10: guilty memories pg 21
Chapter 11: Dinner Time pg 25
Chapter 12: turning tables PG 27
Chapter 13: past n present PG 31
Chapter 14: truth hurts PG 34
Chapter 15: dangerous games PG 37
Chapter 16:perfectly unperfect PG 40
Chapter 17:Running away PG 43 chapter 19: losing hope. PG 50
Chapter 20: love & hate PG 53
Chapter 21: staying strong PG 56
Chapter 22: broken chain PG 59
Chapter 23: Hopelessly devoted PG 64
Chapter 24: bottled secrets pg 67
chapter 25: sorry is never enough pg 72
chapter 25:part 2 pg 74

Edited by Kimmy - 23 July 2013 at 10:54am

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Posted: 10 June 2012 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
nice strt!!!!Clap
snds intrstin do pm mewen u updt!!!!!!!!!!Smile

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Posted: 10 June 2012 at 7:15pm | IP Logged
Loved it!!! You totally got me hooked! I really like your writing style! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Posted: 10 June 2012 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
That was so descriptive. Loved it. Continue soon Smile

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I really enjoyed that...Please PM me when you continue Embarrassed

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Wow yar pls cntinue and pm me

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Posted: 10 June 2012 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
really nice plz continue n pm me when u updateBig smile

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great start, i loved it Smile thanx for the pm

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