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My misplaced Diary (Poem)

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Posted: 10 June 2012 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Hey Guys, We are new to the Writers Corner...Wrote a poem so thought of sharing it with you all..Waiting for your precious feedback..
 
My misplaced Diary
 
My diary was misplaced
It was totally displaced
I looked high and low
In each and every row
But it was no where to be found
And my heart started to pound
Cause it was very dear
And a memorial of the past year
 
 
-Shivangi and Shivika (The twins in town)

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Posted: 10 June 2012 at 8:44am | IP Logged
nice, wish it had been longer!Clap

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Posted: 10 June 2012 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by medhasainanee

nice, wish it had been longer!Clap
 
Thanks Medha!!!Big smile
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Posted: 10 June 2012 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Nicely written. Should have made it longer though. Smile

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Posted: 10 June 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
loved it dearies... make it a bit longer

Edited by Kriyansh_jaanu - 10 June 2012 at 9:01am

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Posted: 10 June 2012 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sawyer_Tom

Nicely written. Should have made it longer though. Smile
 
Thanks...Yup should've been longer but loss of words, you cant really help it can you..

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Posted: 10 June 2012 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kriyansh_jaanu

loved it dearies...
 
Thanks!!!
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I'm not a much a poem person but still nicely written.

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